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What do you think I'm ashamed.

Now that I found some time, I'm gonna change some bits of chapters 2 and 3 to rectify the complaints the troper told me about, along with some others, and add a few new scenes. Hopefully that should help, and people do say I need to take the time to really expand on things instead of rushing through them, so this might be a good learning experience.

Unfortunately, I don't have a Wii U. I wish I had one though so I could buy Earthbound off the Wii U eShop!

Let's just say both Amara and Julia have bank accounts started for them when they were born. Kassia and Truman saved up a lot through their care for the pokemon in their ranch and their other jobs, in case the girls wanted to go to college or something like that. Kind of like an IRL college plan. I'll definitely bring that up in the bonus chapter so that way I can assuage any worries about favoritism. I'm happy you think about stuff like this as it really helps.

I am writing a little bonus chapter taking place in the past that actively shows what Amara used to be like and showing Kassia and Truman loving Amara and Julia, so hopefully that'll help somewhat. Look forward to that! And thanks! I appreciate it! I don't really have anything specific to comment on (though the troper did mention that I made Julia have a bank account and Amara didn't, though I'll address that in the bonus chapter) at the moment, so that's about it.

Hey there! Sorry to bother you. Since you've been really good with my story, I was wondering if maybe you could help me rectify something a bit: do you think Kassia and Truman, Amara's parents, come off as unintentionally abusive toward her in some way? And if so, do you have any suggestions on how I can recitfy this? I'm already planning on writing out some chapters that show what Amara used to be like before her friend's death and I do plan on proving that they love both Julia and Amara the same no matter what, but maybe you can help me with this somewhat. If not, that's okay, too.

Started a TVTropes page for my fan fic here.

Let's just say Morty's Misdreavus is freshly caught and isn't strong enough to partake in gym battles just yet.

I suspect it is more noticeable due to the update delay, but the pacing is a concern - the chapter turned out to be one of those that had to be longer than I wanted it to be, if the whole disguise thing had to be taken seriously. I suppose I could have cut the maid café bit - and yep, that was a maid café of sorts, just less cutesy. Kind of didn't want to pare it down too much, since I also have readers who specifically consider the world building and locations to be one of the story's main strengths.

- I've always wanted to do a psychomachy. It's weird, and quite deliberately weird
- Josh doesn't like the idea of feeling like a master, so to speak, especially when it carries the trappings of inherited status
- Just a silly joke of Josh's, referring to the designer Chanel

There's a lot more I could do with the Joys, if only there was space for it in the story. How the men in the family, both the siblings and those that marry into it, interact, how Eve would interact with them etc, etc ... maybe with a spin off sometime. I've sometimes thought of doing one along the lines of A Da Vinci Smile, but I'v never thought of a strong enough plot for it

Finally is done! Or at least, done as well as it can be without any reviews.

Hm. Well, I have thought a little about this. Without stopping to work out the kinks in the idea, I think I'd probably write male Joys as being generally in the shadow of their sisters - that every good Joy wants daughters, and lots of them, when she starts a family. I reckon a male Joy going into pokémon medicine would probably get a lot of attention insofar as he'd be discouraged from following that career path. He'd probably have trouble making his way up the ranks, I suppose, and could easily find himself running a small backwoods clinic, or as a perpetual secondary

I used to turn out a chapter each month, somehow over the past two chapters that pace has halved. I don't like that very much

Hmm, well, honestly I doubt I'm really going to have the time at this rate

Whoops, totally forgot I didn't reply to this! It has been a really hectic month on my end.

The idea sounds interesting, but I'm not sure I would have the time to do something like that sorry :/ I am so far behind on my normal stories as it is.

Original generations?

I probably wouldn't do anything involving Evangelion xD;

Hmmmm...I don't think I'd play P2 I mean it just sounds really bizarre xD

I haven't been able to write that's why :c

Well, just got to bull through it sometimes. I'm doing some of the planning for Twenty Two while I'm waiting for Twenty One to be beta'd

Er, depends, what do you have in mind?

Well I just don't really like how it all meshes together in a weird way xD

Hmmm well I mostly like Gundam really..Mecha is a really hard genre to get into. Gurren Lagann was just fucking awesme, Evangelion pissed me off/made me depressed so I hate and Linebarrels of Iron (the manga) mindfucked to a point where I didn't know what to think of it anymore.

I did want an option for the female protagonist to end up with the girls though xD; and yeah I heard P4 focuses more on its characters and making them relatable while P3 focuses more on the story.

I did manage to read a lot yesterday.

I like Gundam and mecha xD just not the games or Super Robot Wars, I'm more of a story kind of guy.

I'm playing Persona 3 and well I like a lot of the girls like Rio from Portable but Yukari and Fuuka are nice too, that being said though even if it's technically me based on the options she gets to say I like the female protagonist of persona 3 a lot xD yes I've been playing the female route cause the male protagonist is just...dull, in design and personality. Among the guys I like Akihiko and Shinjiro (gotta keep it fair dude)

Hahaha...don't ask.

Not particularly, I'm not really a fan of super robot wars.

Well it's just that I've been playin Persona for the last few months xD

Well, if you're ever stressed out and want to vent to someone, my PM box is always open!


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Magcargo Express, eh? So what's the equivalent of Mach Pizza in this fic?
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It's actually based on Escargo Express


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Did not expect Bill to have a thick rural accent.
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He actually does have a thick accent in Pokemon Special.


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Julia flung a robe over herself? I thought she'd have like pajamas on or something.
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She does. She's wearing both a robe and pajamas. I do it, too.


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Good to see what happened to some of the random villains of the day.
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There were some complaints about law enforcement not arresting the villains, so I thought I'd try to address them.

Thing is, I realised I could only really figure that out in context of the rest of the chapter, so in this case chapter notes aren't really all that useful

How have you been?

Also have you ever played Persona?