Rakarei's blog said:So, some of you may or may not remember when I dabbled in fanfiction. If you don't want to you don't have to read it, just know that I didn't really know what I was doing and ran the thing into the ground and watched it burn.
Well I wanted to bring it back on two different occasions. But each time I only wrote a little bit because I'd messed it up so much that I didn't know what to do. I'd created so many plot holes and random things to deal with that it was pointless to try and bring it back.
So, why am I trying again? Because this time I'm not going forward. This time I'm going back. Back to the beginning to fix everything. I'm rewriting all ten and a half chapters that are currently written, and then I'm going to continue on.
Yes that's right I came through this time. As bad as it was the first time people seemed to like it, so hopefully people will like it more this time.
Well, here we go:
Chapter One
Pewter City was always so beautiful early in the morning. The sun was just reaching above the horizon to the east. The dull light hit the stone the city was cut from, creating an eerie atmosphere of half darkness. The Pidgey and Spearow began to wake up, some could be seen flying overhead and their calls broke the peaceful silence every few moments.
Everyone for miles around was still asleep. But not George Smith. For years now George had watched the sunrise over the pond in the park at the end of his street. The park was officially called Golden Pidgey Park, but everyone knew it as “The Park”. The pond didn’t have a name.
George liked watching the sunrise, it was one of those times when there really was no one to bother him.
The water Pokemon that lived in the pond were starting to wake up. A Poliwag swam around the edge of the pond, almost like it was looking for someone.
Maybe it’s looking for me, George thought.
George watched the Poliwag for a little while before going back home. People were starting to wake up now; some were walking outside to get their mail. George saw a Growlithe run out to get a newspaper.
George stopped and watched the Growlithe. Growlithe was one of his favorite Pokemon. George didn’t like that many fire type Pokemon, but there was something about Growlithe. They were so loyal and so affectionate. The one George was watching ran back to its porch where it dropped the paper at the foot of its owner. The owner bent down to pick it up and laughed as his Pokemon licked his face.
Looking at people with their Pokemon always made George feel lonely. George didn’t have any Pokemon, and at 15, it was looking like he wouldn’t ever get his own. All of his friends got theirs when they were 11 or 12. To George, it seemed as though it was to late.
George had been alone most of these last 4 years, after all his of friends left there wasn’t much left to do. He’d never been further south than the edge of Vermilion Forest or further east than the gatehouse. To the north and west there were just mountains. He didn’t know what life was like outside of the city. The only people he ever saw from other places were Pokemon trainers who cam for the annual tournament.
George had heard from somewhere that there used to be things called “Pokemon Gyms”. Supposedly a long time ago trainers would travel to the gyms to challenge the leaders to battles, and if the won they’d get “badges”. Get eight badges and you got to challenge the “Pokemon League” and claim the title of champion, if you won that is.
It wasn’t like that anymore. Now, the four regions of Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, and Sinnoh had tournaments to qualify for the semiannual final tournament. There were eight tournaments per region, one in each city that used to have a gym.
George watched the Pewter City tournament every year. He knew all sorts of strategies, he’d seen so many battles that he knew what to do in so many situations. It’s too bad he could never put that knowledge to use.
George got back to his house and went inside. He didn’t really have anything to do today, so he was probably just going to walk around downtown for a while like he usually did.
George’s mom wasn’t home. She had gone to work already. George’s dad had died when he was two. Because of that his mom was very overprotective, she had forbidden him from getting a Pokemon or ever leaving the city.
George ate some breakfast, got his bike and went outside. George unfolded his bike, got on and started his trip downtown.
As he was riding by the museum, George saw a large crowd of people. He got off his bike and walked over to see what was going on.
The crowd parted and out walked Professor Oak. Even at the age of 90, the professor was still a lively man; although he did hire an assistant a few years ago that he said would “take over when I’m finally too old to do this anymore. HA, like that’ll ever happen”.
George turned to a man next to him in the crowd, “Why’s Professor Oak here?”
“He was giving a lecture about some new scientific breakthrough that could allow people and Pokemon to speak to each other”, the man said.
The crowd followed Oak and his assistant, Nick O’Connor, all the way to the entrance of town. George followed behind the crowd. As the crowd dispersed, George kept watching as Oak and Nick walked into the Viridian Forest.
George turned to walk back to the road he was biking on. Suddenly, the ground under his left foot seemed to slide away under him, and he fell on his face. His bike fell on top of him.
“Shit”, George said as he pushed his bike off of his back. He got up and turned around to find what it was that tripped him. He felt around on the ground for a minute until he found it and picked it up.
In his hand was a Pokeball.
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This is where I comment on chapter. I did this last time too.
See now you know the things in the Pokemon world I've messed with right away so that you don't have to guess what's going on.
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