ArceusAlpha493
The benevolant creator
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I would like some reviews and comments on my story. Also, I need help in making some of my chapters longer especially chapter one and two.I also need improvements on chapters three to five.
Here is the link: http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=78802
Here is the link: http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=78802