Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 19 - The M3 Project)
It's hard to explain but by including all three girls, and therefore paying homage to all three of the main joruneys he traveled on (Isshu excluded of course) it automatically adds more depth to Ashs character than so many of the fics...
Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 19 - The M3 Project)
I like the pace. It began with the action of the tournament. Then we were intorduced to the eviler Team Rcket. Now you can tell that the action is going to pick up.
I really enjoy reading this and I like the pace so far.
Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 19 - The M3 Project)
Liked the chapter mate! Loved the video Kim Moss left, certainly answered a lot of questions. been waiting a long time for you to update. I wonder if Tracey called the TR agents to capture Ash?
I also vote for Pokemon; The Power Inside for best story, and Ash for best character. To me, it's my favorite story because of the interpretation of the charactors I have loved since I was little. Ash and his friends.
Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 18 - Sacred Fire)
I really hope we get to hear about why Hooh always appeared to Ash (in the anime) when he was 10, because I get the sense that's where this is headed. After all, Ash saw Hooh in Sapphire City.
This is a really good story so far. I love the switching between the real and pokemon world. Crossovers are my cave and this one looks like it's gonna be awesome :)
Best Serial: Pokemon: TPI - Just think it's the best written fic on here. It's only my opinion of course but it's the only story here that seems to keep
me engaged. The description makes
it easy to visualize the plot and the anime characters are very well advanced
from age 10.
Best...
FF.net is a lot better for new writers just because u will get more eyes reading your fic. Here, if you ain't Rivals Story or Power Inside, u aren't gonna get reviews
Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 18 - Sacred Fire)
Man Ash is lucky. If a hot broad like Lexie came into my bedroom looking like that, I would be all up on that! Am I right, Flame Haze?
Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 18 - Sacred Fire)
Whoa brilliant scene with Hoho saving goldenrod city...boss man didn't seem too happy to see a Pokemonz capable of beating his creature. I bet it's Tracey who is his undercover brother. He was acting strange before when the group watched...
Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 17)
Kickass chappie mate! Very descriptive in the stadium attack and I love the trio encountering the two legendaries protecting the orb. Awesome story line is beginning fully unfold!
This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.