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This is my first attempt at a fanfic, so it may not be so good. But I was wondering what all would happen to May and Max after leaving Ash and Brock. This is my version of the story. But before we get to them, I would like to introduce you to a new character who will play an important role in the story. It may not make sense now, but it will as I go along.
Feel free to make comments and suggestions about how I can improve the story.
Chapter 1: On a Grassy Hill
The boy rode his bike up the grassy hill. At the top was a single, tall oak tree, its branches spread out wide over the hill. From the hill, it was easy to see where the boy lived, Petalburg City.
This is the perfect place to take a break, he thought.
He dismounted his bike and set it up against the tree. Reaching down to his belt he pulled out two PokeBalls.
“Alright, Cyndaquil. Riolu. Come on out.”
A flash of white light burst out of the two PokeBalls and from that appeared two Pokemon. They opened their eyes and looked around. The weather was beautiful and they realized that their master was taking a break. Both smiled happily. Riolu started climbing the tree, with amazing speed and skill. Cyndaquil, on the other hand, walked over to the shady side of the tree, curled up, and went to sleep. The boy smiled, happy to see that they were enjoying the time outside. Recently, the weather hadn’t been so good and they were stuck inside the house.
He sat down, back against the tree. He was a good-looking kid. He wore an unbuttoned blue shirt over a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans. He took off his hat and ran his hand through his brown hair. He looked up at the sky. It was fairly clear, with some passing clouds. He watched as a flock of Tailow flew through the clouds. It was days like today that made him become a trainer five years ago. He smiled. This is the life.
Riolu jumped down from the tree. He noticed that Cyndaquil was sleeping. Curiously, he started tip-toeing towards the sleeping Pokemon.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you,” the boy warned, not even taking his eyes away from the sky. He didn’t need to; he knew exactly what Riolu was up to.
Riolu paused for a second, but shrugged it off. He was only a few feet from Cyndaquil. He moved closer, closer, and closer until…
*Snap*
He stepped on a twig.
Suddenly, Cyndaquil’s back flared up with flames as he stood up in anger. Riolu, scared for his life, dove behind the boy and hid; he stuck his head around from behind the boy and watched as Cyndaquil calmed back down and went back to sleep.
The boy smiled. “I warned you didn’t I? Cyndaquil doesn’t like to be disturbed when he’s taking a nap.”
Riolu looked at him, skeptical at first, but then with a smile.
“Hey Riolu, take a break,” he said to the Pokemon. “Check out those clouds.”
Riolu sat down next to him and looked. There were many clouds.
“Check that one out, it looks like a Pikachu.”
Riolu looked up at it and, recognizing the figure nodded in agreement.
The boy looked at the Pokemon. Riolu was still a very young Pokemon. But right away, he could tell that Riolu could become one of the best Pokemon he had ever trained. Then he looked at Cyndaquil. He had been with him for a little while and had shown some great skill in battle. The boy knew that they could be the keys for helping him win his next Pokemon League championship…
Suddenly, Riolu tugged on his shirtsleeve.
“What is it?” he asked. He knew that Riolu could see aura and might have just seen something.
Riolu pointed to the sky. The boy’s eyes followed his outstretched hand. Cyndaquil was also awake, this time because of the commotion Riolu had caused. He wasn’t angry, but was curious about what the young Pokemon saw.
Then the boy saw it. It was a large Pokemon, golden in color, flying across the sky. He could see its wings flash in the sunlight, reflecting many different colors. It was a beautiful sight. But just as suddenly as it appeared, it was gone.
That wasn’t what I thought it was it, the boy thought. There’s no way that it would be here. I heard of it in Kanto and Johto, but here, the Hoenn region? This is not…
A beeping noise interrupted his thoughts. He looked at his Poketch that he had acquire while in the Sinnoh region. It was 2:30.
“Darn it,” he said outloud. He had to get back to Petalburg City. He had a training session he needed to get to. So much for a relaxing day.
He reached down to his belt and pulled out the two PokeBalls. “Come on guys we have to get going.”
Both Riolu and Cyndaquil had looks of disappointment on their faces. They just had seen something exciting and now they had to go? That was unfair.
“Hey don’t worry,” the boy reassured them, “we’ll see that Pokemon again. But right now its time for training.”
This made them feel a little better. They showed their master they were ready to go.
“Cool. Riolu, Cyndaquil return.”
A red light came out of the PokeBalls and surrounded the two of them. They disappeared into their PokeBalls. The boy put the PokeBalls back on his belt. He picked his bike off the ground and mounted it. If he didn’t hurry, he would be late. Norman wouldn’t be happy about that. But as he started biking down the hill towards Petalburg City, one thing was still fresh on his mind.
Why was Ho-oh in the Hoenn region?
<End Chapter 1>
Feel free to make comments and suggestions about how I can improve the story.
Chapter 1: On a Grassy Hill
The boy rode his bike up the grassy hill. At the top was a single, tall oak tree, its branches spread out wide over the hill. From the hill, it was easy to see where the boy lived, Petalburg City.
This is the perfect place to take a break, he thought.
He dismounted his bike and set it up against the tree. Reaching down to his belt he pulled out two PokeBalls.
“Alright, Cyndaquil. Riolu. Come on out.”
A flash of white light burst out of the two PokeBalls and from that appeared two Pokemon. They opened their eyes and looked around. The weather was beautiful and they realized that their master was taking a break. Both smiled happily. Riolu started climbing the tree, with amazing speed and skill. Cyndaquil, on the other hand, walked over to the shady side of the tree, curled up, and went to sleep. The boy smiled, happy to see that they were enjoying the time outside. Recently, the weather hadn’t been so good and they were stuck inside the house.
He sat down, back against the tree. He was a good-looking kid. He wore an unbuttoned blue shirt over a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans. He took off his hat and ran his hand through his brown hair. He looked up at the sky. It was fairly clear, with some passing clouds. He watched as a flock of Tailow flew through the clouds. It was days like today that made him become a trainer five years ago. He smiled. This is the life.
Riolu jumped down from the tree. He noticed that Cyndaquil was sleeping. Curiously, he started tip-toeing towards the sleeping Pokemon.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you,” the boy warned, not even taking his eyes away from the sky. He didn’t need to; he knew exactly what Riolu was up to.
Riolu paused for a second, but shrugged it off. He was only a few feet from Cyndaquil. He moved closer, closer, and closer until…
*Snap*
He stepped on a twig.
Suddenly, Cyndaquil’s back flared up with flames as he stood up in anger. Riolu, scared for his life, dove behind the boy and hid; he stuck his head around from behind the boy and watched as Cyndaquil calmed back down and went back to sleep.
The boy smiled. “I warned you didn’t I? Cyndaquil doesn’t like to be disturbed when he’s taking a nap.”
Riolu looked at him, skeptical at first, but then with a smile.
“Hey Riolu, take a break,” he said to the Pokemon. “Check out those clouds.”
Riolu sat down next to him and looked. There were many clouds.
“Check that one out, it looks like a Pikachu.”
Riolu looked up at it and, recognizing the figure nodded in agreement.
The boy looked at the Pokemon. Riolu was still a very young Pokemon. But right away, he could tell that Riolu could become one of the best Pokemon he had ever trained. Then he looked at Cyndaquil. He had been with him for a little while and had shown some great skill in battle. The boy knew that they could be the keys for helping him win his next Pokemon League championship…
Suddenly, Riolu tugged on his shirtsleeve.
“What is it?” he asked. He knew that Riolu could see aura and might have just seen something.
Riolu pointed to the sky. The boy’s eyes followed his outstretched hand. Cyndaquil was also awake, this time because of the commotion Riolu had caused. He wasn’t angry, but was curious about what the young Pokemon saw.
Then the boy saw it. It was a large Pokemon, golden in color, flying across the sky. He could see its wings flash in the sunlight, reflecting many different colors. It was a beautiful sight. But just as suddenly as it appeared, it was gone.
That wasn’t what I thought it was it, the boy thought. There’s no way that it would be here. I heard of it in Kanto and Johto, but here, the Hoenn region? This is not…
A beeping noise interrupted his thoughts. He looked at his Poketch that he had acquire while in the Sinnoh region. It was 2:30.
“Darn it,” he said outloud. He had to get back to Petalburg City. He had a training session he needed to get to. So much for a relaxing day.
He reached down to his belt and pulled out the two PokeBalls. “Come on guys we have to get going.”
Both Riolu and Cyndaquil had looks of disappointment on their faces. They just had seen something exciting and now they had to go? That was unfair.
“Hey don’t worry,” the boy reassured them, “we’ll see that Pokemon again. But right now its time for training.”
This made them feel a little better. They showed their master they were ready to go.
“Cool. Riolu, Cyndaquil return.”
A red light came out of the PokeBalls and surrounded the two of them. They disappeared into their PokeBalls. The boy put the PokeBalls back on his belt. He picked his bike off the ground and mounted it. If he didn’t hurry, he would be late. Norman wouldn’t be happy about that. But as he started biking down the hill towards Petalburg City, one thing was still fresh on his mind.
Why was Ho-oh in the Hoenn region?
<End Chapter 1>