I'm new to this, so don't expect anything too great. Just let me know what I can improve on. My English teacher said that I'm a fairly good writer, so I'll just take a shot at it. (I couldn't think of a very good name for this story. I spent forever thinking about a good name for this, but the best name that came to me was "Koga, Janine, and Stan.")
Chapter 1
Stan was rudely awoken by what he assumed to be the cry of a Dodrio. He rubbed his eyes and sat up in bed, shielding his eyes from the sunlight intruding through the window. Then he checked the alarm clock.
Crap.
Stan jumped out of bed and threw on random clothes lying on the floor.
"No... no... I can't afford to be late again..." Stan said to himself. He didn't realize how loud he was, and he woke up Devin. Devin was Stan's roomate.
"Cut that racket out..." Devin said, still half asleep. Stan just ignored him, since he really had no time to pay any attention to Devin right now.
Devin was shorter than Stan, but with a much stronger and brawny body. He had short, black hair that stuck up in the front and had a very cocky attitude.
Stan was out the door in seconds. He got alot of funny looks from other people at the university as he dashed to physics class, his hair sticking out in all directions. It was nothing Stan wasn't used to, he got funny looks all the time.
Stan was nineteen years old at the time, with purple- hued hair and a long, skinny body. He was lucky enough to get into the University of Fuchia, but he most likely wouldn't be a student there for much longer.
Stan doesn't have much to be proud of, but what holds him together is the fact that he is the son of Koga. He had looked up to his father for years, and wanted to be exactly like him. A gym leader. Better yet, one of the Elite Four.
The day that Stan's father has been accepted into the Elite 4, Stan knew he would become the Fuchia gym leader. But, Koga gave the honor to Stan's sister.
Janine was perfect in every way to Stan, and to his father. She was a superior battler, and very intelligent as well.
Unlike Stan, who was flunking out of college and what few Pokemon he had weren't very good at fighting.
Over the years, Stan had become the forgotten child. His father was disappointed of him, and Stan knew it. That's why nobody even knew that Stan existed. He wasn't a celebrity like his father or sister.
But none of this discouraged Stan to chase after his dreams- to one day challenge his sister and become the Fuchia gym leader. He knew that someday his life of being unloved and belittled would come to an end.
But for now, he was stuck in what he beleived to be Hell.
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Chapter 2
Stan sat on the curb outside the physics building. He messed up, badly.
His physics professor had kicked him out for being late again. Good old Mr. Munley.
Stan knew that he wouldn't last for another week in college. Struck with sorrow, he stared at one of his poke balls.
"Someday," Stan said softly, "you're going to help me become the gym leader."
He paused, and then pressed the button in the center of the poke ball. A bright light flashed. Then a small, purple pokemon with pinchers appeared in front of him.
Scorupi was Stan's first pokemon. Unlike most trainers who received either Bulbasaur, Charmander, or Squitle as their first pokemon, Stan received Scorupi from the Great Marsh in Sinnoh.
Stan remembered the day he had turned ten. He ran as fast as he could to the nearest pokemon lab, more excited than he had ever been. But when he got there, there were no more pokemon. Janine had taken the last one. Since Stan and Janine were twins, their birthdays were on the same date.
Several weeks later, Stan's family went on vacation to Pastoria City in Sinnoh. His father let him catch a pokemon in the Great Marsh, only because he felt sorry for him. And the pokemon that Stan caught was Scorupi. Because of his young age, he decided to give his new Scorupi the nickname: Purple. And it stuck.
Stan and Purple stared into each others eyes for a moment and then Stan said "Purple, someday you and I are going to be gym leaders. You'll be so tough, we'll be the hardest gym to beat!"
Purple just grunted and then nodded. Stan often gave him these confidence boosters, but they never helped. Purple had begun to feel weak and depressed over the past few years.
Several college girls walked by, all of them walking with skitties on leashes. They all pointed and giggled at Stan. He still looked like he had just rolled out of bed.
Stan sighed, and then put Purple back into the poke ball. He stood up, and heard his stomache rumble. Time for lunch. He then checked his wallet, and pulled out a dollar and a nickel. Nothing else.
"Oh boy," Stan said. He had to ask Janine for some money.
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If you guys think this is OK, then I'll make chapter 3 soon. Thanks.
Chapter 1
Stan was rudely awoken by what he assumed to be the cry of a Dodrio. He rubbed his eyes and sat up in bed, shielding his eyes from the sunlight intruding through the window. Then he checked the alarm clock.
Crap.
Stan jumped out of bed and threw on random clothes lying on the floor.
"No... no... I can't afford to be late again..." Stan said to himself. He didn't realize how loud he was, and he woke up Devin. Devin was Stan's roomate.
"Cut that racket out..." Devin said, still half asleep. Stan just ignored him, since he really had no time to pay any attention to Devin right now.
Devin was shorter than Stan, but with a much stronger and brawny body. He had short, black hair that stuck up in the front and had a very cocky attitude.
Stan was out the door in seconds. He got alot of funny looks from other people at the university as he dashed to physics class, his hair sticking out in all directions. It was nothing Stan wasn't used to, he got funny looks all the time.
Stan was nineteen years old at the time, with purple- hued hair and a long, skinny body. He was lucky enough to get into the University of Fuchia, but he most likely wouldn't be a student there for much longer.
Stan doesn't have much to be proud of, but what holds him together is the fact that he is the son of Koga. He had looked up to his father for years, and wanted to be exactly like him. A gym leader. Better yet, one of the Elite Four.
The day that Stan's father has been accepted into the Elite 4, Stan knew he would become the Fuchia gym leader. But, Koga gave the honor to Stan's sister.
Janine was perfect in every way to Stan, and to his father. She was a superior battler, and very intelligent as well.
Unlike Stan, who was flunking out of college and what few Pokemon he had weren't very good at fighting.
Over the years, Stan had become the forgotten child. His father was disappointed of him, and Stan knew it. That's why nobody even knew that Stan existed. He wasn't a celebrity like his father or sister.
But none of this discouraged Stan to chase after his dreams- to one day challenge his sister and become the Fuchia gym leader. He knew that someday his life of being unloved and belittled would come to an end.
But for now, he was stuck in what he beleived to be Hell.
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Chapter 2
Stan sat on the curb outside the physics building. He messed up, badly.
His physics professor had kicked him out for being late again. Good old Mr. Munley.
Stan knew that he wouldn't last for another week in college. Struck with sorrow, he stared at one of his poke balls.
"Someday," Stan said softly, "you're going to help me become the gym leader."
He paused, and then pressed the button in the center of the poke ball. A bright light flashed. Then a small, purple pokemon with pinchers appeared in front of him.
Scorupi was Stan's first pokemon. Unlike most trainers who received either Bulbasaur, Charmander, or Squitle as their first pokemon, Stan received Scorupi from the Great Marsh in Sinnoh.
Stan remembered the day he had turned ten. He ran as fast as he could to the nearest pokemon lab, more excited than he had ever been. But when he got there, there were no more pokemon. Janine had taken the last one. Since Stan and Janine were twins, their birthdays were on the same date.
Several weeks later, Stan's family went on vacation to Pastoria City in Sinnoh. His father let him catch a pokemon in the Great Marsh, only because he felt sorry for him. And the pokemon that Stan caught was Scorupi. Because of his young age, he decided to give his new Scorupi the nickname: Purple. And it stuck.
Stan and Purple stared into each others eyes for a moment and then Stan said "Purple, someday you and I are going to be gym leaders. You'll be so tough, we'll be the hardest gym to beat!"
Purple just grunted and then nodded. Stan often gave him these confidence boosters, but they never helped. Purple had begun to feel weak and depressed over the past few years.
Several college girls walked by, all of them walking with skitties on leashes. They all pointed and giggled at Stan. He still looked like he had just rolled out of bed.
Stan sighed, and then put Purple back into the poke ball. He stood up, and heard his stomache rumble. Time for lunch. He then checked his wallet, and pulled out a dollar and a nickel. Nothing else.
"Oh boy," Stan said. He had to ask Janine for some money.
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If you guys think this is OK, then I'll make chapter 3 soon. Thanks.
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