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This is my fanfic. It is about my Pokémon character Alix going through Johto, with a lot of strange but cool things happening. I have rated it PG for mild language and references to mild violence.
Chapter 1:
On October 16, 2004, Alix wakes up feeling great. The previous day, he had celebrated his 10th birthday, which meant that he could now become a Pokémon trainer! He had always loved Pokémon ever since he heard about them, and now he could be the proud owner of a lot of them! As soon as he woke up, he got dressed right away, had breakfast, said bye to his mom, and ran out the door right to Prof. Elm’s lab. He had also been really good friends with Prof. Elm since they met when Alix was only 4, so Elm was very happy to see Alix. The night before, Alix was having trouble deciding who to choose as his starter, but after some tough deciding, he decided to choose Cyndaquil as his starter, deeming it the coolest and best starter, after calculating the strengths and weaknesses of all 3 starters. When Elm welcomed Alix to his lab, Alix quickly chose Cyndaquil. Elm and Alix had a long chat, with Elm’s part of it mainly being explaining to Alix how to take care of his new Cyndaquil. As Alix was about to walk out the door of Elm’s lab, Elm got an e-mail from his good friend Mr. Pokémon. Mr. Pokémon said that he had discovered something remarkable. Therefore, Elm asked Alix to go to Mr. Pokémon’s house on Route 30. Alix gladly accepted the favour, and headed to Route 29.
On Route 29, Alix trains up his Cyndaquil to level 10, when it learns Ember. As he’s heading to Cherrygrove City, a mysterious kid with red hair runs by him, and the kid is carrying a Poké Ball. As the kid runs by Alix, Alix asks the kid if he’s a trainer. The kid then turns around and makes an angry face at Alix.
The two stare at each for a half minute, then the kid says “Totodile, come out!” Alix responds by telling Cyndaquil to battle. Cyndaquil uses SmokeScreen on Totodile, creating some smoke that makes it so Totodile can’t see anything around it. While Totodile is surrounded by the smoke, Cyndaquil uses a powerful Tackle attack, knocking Totodile into the very middle of Cherrygrove City, fainting it.
Silver then re-calls Totodile, looks at its Poké Ball, says “Useless Pokémon,” and walks away.
Alix then thinks in his mind, “That kid is heartless,” but then, he promises himself that he won’t think much of it after that.
Once Alix gets to Cherrygrove City, his first stop is the Pokémon Center. After that, he goes to the Poké Mart to buy some Potions. After that, he’s all ready for Route 30, so he heads upwards. While on Route 30, he sees a Wurmple.
He calls it “a cute little thing,” and to respond, the Wurmple starts to move all over Alix’s body. The Wurmple then asks if it can join Alix’s team, but Alix does not currently have any Poké Balls, and the Poké Marts are currently out of stock.
So, Alix says “no,” but promises to come back for it when he gets some Poké Balls. The Wurmple then crawls back into its tree. Alix continues to head up to Mr. Pokémon’s house. However, as Alix is getting very close, a girl with blue hair and about his age comes up to him. She asks Alix if he battled a trainer with red hair, to which Alix responds “yes.”
The girl then introduces herself as Kris, Prof. Elm’s granddaughter. She tells Alix that the trainer he battled stole his Totodile from Prof. Elm’s lab, to which Alix responds by saying “He’s a thief? Then, he’s a really bad person in my opinion.”
Kris agrees with Alix’s opinion completely. She then tells Alix about how she wants to go on a journey, but that she can’t because she needs to help out her grandpa’s research. After this, the two agree to be friends, and Kris runs back to Prof. Elm’s lab to report about the red-haired trainer as Alix goes into Mr. Pokémon’s house.
When Alix goes into the house, he sees Prof. Oak and Mr. Pokémon being held hostage by the red-haired trainer he met earlier. They are being forced to lay on the floor and put both of their hands on their heads. Silver is pointing his pointer finger at them, and uses his Totodile to hold them hostage, by threatening to have it bite them if they do not follow his orders. Alix then tells the trainer “Let them go!”
The trainer responds by saying “Or what?”
Alix then replies “If you do not let them go, I shall defeat your Totodile again! By the way, I know you stole that Totodile from Prof. Elm’s lab!”
The trainer then replies “So what if I stole it? It’s weak anyway.”
Alix replies by saying “I may have defeated it when you sent it out to battle my Cyndaquil, but that’s not because it’s weak. You’re heartless to consider your own Pokémon to be weak. No Pokémon deserves to be deemed weak.”
Silver then says “Whatever. Since my Totodile is weak at battling, I won’t ever bother battling you again. I’ll just let these guys go right now. But that does not mean you won. I just won’t bother losing again.”
The trainer then leaves the house. After he leaves, Prof. Oak and Mr. Pokémon introduce themselves, and Alix introduces himself to them. He tells Mr. Pokémon that Prof. Elm sent him to learn about his discovery. Mr. Pokémon then says that the discovery was a Pokémon egg, something that had never been seen before. He asks Alix to take it back to Prof. Elm, which Alix gladly agrees to do.
Alix heads out of Mr. Pokémon’s house. He goes all the way back to Prof. Elm’s lab in New Bark Town. When he gets into Elm’s lab, he shows Elm the egg, and Elm is astonished. He says that he will keep the egg so he can observe it and learn more about it. Just then, Prof. Oak comes into Elm’s lab, and he tells Elm about how Alix saved him and Mr. Pokémon from a red-haired kid who had a Totodile.
Elm then says “A red-haired kid with a Totodile? He stole that Totodile from here!”
Alix then says “I battled that kid when I was on Route 29. I swear that kid is heartless. He called that Totodile ‘useless’ and ‘weak’ just because my Cyndaquil beat it in one hit.”
Oak then says “I’m glad you care about his treatment of that Totodile. No Pokémon deserves to be called ‘weak,’ let alone ‘useless’. You have a lot of heart.” He then takes a red object out of his lab coat pocket. He puts it in Alix’s hand and says “This is a Pokédex. It allows you to look up the data of any Pokémon you’ve seen. If you’re going to be catching Pokémon, you’ll need it for finding out important info.”
After that, Elm turns to Alix and gives him an object that looks like a watch and a phone built into one object. “This is the PokéGear,” Elm says. “It’s a watch, a map, and a cell phone in one! It’s very nifty!”
Alix then says “Thanks, you two!”
Oak and Elm both say “You’re welcome” at the same time as each other.
Alix then heads out of the lab after putting his PokéGear on his left arm and his Pokédex on his belt. His journey had now officially begun!
So yeah, that’s the first chapter. I think I did really well. Feel free to post your comments and compliments! Chapter 2 will be coming soon!
Chapter 1:
On October 16, 2004, Alix wakes up feeling great. The previous day, he had celebrated his 10th birthday, which meant that he could now become a Pokémon trainer! He had always loved Pokémon ever since he heard about them, and now he could be the proud owner of a lot of them! As soon as he woke up, he got dressed right away, had breakfast, said bye to his mom, and ran out the door right to Prof. Elm’s lab. He had also been really good friends with Prof. Elm since they met when Alix was only 4, so Elm was very happy to see Alix. The night before, Alix was having trouble deciding who to choose as his starter, but after some tough deciding, he decided to choose Cyndaquil as his starter, deeming it the coolest and best starter, after calculating the strengths and weaknesses of all 3 starters. When Elm welcomed Alix to his lab, Alix quickly chose Cyndaquil. Elm and Alix had a long chat, with Elm’s part of it mainly being explaining to Alix how to take care of his new Cyndaquil. As Alix was about to walk out the door of Elm’s lab, Elm got an e-mail from his good friend Mr. Pokémon. Mr. Pokémon said that he had discovered something remarkable. Therefore, Elm asked Alix to go to Mr. Pokémon’s house on Route 30. Alix gladly accepted the favour, and headed to Route 29.
On Route 29, Alix trains up his Cyndaquil to level 10, when it learns Ember. As he’s heading to Cherrygrove City, a mysterious kid with red hair runs by him, and the kid is carrying a Poké Ball. As the kid runs by Alix, Alix asks the kid if he’s a trainer. The kid then turns around and makes an angry face at Alix.
The two stare at each for a half minute, then the kid says “Totodile, come out!” Alix responds by telling Cyndaquil to battle. Cyndaquil uses SmokeScreen on Totodile, creating some smoke that makes it so Totodile can’t see anything around it. While Totodile is surrounded by the smoke, Cyndaquil uses a powerful Tackle attack, knocking Totodile into the very middle of Cherrygrove City, fainting it.
Silver then re-calls Totodile, looks at its Poké Ball, says “Useless Pokémon,” and walks away.
Alix then thinks in his mind, “That kid is heartless,” but then, he promises himself that he won’t think much of it after that.
Once Alix gets to Cherrygrove City, his first stop is the Pokémon Center. After that, he goes to the Poké Mart to buy some Potions. After that, he’s all ready for Route 30, so he heads upwards. While on Route 30, he sees a Wurmple.
He calls it “a cute little thing,” and to respond, the Wurmple starts to move all over Alix’s body. The Wurmple then asks if it can join Alix’s team, but Alix does not currently have any Poké Balls, and the Poké Marts are currently out of stock.
So, Alix says “no,” but promises to come back for it when he gets some Poké Balls. The Wurmple then crawls back into its tree. Alix continues to head up to Mr. Pokémon’s house. However, as Alix is getting very close, a girl with blue hair and about his age comes up to him. She asks Alix if he battled a trainer with red hair, to which Alix responds “yes.”
The girl then introduces herself as Kris, Prof. Elm’s granddaughter. She tells Alix that the trainer he battled stole his Totodile from Prof. Elm’s lab, to which Alix responds by saying “He’s a thief? Then, he’s a really bad person in my opinion.”
Kris agrees with Alix’s opinion completely. She then tells Alix about how she wants to go on a journey, but that she can’t because she needs to help out her grandpa’s research. After this, the two agree to be friends, and Kris runs back to Prof. Elm’s lab to report about the red-haired trainer as Alix goes into Mr. Pokémon’s house.
When Alix goes into the house, he sees Prof. Oak and Mr. Pokémon being held hostage by the red-haired trainer he met earlier. They are being forced to lay on the floor and put both of their hands on their heads. Silver is pointing his pointer finger at them, and uses his Totodile to hold them hostage, by threatening to have it bite them if they do not follow his orders. Alix then tells the trainer “Let them go!”
The trainer responds by saying “Or what?”
Alix then replies “If you do not let them go, I shall defeat your Totodile again! By the way, I know you stole that Totodile from Prof. Elm’s lab!”
The trainer then replies “So what if I stole it? It’s weak anyway.”
Alix replies by saying “I may have defeated it when you sent it out to battle my Cyndaquil, but that’s not because it’s weak. You’re heartless to consider your own Pokémon to be weak. No Pokémon deserves to be deemed weak.”
Silver then says “Whatever. Since my Totodile is weak at battling, I won’t ever bother battling you again. I’ll just let these guys go right now. But that does not mean you won. I just won’t bother losing again.”
The trainer then leaves the house. After he leaves, Prof. Oak and Mr. Pokémon introduce themselves, and Alix introduces himself to them. He tells Mr. Pokémon that Prof. Elm sent him to learn about his discovery. Mr. Pokémon then says that the discovery was a Pokémon egg, something that had never been seen before. He asks Alix to take it back to Prof. Elm, which Alix gladly agrees to do.
Alix heads out of Mr. Pokémon’s house. He goes all the way back to Prof. Elm’s lab in New Bark Town. When he gets into Elm’s lab, he shows Elm the egg, and Elm is astonished. He says that he will keep the egg so he can observe it and learn more about it. Just then, Prof. Oak comes into Elm’s lab, and he tells Elm about how Alix saved him and Mr. Pokémon from a red-haired kid who had a Totodile.
Elm then says “A red-haired kid with a Totodile? He stole that Totodile from here!”
Alix then says “I battled that kid when I was on Route 29. I swear that kid is heartless. He called that Totodile ‘useless’ and ‘weak’ just because my Cyndaquil beat it in one hit.”
Oak then says “I’m glad you care about his treatment of that Totodile. No Pokémon deserves to be called ‘weak,’ let alone ‘useless’. You have a lot of heart.” He then takes a red object out of his lab coat pocket. He puts it in Alix’s hand and says “This is a Pokédex. It allows you to look up the data of any Pokémon you’ve seen. If you’re going to be catching Pokémon, you’ll need it for finding out important info.”
After that, Elm turns to Alix and gives him an object that looks like a watch and a phone built into one object. “This is the PokéGear,” Elm says. “It’s a watch, a map, and a cell phone in one! It’s very nifty!”
Alix then says “Thanks, you two!”
Oak and Elm both say “You’re welcome” at the same time as each other.
Alix then heads out of the lab after putting his PokéGear on his left arm and his Pokédex on his belt. His journey had now officially begun!
So yeah, that’s the first chapter. I think I did really well. Feel free to post your comments and compliments! Chapter 2 will be coming soon!
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