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Chapter 40 thoughts (but not 41 yet as I am s l o w e):
Accidental capital?
"I don't have limbs Manny that's pretty insensitive"
typo detected
Or?Unless you mean the proud Vibrava Clan
it was at that moment i realized
this doggo was to be protected
NEEEEEEEEERRRRRRD
I repeat.
NEEEEEEEEERRRRRRD
Accidental comma?
wtf star yuo cant say that
purple haze huh hehe is that a hehe is that hehehe a hehe a j-jojo reference
activate F L O O F
Missing word / rest of sentence?
i-it's not like i'm grateful or anything... b-baka
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The return of the Aerodactyl really reminded me that there's a whole continent full of non-mutant non-spirit non-Mystics just living normal lives in this world, lol. Kinda surprised I even remembered the guy - though then again not that much, as if I recall right, there was some memory jogging about him along the way. So, good call on that.
Interested to see what this character will bring with him, intrigued by the possibility of a societal problem (possibility, as Jerry could just be one of those who blame their own mistakes and flaws on society, not that I'd have experience with any such characters myself cough cough ahem) and finally of course really happy to see some more Enet again! 100% best girl.
We should Be ready for that.”
Accidental capital?
Manny shrugged. “I dunno. Maybe she feels safer since she’s got a Type advantage. I know she hates goin’ through Anam. Fits the pattern. Besides, I dunno. I don’t mind. It’s kinda cute. Don’cha just wanna scratch under her chin?”
Zena stared. “…No.”
"I don't have limbs Manny that's pretty insensitive"
“I thought he was supposed to get all his mrmories back.
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After half of him spending almost all of his life as a Trapinch of Vibrava,
Or?
Rhys brought his paw to his mouth to hide his smile, but a chuckle betrayed him. He looked at Gawen in the eyes for the first time, the Lucario’s eyes brimming with a strange light. His paw migrated to his eyes next, tilting his head back. The little chuckles got a bit louder, accented by sniffles.
“Pops,” he repeated. “Oh, such an informal nickname, Gahi. And you’ll never call me that as yourself, will you?” He laughed again, his mouth some strange combination of a smile and frown. “Oh! Pops…”
it was at that moment i realized
this doggo was to be protected
“I don’t.” Gahi snorted. “See ya, nerd!”
NEEEEEEEEERRRRRRD
Maybe The Steel Chemist—he couldn’t remember a few of the volumes, so it would be worth reading again. Or maybe he could reread Perish Book? That sounded better.
I repeat.
NEEEEEEEEERRRRRRD
The rest of the day, passed with little happening.
Accidental comma?
“Okay, okay,” Star sighed. “You two Luvdiscs can go.
wtf star yuo cant say that
The forest was an odd, hazy purple color.
“Wh-what?!” Enet’s fur puffed up, making her look twice her size.
activate F L O O F
Owen turned his attention back to “Please. Just… think about it, okay?” Owen said. “I know where you’ll be.”
Missing word / rest of sentence?
“…It’s Jeremy,” the head said. “Just call me Jerry.”
Owen nodded. “I’m glad I could help, Jerry.”
“Don’t celebrate just yet,” he growled. “If I have to live like this forever, just kill me.”
i-it's not like i'm grateful or anything... b-baka
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The return of the Aerodactyl really reminded me that there's a whole continent full of non-mutant non-spirit non-Mystics just living normal lives in this world, lol. Kinda surprised I even remembered the guy - though then again not that much, as if I recall right, there was some memory jogging about him along the way. So, good call on that.
Interested to see what this character will bring with him, intrigued by the possibility of a societal problem (possibility, as Jerry could just be one of those who blame their own mistakes and flaws on society, not that I'd have experience with any such characters myself cough cough ahem) and finally of course really happy to see some more Enet again! 100% best girl.