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So I’m at the point where I’m preparing for one of the first major plot twists of my main story.
Up until now, hints have been dropped to the reader that a certain character isn’t who they claim to be.
The issue I have is dropping a give away or crumbs in the story to the other characters.
The character in question has been a spy since they were 7 years old - and have done countless missions. Made no mistakes. They are at the point in their life where their real persona doesn’t exist to them. “Who is Antonio Hamilton anyway? What sets them apart from who I am pretending to be? Does he even exist anymore?”
He often limits how strong he is in battle and has to act stupider than he really is. He has made “friends” as his persona. The way he’d put it is: “My false persona is friends with you. I on the other hand have no feelings towards you whatsoever. It is like we have never met.” Ie: he treats his personas as separate parts of himself.
Any advice on how to have him get caught would be fantastic. Bear in mind, being caught as a spy has horrific consequences - so the mistake will have to 100% have that in mind.
I appreciate the help in advance and I can give more information if needed!
Up until now, hints have been dropped to the reader that a certain character isn’t who they claim to be.
The issue I have is dropping a give away or crumbs in the story to the other characters.
The character in question has been a spy since they were 7 years old - and have done countless missions. Made no mistakes. They are at the point in their life where their real persona doesn’t exist to them. “Who is Antonio Hamilton anyway? What sets them apart from who I am pretending to be? Does he even exist anymore?”
He often limits how strong he is in battle and has to act stupider than he really is. He has made “friends” as his persona. The way he’d put it is: “My false persona is friends with you. I on the other hand have no feelings towards you whatsoever. It is like we have never met.” Ie: he treats his personas as separate parts of himself.
Any advice on how to have him get caught would be fantastic. Bear in mind, being caught as a spy has horrific consequences - so the mistake will have to 100% have that in mind.
I appreciate the help in advance and I can give more information if needed!