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COMPLETE: Mandragora

The semblence of closure feels much better... :)

Oh, and I should stop drawing all over my lips with glitter ink... ^^;;
 
Originally posted by Blackjack Gabbiani
Oh, so THAT's why you write the way you do! *g*

Because it makes me feel good? Yes.

Because I paint my lips with glittery-ink? Erm... yes?

^^;;;;;

But how so do you mean?
 
Great? <blinks> <looks around> Did Roger Zelazny walk into the room?

<is getting ready for his 'holiday' down the coast> Am thinking of doing a sequel... or at least, a set of side-stories. ^^;;
 
Here's something to address in a side-story...Musashi didn't seem to know that she's Sakaki's daughter...*does* she know? And if not, will she find out?

or, as I address earlier, since Domino seemed to know more about his condition than anyone else, what about the weight it put on her mind to not only serve him in a professional method, but also to be cautious with him, observe him for trouble and make certain he remained sane enough to mantain power?

...I may have read too much into that one, but that's what I saw happening...
 
Originally posted by Blackjack Gabbiani
Here's something to address in a side-story...Musashi didn't seem to know that she's Sakaki's daughter...*does* she know? And if not, will she find out?

or, as I address earlier, since Domino seemed to know more about his condition than anyone else, what about the weight it put on her mind to not only serve him in a professional method, but also to be cautious with him, observe him for trouble and make certain he remained sane enough to mantain power?

...I may have read too much into that one, but that's what I saw happening...

Musashi does know... of a sorts. She suspects, and Sakaki says as much, but no solid proof. ^^;;

As for Domino... she suspects as well; but she doesn't really find out until after his death. She doesn't know what she suspects, but she thinks something mentally wrong with Sakaki.

anyway, I'll be running in and out... ^^;; getting ready, y'know
 
Originally posted by Blackjack Gabbiani
Well there you go, write about then they both find out what he'd been hiding from them...

^^ I maybe shall... or possibly, I shall decide to write something totally different. ^^;;
 
'perhaps' I shall do exactly that.

<snickers at cross-topical jokes>
 
Now I need to bribe Brother with statements on how wonderful Jordan is, Abbey with cookies and bad porno, and a few others to read this.

<cackles>
 
He can't exactly bribe *me* to read *your* stuff, you know.
It would be a waste of a good bribe ;-).

Surprising and strange ending Toge, but good. Though a bit hard to catch on what happen in the ending, at least for me right now ^^;;.
 
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:O
I am not worthy...
*hugs Gio*
GioGioGio!
Very good, Togeo... Wow. I liked it a lot. The entire idea was out of the ordinary and enthralling. It would've carried the story on its own, and yet you went further to develope the ideas of the characters, the thoughts, the emotions...
Wow. I loves it. And, of course, it's Gio... Although he did DIE! Twas very sad... *sniff sniff*
*would like to see Gio with long hair and a trench coat*

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Modality

It was early morning.

You took your pills for your stomachaches and apparent mental problems; and for your other little ailments, and you drank your usual tonic like you always did. It was made by some witch of a woman in the forest, and we some type of distilment that I could never figure out. You seemed to think it worked though, but I could see that it made no changes to your body. The placebo affect, they called it, because it helped your mind.

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Eh, yes, I just have to comment on this... I like it mucho. Gio with pills... Gio pills. And the witch in the forest deal reminds me of Robin Hood... George and the witch that took care of him. Poor George. Poor Gio.


Anyway, sorry that it took me so long to read this, but I finally did, and I really, really like it... I guess, really, I've got one more thing to say... Thanks for writing this. 'Tis very niceeeeee.

*hugs Gio one last time*
 
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Hm. That long haired Gio looks like Wufei.

*eyes go blank*

Must...kill...Wufei...
 
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