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Going to actually be a short one this time. first, nitpicks and ambiguous comments,
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Aid.
Depends on quite how British you want to go with this next point. An alternative would be a construction like "Edgar Alben, eighth Earl of Warrick", or "Edgar Alben, eighth Lord Warrick". I forget just when this construction became popular, but you see it turn up in much later centuries.
This is the sort of chapter that really invites sensible comment in context of future chapters, I think. I'm probably going to refer back to this one at a later date
"Always so difficult, mother."
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aide
Aid.
Lord Edgar Alben VIII!"
Depends on quite how British you want to go with this next point. An alternative would be a construction like "Edgar Alben, eighth Earl of Warrick", or "Edgar Alben, eighth Lord Warrick". I forget just when this construction became popular, but you see it turn up in much later centuries.
This is the sort of chapter that really invites sensible comment in context of future chapters, I think. I'm probably going to refer back to this one at a later date