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TEEN: Storm Island

Chapter 15
Storm Island
Chapter 15: The Cursed Castle

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The Ruins of Wolftree Keep, historical home of the now extinct Wolftree Clan, are crumbling ruins situated somewhere within the Blackwood Forest of western Storm Island. Many scholars have debated the exact location of the ruins over the past century, and many explorers have set out to find them. Despite numerous attempts, they have not been found, leading many to believe that they may not have ever existed. However, historical accounts found in the royal archives of the Storm Clan clearly mention Wolftree Keep.

During the Storm King's reign approximately three hundred years ago, the Wolftree Clan was among the most powerful and wealthiest land owners on the island, loyal to the royal family. Their land claim extended from modern day Slate Valley, west towards what is now modern day Azure Ridge. Their control over the Silver Ridge mines, the Slate Valley cave system, extensive lumber fields in the Blackwood Forest and access to the southern oceans fueled their wealth, allowing them to bankroll the kingdom. Their wealth was stated in historical accounts to be the center of much of the island's politics.

Wolftree Keep was important for the history of Storm Island, being the location where the War of the Twin Princes began (See main article: War of the Twin Princes). A summit was held within the halls of Wolftree Keep to reconcile the differences between Prince Torvald and Prince Haynes, twin brothers who had attempted for the past year to secure the crown for themselves after the death of their father. While historical accounts stated that Prince Haynes was born nearly seven minutes earlier and therefore the rightful heir, Prince Torvald had far more support from not just the Lords of the Clans, but from the common people of Storm Island as well.

What started as a summit of peace and brotherhood quickly turned dark and bloody. Prince Haynes seized the moment, attempting to remove his brother from the picture to secure the throne for himself. He ordered his personal guard to attack Prince Torvald and to take no prisoners. A large battle ensued as both of the Twin Princes escaped. In the chaos, armies loyal to Prince Haynes laid siege to Wolftree Keep, killing all inside. The keep lay abandoned after the bloodshed for a month before Prince Haynes claimed it for himself after being driven from the northern lands he held.

Prince Torvald vowed revenge for the act of cowardice and started his own siege on the keep. Many people and Pokémon lost their lives during the following year as those loyal to Prince Haynes held onto the keep. Only through the destruction of a vast majority of the keep was the battle ended and the larger War of the Twin Princess started.

It is thought that not much remains of the ruins of Wolftree Keep. Stories have been told of a band of devout followers to Prince Haynes carrying the remaining rubble eastward towards the Ambervale Mountains, but these can not be verified. The original site of Wolftree Keep has been lost to the forest as time carried on, and there have been no discoveries of any remains to indicate where it may have been located.

The Blackwood Cemetery, situated just north of Blackwood Grove, houses the remains of Lord Janeck, master of Wolftree Keep, his loyal followers and the many brave men and women who died to protect King Torvald during the attack. While originally a burial site for the Lords of the Clans, it has been transformed into a graveyard that serves all men and women, rich, poor, noble or commoner.



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Andrea, Kamin, Raven and Dr. Egon and their loyal Pokémon companions continued their journey through the forest, ever cautious, on the look out for anything else that would attempt to stop them as they searched for the ruins of Wolftree Keep. Fortune was on their side, however, as the trees soon began to thin and the feeling of claustrophobia began to fade. In the distance before them were crumbling stone pillars.

"Do you think we might have found it?" Kamin asked.

"This may just be another ritual site," Dr. Egon said. "Miss Dennison, would you care to flash your lantern around?"

Andrea did as she was asked, shining the light around the area. Large marble pillars, most crumbled and fallen over, littered the area. The grass in the area had grown thick, but what looked like the remains of a stone road poked through. Hanging from several trees was the same banner that she had seen in the village several days ago, a golden mountain on black fabric. Even the burlap dolls that hung from the trees in the village were present here.

"We have to be getting close..." she said. "I've seen this stuff before in one of their villages."

"Be on guard, everyone," Raven said, leading the group down the broken cobblestone pathway.

They continued down the road, their path dimly lit by torches that appeared to have been burning since a time long forgotten. The pathway took them over a hill and a under rocky overhang before they reached a large, imposing stone wall. The wall had crumbled with time, but the main entrance appeared to be in good order, appearing as if it were freshly built or at least very well maintained. The entrance was blocked, however, by a large, spiked cast-iron gate.

"Hellhound, blast us a way through this gate," Kamin commanded.

Hellhound obeyed. He approached the gate and took a deep breath, exhaling a bright cloud of white hot flames at the gate. The gate stood firm, however, as the flames bounced off, barely even affecting it.

"Well that didn't work... Any ideas?" he asked.

Dr. Egon approached the gate cautiously, grabbing a scanner and his coiled copper antenna from his pockets. He pressed the coil to the gate and clicked a button on his scanner. "Strange energy signatures..." he muttered. "I am no expert, but I believe this gate has been warded from trespassers by blood magic."

"Umm, excuse me? Blood magic?" Andrea asked.

"No problem for us, though!" he replied, putting his tools away. "Illusia, we need to slip by this gate. Help us out."

The Haunter nodded, floating upwards towards the center of the gate. Her facial features disappeared as her body split into a dozen segments of cloudy energy, enveloping large sections of the gate. Dr. Egon walked up to the gate, tapped on one of the metal bars, then walked through it as if it weren't there.

"What the..." Andrea asked.

"There are many perks that paranormal research has to offer. Being able to walk through certain objects is one of them. Be quick, though! This is very strenuous on Illusia!"

Raven and Kamin recalled Tomriin and Hellhound, then cautiously approached the gate. Raven went first, fearlessly walking through, then waited beside Dr. Egon. Kamin approached timidly, but quickly passed through as well, while Andrea was still skeptical of what she was seeing. As she stepped towards the gate, she flinched, assuming she would bump into the metal rods, but passed through just as easily as the others.

She took a step back and watched as Illusia reformed above her. "Incredible."

"Mmm, yes," Dr. Egon muttered quietly. "It appears that we are here... Wolftree Keep..."

Andrea aimed her lantern upward. They had indeed stumbled on the legendary Wolftree Keep, but it was nothing like they had expected. Instead of the dilapidated ruin they had come to expect, they found a grand, almost regal looking structure. The bricks that made up the castle walls were in good condition but showing signs of wear. Choking vines with purple, luminescent bulbs sprouting from them reached from the bottom all the way to the top of the highest, central spire. Despite its majestic appearance, it had a sinister feel to it, both visually and emotionally. Who knew what horrors were taking place inside?

The area was calm and quiet, which was surprising as well. Questions of why no one was patrolling the outside rose among the group. There were no fearsome skeletal constructs or other dark beings guarding the castle. There were no indications that anyone was even here; no camps, no torches, no lights of any description.

"Keep wits with you, we are going inside," Raven said, leading the group to the massive, marble stairs that led to the arched entrance.

As they crossed under the portcullis, a peculiar sense of dread began to overshadow them, chipping away at their bravery and sanity. A sense of anxiety came over them as they continued into the main hallway. The hallway was dimly lit with candles, showing an extravagant collection of treasures, furniture and oil paintings from ages long gone. Golden candle holders caked with layers of melted wax held tiny purple and black candles, while heavy looking sets of armor were stationed at the side of every door. Every painting seemed to be of the same man, a decrepit man with a sinister and mad appearance. The walls were lined with rustic swords and axes, some still covered in the blood of the enemies they had defeated centuries ago.

"This place is horrible..." Andrea started. "Castles are supposed to be majestic, not like... like... this!"

"Majesty in eye of beholder," Raven said. "But I agree."

As they navigated the maze-like halls, they took note of how suspiciously quiet the castle was. If this was indeed a stronghold for the Cult of the Lost, where were all of the members? Where were the sentries, the patrolling guards? The scholars and the studious? There were obvious signs that it was inhabited, however, such as the lit candles and the sounds of doors opening and closing in the darkness.

They decided to investigate the rooms of the castle before going any further. The first room they entered appeared to be a storage room full of jars. The walls were lined with shelves stocked full of the glass jars, each containing a strange green substance. Andrea grabbed one of the bottles carefully, placed it onto a table, removed the lid and scanned it with her R-Kit. A thick, sulfurous odor emanated from it.

"Analyzing..." the R-Kit droned. "Chemical analysis complete. This substance is a heterogeneous compound composed of three parts; Compound one, the main ingredient, is a mixture of tetradecane and butane. Suspended within are two compounds in nearly equal quantities, white phosphorous and charcoal powder. Due to the violently reactive nature of all compounds found within, extreme caution is recommended when handling this compound."

"What does that mean in words I can understand?" Kamin asked.

Andrea replaced the bottle in an even more delicate manner than she used to grab it. "It means we should leave this room. Do you understand that?"

"I do."

The group left the room in a hurry, taking care not to disturb any of the shelves or bottles on them, then moved onto the room across the hall. This room was particularly grisly, bathed in a red glow from the numerous candles lining the walls. This room was also filled with jars, but the jars contained suspended organs of all types and sizes. The smell of rotting flesh was very profound in this room, as discarded samples littered the floor. It was enough to make even Raven sick, who was the least impacted by anything he had seen in the rest of the castle so far.

"What kind of sick bastards are these guys?" Kamin asked.

"I think it's safe to say that they are a band of murderous psychopaths..." Dr. Egon said.

Andrea reached into her purse and grabbed her phone. "Nobody will believe us without proof." she said. She took several photos of the room, as much as it sickened her. "If I get these pictures to my father, they'll have to respond."

"I have brought proof to them before and they do not listen. But this far more compelling." Raven added.

The group left the room, checking each door as they passed through the hallway. Most were locked or led to empty rooms, but they eventually found another storage room. This room was significantly colder than any of the other rooms, smelling faintly of hickory incense. The room was filled with tables, barrels and shelves, each stocked to the brim with gemstones of all colors, shapes and sizes. They decided to investigate further.

Dr. Egon picked through the crystals like a child in a candy store. Some were icy cold to the touch, while others were hot. When pressed together, they reacted violently by giving off smoke and a shower of sparks. "Interesting..." he said, grabbing a few and placing them in his numerous pockets. "I'll bring these back to my lab and study them further."

"Any idea of what they are?" Kamin asked.

"I've seen the cold stones before in my travels to Kanto... they're an important part of a ritual employed by spiritual mediums in Lavender Town, and I imagine in other places as well." He passed one of the heated crystals to Raven. "I haven't seen anything like this one, however. Have you seen these in your homeland?"

Raven grabbed the crystal and inspected it. "No. It is curious."

Andrea was looking through the crystals as well, spotting a beautiful, almost spherical cluster of black quartz. It shined with a purple luster that seemed to morph depending on the angle she looked at it. She grabbed a hold of it, immediately feeling a stinging sensation on her fingers, but she couldn't let it go. She gazed deep into it, watching the luster shift into the twisted shape of a face.

"What have you found over there?"

"It... It hurts..." she said, struggling to pry her fingers away from it, but they held firm like magnets. "I can't let it go!"

Raven rushed over, grabbing one of the other gemstones. "Place on table and do not move."

Andrea did as she was asked, fighting the strange sensation to lift the crystal higher. She closer her eyes as Raven lifted the gemstone, bringing it down with enough force to not only shatter the crystal, but split the aged table in half. She felt the strange grip of the crystal immediately vanish as a cloud of dust and mist rose from the fractured remains. "What the hell was that?" she asked.

"I do not know. Please be careful. We do not know what foul things Cult of the Lost keep in these rooms."

After taking more photos, the group continued through the hallway, looking through more rooms. Most of these were empty as well, filled with dusty books, cobwebs or other uninteresting things. The repetitive layout of the castle caused the halls of the castle to seem as if they would go on forever. However, the further they travelled, a sense of despair began to creep over them and the light from Andrea's lantern began to fade. Suddenly, screaming echoed through out the hallways.

"Get that thing away from me!" shouted a feminine voice. There was silence for a moment before another scream echoed through the hallways.

"We must hurry!" Dr. Egon said, bolting down the hallway as fast as he could, leaving the rest of the group behind.

Before long, another scream radiated through the hallways, followed by a string of expletives and threats by whoever it was. The scream sounded closer this time, and now muffled words could be heard, but not understood. Dr. Egon followed the sounds through the twisting hallways, down a crumbled, stone stairwell, where he waited for his partners to catch up.

"Miss Dennison, you seem to be the most interested in the history of our island out of all of us. Have you by any chance studied the layout of the castles of the island?" he asked.

She shook her head.

"Ah, very well. I can't say for certain, but if this castle was rebuilt brick by brick, it will likely share traits with Castle Selgarde, residence of the Royal Family. On one of my previous visits to speak with King Matthias, I was privileged to visit one of the most sacred places on Storm Island, the royal catacombs. I fear that this castle's catacombs are where we will find what we are looking for."

"That makes sense. Dark arts strongest where bonds between physical and spirit world are weakest, correct?" Raven asked.

"Exactly," he replied. "Steel yourselves. We're about to visit a place worse than hell. Can I count on all of you to give it all you have, to not succumb to the darkness, to never give in to your fear?"

Raven pounded his left fist on his chest. "The Brave know no fear."

"I have to do this... There's no turning back for me." Kamin followed.

Andrea pondered the situation. She was already overtaken by her fears, and the absolutely dreadful atmosphere did very little to help. But at the depths of her heart, she felt the spark of duty burning within her, telling her that she had to do this to ensure the safety of not just those in the forest, but possibly the entire island. Her emotions battled each other as she agreed to go along with them. "I don't have a choice, do I? I can't get out of here on my own..."

As they ventured into the dark depths, all light sources began to dwindle to nothingness. Andrea's lantern shined brightly, but the light seemed to fizzle out just five feet ahead of them. She and Dr. Egon tried to come up with an explanation, but neither could. Raven theorized that it was the presence of Sheor-ath, the god of darkness that his tribe back at home reviled. Whatever the case, all they could guide themselves with were the crumbling walls to either side of them and a strange, mumbling voice.

After fumbling through the darkness for what felt like an eternity, they finally came across a large room that was much more brightly lit than the dark tunnel they had suffered through. There were six men and women, cloaked in dark robes with elaborate golden patterns monitoring what appeared to be a blood magic ritual. In the center of the room was a large, black obelisk, very similar to the one south of Blackwood Grove, only much larger and with many more jagged spikes at the top.

Surrounding the obelisk appeared to be a pool of blood, which drained via channels from the platform around it. Adorning the platform were six runes scrawled on the floor with chalk. Above the obelisk was a large, gaseous orb that gave off a bright, golden light. In front of the altar lay a stone pedestal which seemed remarkably clean compared to the rest of the bloodstained room.

"The room contains the prisoner once more, yes?" one of the men asked.

"Correct," another replied.

"Such a collection of life essence she has given us..."

"Power of which will return the true king to the world."

All six of the individuals droned together, "The true king!"

"What the hell are they gibbering on about?" Dr. Egon whispered. "Did these ingrates fail their language lessons?"

"It's Clanspeak, dialect ancestors of island once spoke," Raven said. "Perhaps if we listen more, they will reveal plan."

The group watched the cultists as they carried on with their ritual. They all dressed the same, but a superior member soon became evident as he ordered the others around and did little of the work himself. He asked two of the other cultists to 'place the reagents upon the altar', which they did quickly and obediently. One wiped down the altar while another grabbed a large collection of random bones from a box. The bones were placed on the altar as the leader approached slowly, a jeweled dagger in his hand.

"Blood for blood. The armies of the true king require it. Let this be a worthy offering." the leader recited, raising his hand upward. He raised the dagger as well, cutting his hand open and dripping some of his own blood onto the pile of bones. "I implore thee, darkness!"

As the blood covered the bones, glittering sparks from the central obelisk began to lash out at the altar. The bones began to rattle and shake, taking on a similar shape to the small skeletal creatures the group had battled before. However, the creature struggled to stand, falling over and returning to a lifeless pile of bones shortly afterward.

The leader looked down at the failed ritual with disgust. "Purity of the heart is not what she had... She is of no use, her life essence must be extinguished."

"I do your bidding, my lord," another of the cultists said.

As the cultist grabbed the dagger from the leader, Raven stood up and shouted. "What is purpose of this senseless bloodshed?!"

All six of the cultists slowly turned their attention towards the group and raised their fingers to point at them. "Outsiders..." they collectively said in an unsettling, creepy voice.

Expecting a battle, Andrea reached into her pocket and grabbed Sorrow's Pokéball, calling her out. Much to her surprise, however, the cultists didn't do the same. Instead, they grabbed swords and knives that were scattered throughout the room and took up defensive stances.

"If that's the way they want to play..." Dr. Egon said, a crooked grin appearing on his face. He reached into his vest pocket and grabbed Illusia's gem-studded Pokéball, summoning her. "We have no choice but to fight them directly, Raven. I hope you have no personal hang-ups with that kind of thing."

"I do, but not with creeps like these," he said. He reached into his tribal satchel and grabbed one of his Pokéballs, then continued. "Fight with me, son. I know you have waited long time for this moment." He tossed the Pokéball forward, summoning a monstrously large scorpion. The scorpion was formidable in appearance, covered in thick, sandy brown plates. At the front of its body were two massive claws, and at the end of its tail was a wickedly sharp looking stinger that was dripping with no doubt toxic venom. It was almost unconceivable that Raven could command such a large creature, one that was even larger than he was.

Kamin called out Hellhound. "It's time we finally get our vengeance..."

"We must keep leader alive!" Raven said as he jumped down into the ritual chamber. He ordered his Drapion to directly attack one of the approaching cultists, which it did without question, while he fearlessly and stoically charged at another cultist himself.

All of this was happening too fast for Andrea to take in. As the battle raged on beneath her, she was still having a moral dilemma. With her small level of experience, she figured that Pokémon should only be used to defend oneself against another Pokémon. But at the same time, she watched the cultists recklessly swing their weapons around without any care for safety, and figured that this was a proper excuse for self defense. Yet further, she couldn't bring herself to justify hurting another human being, and found it horrible that her partners were using their Pokémon not for defense, but as an offensive weapon against fellow humans.

Raven, Kamin and Dr. Egon, however, were far less merciful. They realized that the stakes were unbelievably high should they fail, and they were determined to do what they must, no matter how morally questionable, to stop the Cult of the Lost here and now.

Kamin and Hellhound cornered one of the cultists who raised her dagger threateningly in hopes of scaring them away. Hellhound responded by leaping at her, chomping down onto her arm and thrashing about violently. The dagger dropped to the floor as she screamed loudly. Hellhound returned to his master's side, waiting for the next order.

Kamin looked away, not wanting to see what was about to happen. "Go on, boy... Do it."

Hellhound approached slowly once more, snarling as he did so. It watched the cultist snivel as she collapsed to the floor, accepting her fate, then directed a burning cloud of flame breath at her.

Meanwhile, Dr. Egon was facing off against two of the remaining cultists, dodging their attacks as best he could. Illusia was by his side, using her ghostly powers to deflect several of the attacks that he wasn't able to avoid, saving his life numerous times. The two worked together as a single unit, with Dr. Egon providing the distraction while Illusia attacked from behind.

"Illusia, let's end this! Reaper's Grasp!" he shouted.

Illusia grew in size, her mouth stretching wide and large. She charged at the two cultists, enveloping them in a cloud of smoke before chomping down. Where they were standing before, nothing remained.

"How are you doing, Raven?"

"Very well," Raven replied, watching as his Drapion picked up one of the cultists with its massive claws, tossing him skyward towards a wall. The cultist bounced off and dropped a considerable distance to the floor. "Let us clean up remaining cultist, then take leader, Nito!"

Nito approached the final cultist, who held her sword outward in defense. With a swipe of its claws, the sword was snapped like a twig. Another swipe of its claws left the cultist on the floor, bleeding heavily.

"End like this? It shall not!" the lead cultist said, looking at his fallen comrades. He held his knife in both hands, pointed directly at his chest.

"Illusia!" Dr. Egon called out.

Illusia stretched her claw-like hand outward and it began to glow with golden energy. Before the lead cultist could end his own life, the knife was bathed in the same golden energy, then yanked away forcefully.

"Nito, attack with paralytic poison! We must return him to Blackwood Grove for questioning!" Raven ordered.

The lead cultist was determined to put up a fight, raising his fists as Nito approached. He was no match, however, as Nito lashed out with its massive stinger, injecting him in the leg. He tried to fight it off, but the poison was quick to paralyze him.

As the dust settled, Raven looked around at his friends. "Is everyone alright?" he asked.

Kamin nodded. "Didn't think it would end like that... But I'm glad it did."

"Sometimes you do as you must, Kamin," Dr. Egon said, patting him on the shoulder. "You did good."

Andrea was struggling to find a safe way down, slowly making her way down the shelves of a bookcase. As she reached the floor, she couldn't help but curiously stare at the lifeless bodies of the cultists, but what she saw sickened her to the core. "What have we done?"

"We did the world a favor," Dr. Egon said. "While you know what these people have been doing, it's still a shocking thing to kill someone. You'll understand shortly why we had to do this."

"If it makes you feel better, at least you didn't join in," Kamin said.

"I... I... I couldn't! I couldn't fight my conscience..." she said sheepishly.

Dr. Egon rested his hand on her shoulder. "A conscience is a good thing to have. It's what drives compassion. Never forget that."

"So now what?" Kamin asked. "What do we do next?"

"We will stay here and attempt to disrupt the ritual. You and Miss Dennison should examine that hallway and see if you can find any survivors that are being kept prisoner." Dr. Egon said. "Be very careful, we don't know how many of these mad men remain in the castle, and they probably know we're here now."

"Alright, let's move. We might not have a lot of time." Kamin said, grabbing her by the hand and yanking her down the hallway.


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The two were passing through the hallways of the catacombs, inspecting each door they came across. As they peered through the dungeon-like windows, all they found were empty rooms, or more rooms filled with strange objects they didn't dare investigate or touch. They intended to stick to the task at hand, and that was to find any survivors that the Cult of the Lost were keeping prisoner.

At last, they came to a room with a peculiar groaning coming from it. The door to the room was locked, however, and there was no window to peer through.

"We need to get inside..." Kamin said, fiddling with the rusty chain that locked the door.

Andrea banged on the door. "Anyone in there?" she asked, receiving no response.

"I have an idea..." he said. "We can probably break the door down if we push hard enough."

"It's worth a try..." she said, taking a position next to him.

"One... two... three!" He shouted. The two pushed against the door with all of their might, snapping the feeble, rusty lock off and knocking the door to the floor. The room inside was dark, lit only by a few discolored candles. The stench was unbearable and undescribable. There were about a dozen blood soaked tables scattered throughout the room, with five people laying on top of them. Two of them were uniformed officers of the Storm Island Police. Another wore the signature male uniform of the Storm Island Scouts. The fourth was a young woman in tattered clothing, barely conscious, and the fifth was a gruff, powerful looking man wearing hiking clothes.

Kamin walked over to the man in the Storm Island Scout uniform and placed his fingers against his neck to check for a pulse. "Nothing. He's gone."

Andrea tried to compose herself, taking in a deep breath. "Maybe we're too late... For all of them."

"N-Never... never take me..." one of the survivors rasped. The voice came from one of the police officers.

Andrea approached and checked for injuries. There was a large, deep cut running from her elbow to her wrist where it looked as if her blood had been drained. As she looked for more wounds, she found the officer's badge, 'Officer Eliza McKenna, Silvermist PD'.

"B-Back!" the injured officer tried to warn.

"It's okay, we're here to help! We're going to get you out of here." she replied. She struggled with the chains that bound the officer to the table, then noticed a key conveniently hanging on the side of the table.

"You... You're the girl we were sent to find..." Officer McKenna said weakly.

She didn't care. Regardless of what the police might do now that they knew where she was, she felt like she had to help. She thought that helping a member of the Storm Island might even get her off easily. "Can you walk?"

The officer struggled her way off of the table, but stumbled over. "My partner, Travis... we... we have to find him."

"There's another one over here..." she said, guiding Officer McKenna over to the other police officer. He laid motionless on the table with a large gash on the side of his neck, but he was breathing.

"Travis... Come on, wake up..."

Kamin, who had tended to the other two survivors, walked over and placed his fingers on the other side of Travis' neck. "He's still got a pulse, maybe he lost too much and passed out," Kamin said.

Officer McKenna pounded her fist on the table. "Don't you die on me, damn it!"

"Is there anything we can do?" Andrea asked. A light bulb lit in her head as she thought, thinking back to the day she met Dr. Spruce in Azure Ridge. She reached into her purse, retrieving the small purple bottle that Dr. Spruce had given her. She sprayed the syrupy, silver liquid onto Travis' wound, causing it to hiss like boiling water. The liquid reacted quickly with the exposed flesh, cleansing the dried blood away and sterilizing the wound. The wound closed quickly, mending itself almost to the point where it was gone.

Officer Travis lurched up in pain. "Owwwwwww!" he said, slowly lifting his head and looking at Andrea as if she had just done something wrong. "Wh... where am I?"

"Are you insane?" Kamin asked. "That's powerful stuff! It might have worked here, but promise me you'll never use that on a human again!"

"Shut up and help him, Kamin," she ordered, wrapping herself under Officer McKenna's arm. She turned to the other two. "Are you two alright?"

"I think I can walk on my own," the gruff man in the hiker's clothes said. "C'mere, lass. I'll help ya." He lifted the young woman off of the ground with relatively little effort.

"Officer, do you know if there are any others being held here? We couldn't find any." she asked.

"I don't."

"Let's get back to my father. He'll know what to do next." Kamin said.


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Meanwhile, Raven and Dr. Egon were still in the inner sanctum, trying to understand the complex ritual that the Cult of the Lost were attempting.

"Perhaps we should wait for Andrea to return. Her wrist machine may be able to determine cause of energy." Raven said, scratching his chin in thought.

"I can do that as well. What are you interested in looking at first?" Dr. Egon said.

Raven led Dr. Egon over to the pool of blood in the center of the room. "We must determine which parts of ritual are safe to interrupt first. Central pillar may be key."

Dr. Egon raised his R-Kit to examine the obelisk at the center of the pool of blood. His glasses turned bright green as he scanned it. "Not surprisingly, this shows the same type and wavelength of energy that Miss Dennison found south of Blackwood Grove, but there's more..." he said, standing up. He kept his R-Kit raised as he slowly traced a straight line away from the obelisk. "There appears to be a directed energy beam coming from the pillar, concentrating on this spot on the wall... But why?"

"Perhaps energy from ritual being redirected somewhere?"

"But where?" he asked. "It couldn't be... I'm curious... do you happen to have a compass with you?"

Raven reached into his satchel and grabbed a small, metallic compass. "Let us hope strange energies do not interfere."

"I doubt they will. My R-Kit is telling me that the magnetic field here is stable..." he said as he grabbed the compass. He rotated until he was facing north, then followed the energy stream again, once more ending at the wall. "This energy stream appears to be travelling north east... Could it be?" he pondered.

"What is on your mind?"

"Are you familiar with the War of the Twin Princes? While it started here in Wolftree Keep, those loyal to Prince Haynes were eventually exiled to the Ambervale Mountains, on the north eastern side of the island. He was a man so evil, so twisted... if he had been victorious over his brother and won the throne, I can think of nothing worse. They created a stronghold in those mountains, where eventually Prince Haynes was killed."

"I had heard about that, yes."

"What if this isn't the only stronghold of the Cult of the Lost? Castle Ambervale suffered the same fate as Wolftree Keep did at the end of the war, being dismantled brick by brick and all of the inhabitants slaughtered. Is it possible that Castle Ambervale has been rebuilt?"

"Ambervale Mountains do not have thick forest to hide entire castle!"

"That's true, yes... but the jagged peaks of the Ambervale Mountains are so treacherous to cross that it's possible nobody could have found it." Dr. Egon turned his attention back to the central obelisk, shining brightly under the glittering sparks. "It will require more research on my part, perhaps even an expedition to see if this is true. But for now, we must interrupt whatever was taking place here."

"Let us examine runes on floor, next," he said, leading Dr. Egon over to a golden, circular drawing on the floor. Inside the circle was the widely recognized rune for the weather, possibly referencing the Storm Clan.

Dr. Egon knelt down to scan it. "Hmm... a small electrical field, not too dangerous to us, though. This one seems to be gathering energy from the canals carved through it that directs the blood flows. I believe it's redirecting that energy to the obelisk."

The two moved onto the next rune, which was recognizable as a symbol for fire. A small amount of residual heat radiated from it as the blood inside the canals bubbled. Dr. Egon came to the same conclusion as the other one. There were several other runes scattered around the obelisk, some identifiable and others that weren't. There was another that represented cold, and another that represented water. The remaining two couldn't be easily identified and had no other indications of their symbolism.

"Disabling the power transfer should be as simple as erasing the runes," Dr. Egon said. "The question is..."

Raven approached the rune of flames and knelt down, running his finger along the edge.

"Wait! Before we do anything, we must think carefully. There may be a certain order to this ritual, just like there is for contacting the spirits of those who have passed."

"Ah, yes. What is risk if we make mistake?"

"We risk overloading the delicate balance of energy, which would likely result in an explosion. It would definitely destroy the ritual site here, but we would die in the process. That is not ideal, I like living." The two circled the pillar, inspecting each of the runes, trying to decide which one was first to be destroyed. They were both equally stumped, unsure of where to begin.

Dr. Egon approached one of the two unidentified runes. "This one is sending the most energy... I don't know if that means anything, but I believe we should begin with this one." He cautiously placed his finger in the center of the rune and began to rub back and forth. The chalk used to draw the rune lifted off of the floor with relative ease, and when much of the rune was gone, the sparks emanating from the central obelisk began to diminish.

"Good choice, doctor," Raven said.

"The water rune had the next highest energy level... I hope I'm correct with my theory." he said as he continued onward. The water rune lifted as easily as the previous, and the same reaction occurred. The brightness of the sparks coming from the central obelisk diminished and the orb of light above it shrank in size.

They continued with the destruction of the ritual; next, they moved onto the rune of flames, followed by the rune of the cold, with the rune of the storm being next. One last rune remained before all sources of power for the ritual were destroyed.

"This is it... Hold onto your pants!" Dr. Egon said as he began to erase the final, unidentified rune.

With much of the rune erased, the glowing orb above the central obelisk fell apart and evaporated upward. The sparks emanating from the obelisk intensified briefly, kicking up a furious wind as it unleashed pure energy into the surrounding area. The keen sense of despair that had been permeating the area began to lift, as did the darkness; the candles and lanterns around the room slowly began to shine with growing intensity, illuminating the room brightly.

"Well, I'll be! I can see!" Dr. Egon proclaimed. "It's just as I suspected... the ritual here was consuming both the light and the sacrificial blood and converting it into pure energy... But for what purpose?"

"I do not know. What I do know is that we must do what we can to prevent this again." Raven said. He walked over to the obelisk and studied it. "Perhaps we destroy obelisk? Or would be too risky?"

"It's hard to say..." he said, approaching it to scan it with his R-Kit. "Regardless of the risk, it would be a good idea. There's no telling how quickly the Cult of the Lost could resume their activities once we leave, we must strike at the heart of their operation... Destroy it."

Raven reached into his satchel for a Pokéball, calling forth Tomriin. He ordered Tomriin to raise his massive drill-like claw and destroy the obelisk. Tomriin obeyed, drilling a large hole into the center of the stone, then working along the edges to cause its collapse. As the massive stone fell over, it shook the ground and shattered into dozens of pieces.

Dr. Egon was examining his R-Kit. "Energy levels are stable... I don't think destroying that was of any danger to us. Good work! We've dealt a monstrous blow to these scummy cockroaches today."

"Our work not finished, however. We must round up remaining members of cult and work to heal forest."

"Another battle for another day, my friend," he said. "We should find your son and Miss Dennison, see if they have found anything interesting."

"Just in time, they return," he said, waving to greet the two. "Survivors!"

Kamin let Travis down onto the floor as he informed his father of the situation. "We searched a lot of rooms, but these are the only ones we've found. The young lady here looks to be in really bad shape, we have to get her back to town and fast."

"Let me see her," Raven said, walking over to the hiker and the injured young woman. He inspected the wounds running along her wrists and up her arms, finding them to be infected and swollen. "Yes, we must. First aid supplies I have will not help her."

"What about any other survivors?" Kamin asked.

"We know location of castle. We can round up townsfolk for larger rescue when we return." he said. "The rest of you, are you able to make hour long journey?"

There was a collective yes shared among the injured survivors.

"The road may still be dangerous, we must be cautious," Dr. Egon warned. "It's odd how few of these cultists we've run into in here, there must be more lurking in the darkness."

As they were leaving, Officer McKenna looked at the fallen cultists. "Good. Those bastards got what they had coming to them."


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Author's note: The description of Raven's Drapion in this chapter varies wildly from the established depiction of Drapion in official works. I count Drapion among my favorite Pokémon, but I absolutely despise its appearance. As such, I have chosen to cop out by basing this one on a real world scorpion instead. My explanation? It's from Unova, of course! Here are the notes I had written down to formulate the look of this Unova variant, in case the description in the chapter was not enough to accurately draw a picture.

Drapion's Unova variant: Raven caught his Drapion in Unova. Much like Shellos, Drapion has a unique appearance based on location; The Unova variant is more reminiscent of a real world scorpion. It has brown, desert-like tones to it rather than purple, and is covered in thick plates. Its head is lower in comparison to its normal counterpart. It has six legs rather than four, and its tail ends in a standard, real-world stinger. The arms on the normal variant's head are placed on its shoulders, much like a real world scorpion. In size, Nito is approximately five feet tall, with its stinger reaching a height of thirteen feet.
 
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You would publish a new chapter on a busy Saturday, wouldn't you? It's a good chapter, I like how you went for abiding mystery rather than big battle, it was quite easy to suspend my disbelief. I think that we needed to spend more time in Andrea's head for the atmosphere to be really effective - Wolftree Keep is a good setting but I didn't really get a sense of trepidation from it.

That damn Haunter IS creepy
 
All right, that was a very interesting and fun chapter. Like Pavell said, I liked the fact that you looked more into the mystery aspect of things and I think you pulled it off real well, even had me on my toes a few times. I didn't expect Raven, Egon and Kamin to actually kill all the members of the cult but I guess it makes sense since they were trying to stop them in the first place.

I do wonder how Andrea will fare now, not just physically but psychologically after what she's been through in the last few days. I also agree that abit more insight on her mind could've helped more, just in the sense of trying to figure out what she was thinking.
 
I read this before it was rebooted and after it was rebooted and never left a review. I'm here now though!

PLOT: After the first few chapters I was really expecting nothing more than a slice of life journey-ish fic with nothing more life threatening than a climax that involves some Poké-nappers. Boy was I wrong. There's so much going on here that I'm honestly not sure if the story is going to have plot arcs, multiple side-plots, or somehow it will all tie together in the end. What I really like that you've done is how you've taken full advantage all of this exploration and seemingly random sidequests by developing them into world-building opportunities. I've never seen an original region with such a rich history, geography, and culture. It's also nice that you've written characters that aren't totally oblivious to said history and culture (for the most part, at least).

I'm very intrigued with the introduction of magic and cabalism. Once again, it draws out the culture and history of the world while adding a plot element that opens the door to pretty much anything.

There's not much else to say regarding the plot besides the fact that it has flowed very well so far and is paced perfectly.

CHARACTERS: The best thing about the characters in this fic is that every one of them comes across as unique and significant. This is another clear sign that you do a lot of planning. No character comes across as flat and boring with no purpose but to drive the story along. The interactions between the characters are pretty solid as well, although I think a lot of that comes from the fact that they're three dimensional in the first place. Some interactions were a bit awkward, but in general you've done a great job.

The main dynamic in this story so far has been between Andrea and Larson (I actually went to grade school with a girl named Andrea Larson which has made it surprisingly difficult to remember that they are two different people in this context). Due to this, I'm kind of disappointed Larson had to leave but something tells me he'll be back before long. The archetype of having one character who's smart, yet not worldly and one character who's adventurous, but a little slow works very well in this situation, although I myself have trouble relating with the dichotomy between technology and outdoorsy adventure. It's not a new or innovative dynamic, but it doesn't need to be, particularly since it's written so well here. Both Andrea and Larson (and other significant characters from more recent chapters) are the perfect combination of understandable and frustrating.

I can't really comment much on antagonists yet since besides the TotallyNotTeamRocket duo no one has even really had much of a speaking part. As for the TNTR duo themselves, they were pretty well done in their brief appearance. Not super threatening at this point, though. Although I'm interested to know if Domino is the same as anime Domino.

WRITING: I honestly have no complaints here. I didn't see any obvious typos, so that's good. Your dialogue was solid, with each character having a distinctive voice, once again stemming from the fact that your characters are so well rounded.

I usually prefer more specificity in description and generally more elaborate description but that's taste and not something that most readers tend to enjoy. You do a good job of describing environments, but your action scenes can be a little hard to follow. For example, I'm still not entirely sure how Andrea hit her head in the fight against that Mightyena. That's okay, though. I know how hard fight scenes can be to write. Practice makes perfect!

Now I've spent much longer writing this than I should have, so I'll wrap up.

OVERALL: You and Caitlin have done a really wonderful job with this fic. I'm having a really hard time finding fault in something that's clearly been planned in great depth. The most advice that I can give is to be careful to stay on track. Lord of the Rings was written to develop and explore a world with rich history. One of its greatest downfalls was the disproportionate amount of time it spent on world-building tidbits with zero relevance to the story. Like I've said above, I like what you're doing, but sometimes less is more. Just a thought. I'll definitely keep reading!

Review Extravaganza 18/50
 
First of all, thank you for the in-depth review. While she hasn't read it herself in her absence, Caitlin extends her gratitude as well. It's really nice to see people enjoying our work.

Although I'm interested to know if Domino is the same as anime Domino.
Yes. It's worth noting that I haven't seen the material she is in, so I may get the characterization wrong when I bring her back for a second appearance. I'm not sure if I care about getting it picture perfect though, I have big plans for this character.

What I really like that you've done is how you've taken full advantage all of this exploration and seemingly random sidequests by developing them into world-building opportunities. I've never seen an original region with such a rich history, geography, and culture. It's also nice that you've written characters that aren't totally oblivious to said history and culture (for the most part, at least).
That honestly surprises me, as well. The original plan for the first series had Andrea blowing right through Blackwood Grove, but it was decided to add some sort of twist to it. It started getting crazy and snowballed from there, which pretty much forced us to re-plan and rewrite the island's history to fit this new stuff in. And yeah, one thing that bugs me about a lot of writing, not just in Pokemon fanfiction, but this extends out to even professional stuff, is that people don't seem to have even a basic understanding of the place they've lived in for their entire lives. I wasn't going to have any of that.

I'm very intrigued with the introduction of magic and cabalism. Once again, it draws out the culture and history of the world while adding a plot element that opens the door to pretty much anything.
Don't get too used to it, unfortunately. The next planned run in with something that could be considered magical isn't for quite awhile, but who knows what crazy twists might happen. However, as foreshadowed, we haven't seen the end of the Cult of the Lost...

OVERALL: You and Caitlin have done a really wonderful job with this fic. I'm having a really hard time finding fault in something that's clearly been planned in great depth. The most advice that I can give is to be careful to stay on track. Lord of the Rings was written to develop and explore a world with rich history. One of its greatest downfalls was the disproportionate amount of time it spent on world-building tidbits with zero relevance to the story. Like I've said above, I like what you're doing, but sometimes less is more. Just a thought. I'll definitely keep reading!
Thank you!

I'm hoping to keep endless world building to a minimum, though there will undoubtedly be a lot around the end of the first series and beginning of the second. It'll be to set up a future story, should I finish this one and move onto that one without changing my mind in the meantime.
 
Chapter 16
Storm Island
Chapter 16: The Escape

"My child... Wake up, my child..."

Andrea began to stir in her sleep, opening her eyes. She couldn't see much, but her blurred vision offered the glimpse of a clear, starry sky, with a milky streak of twinkling lights stretching across it. She blinked a few times to focus, then sat up and looked around. She was in a field of exotic flowers, just like the dreams she had been having before.

"I'm here again... what now?" she asked.

"Come closer, my child." the winds whispered.

She stood up and looked around for the spring of pristine water, finding it behind her. She approached it slowly but surely, hoping this time to catch a better glimpse of the strange outline that kept speaking to her. As she stood at the edge of the pond, she waited patiently, but the shape did not come.

"You have done well, my child... You have set events into motion that will lead to your destiny."

"I have? What did I do?"

"Your efforts inside the Blackwood Forest have brought people into the scene that otherwise would not have been there... Your actions cause ripples through reality, and these are the ripples of destiny..."

"Ripples... of... what? What does that mean? Destiny? There's no such thing. I chose to get involved!"

"Free will is merely an illusion, my child... You will see that in time."

"I don't believe you! I have made many choices in my life, some good, some bad... even one that you advised me on."

"Where the depths of the earth meet the endless bounds of the sky is your next step towards your destiny..."

"Depths of the... endless bounds..." she muttered to herself. "You mean the mountains outside of Cinder Hill?"

"Yes, my child."

"Well, isn't that convenient," she said with sarcasm. "I already know that's where I'm going."

"You know nothing, my child..."

"What does that mean?" she asked. There was no answer.

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Several days had passed since Andrea had ventured into the dreaded halls of Wolftree Keep. She had seen so much within them that she began to question all she held dear. Men, women, children, Pokémon, all senselessly slaughtered over the past several decades, and for what purpose? How could people do things like that to each other? How could people, who have developed higher intelligence, morals and a system of punishing criminals do something like that?

"I guess people like that don't have souls..." she thought to herself. She didn't want to dwell on the subject, however, as she had been doing for the past four days. It was slowly beginning to destroy her sanity and innocence, so she decided it was best to move on with her life and distance herself not only mentally from what she saw in that horrible place, but physically as well. She packed her things up, leaving the room she had made her home-away-from-home for the last time.

As she walked out into the lobby, she saw Dr. Egon standing at the front desk, speaking with Nurse Leslie. She cautiously approached to say good bye.

He noticed her. "Ah, Miss Dennison! It has been awhile... have you been feeling okay? Even now you look a bit pale."

"I just need a little sun. I've been spending too much time thinking about what happened... But I'm ready to move on. I want to distance myself from it." she said.

"I don't blame you. Things like what we witnessed have... interesting effects on the human mind. I am afraid that I have seen it all too much in my long life and that I have grown desensitized to it. It will be rough, putting it out of your mind, and it will always be with you. But remember, you triumphed over it. Wear that with pride."

"I guess... Well, I just wanted to say good bye, and thank you for everything." she replied. "You've given me a lot to think about in regards to my future and working on my weaknesses."

"It has been my pleasure to make your acquaintance. It is nice to know that there are still people out there who take their interest in science seriously. The youth of today is so careless and thoughtless, wrapped up in their momentary desires, but not you..." He offered his hand. "I hope to see you again someday."

"You too," she said, shaking his hand. She turned around to walk out, but she remembered the question that she had been wanting to ask him for several days. She tried to let it go, but couldn't and turned around. "Dr. Egon, I have one last question..."

"What is it?"

"When you, Raven and Kamin were interrupting that ritual... What was it like?"

"Scary. In my old age, I am not as agile as I used to be, and perhaps I made a mis--"

"No. Not that. I meant killing another person."

"Ah," he said, his tone changing significantly. "It's not a nice thing... But I did what I had to. The stakes were high, and if we didn't act first, none of us would be alive right now, not even you."

"It almost looked like you enjoyed it, if you don't mind me saying... Did you?"

He was silent for a moment. "There's no right part in murder, never. But when your life is in danger, you do whatever it takes to end that threat, even taking other lives. What you saw in me was merely an attempt at intimidating them by appearing psychotic. I realize now that I shouldn't have, there is no intimidating one who is so far lost."

"I think I see..."

He put his hands on her shoulders and looked her deep in the eyes. "Miss Dennison, let me assure you... What we did was the right thing to do. There comes a time in everyone's life where one has to make a quick choice or face grave consequences, even yours. It may be soon, or it may be years from now... When you are faced with that, know that while it is good to have a conscience, but it is even better to have control over it. Never forget that."

"I'll keep that in mind..." she said, turning around once again. She cautiously approached the front door, looking outside to see who might be around. The village was quiet this morning; the usual busy center of the town was empty except for Giles, the mushroom farmer. She decided that now would be a good time to leave, but before doing so, she would say good bye to Kamin and Raven. As she stepped outside, she noticed Officer McKenna walking up the path and waved.

"Are you still here?" she asked in disbelief. "You're either brave or stupid. You do realize the police are crawling all over the forest looking for you, right? You have to get out of here, now."

"I was just about to leave," she replied. "I want to say good bye to Kamin and Raven, though."

"Not right now you're not. I just came from their house and there's several officers there asking them questions."

"Is it possible I can hide out long enough for them to be done?"

"If you really must say good bye to them, maybe. But if you ask me, I wouldn't. This place is going to be crawling with cops soon. I'll let them know for you instead."

"Do they know that the police are after me?" she asked.

"Unfortunately. But they're on your side..." she said, looking back at the town. Several members of the Storm Island police were walking into the town, each with a Growlithe at their side. "Oh no... they got here quicker than I thought they would. You have to get moving. Head north and run, they won't look for you there."

"Why not?" she asked.

"Last I heard, they weren't diverting enough resources to cover the whole forest while looking for you. Now that they're here to investigate Wolftree Keep and clear out the villages, they'll have even less people looking for you, but do not underestimate them."

"I can't leave alone, though! You've seen first hand how dangerous this forest is!"

"Look, it's either take a risk and get moving, or fall into the wrong hands. Your father will not be able to protect you."

Andrea thought carefully about which move to make. Very few police officers had arrived in Blackwood Grove over the past few days, and she had done a good job of avoiding them. She was curious of how many might actually be assigned to the town, as most were out in camps in the eastern part of the forest. The fact that the forest was still dangerous, regardless of what she and her friends accomplished within Wolftree Keep, pressured her to stay put. But at the same time, she couldn't help but think that Officer McKenna was right. She was in the know about the investigation, after all.

"I really should leave, shouldn't I..." she pondered aloud.

"I would. Look, if you're worried about a few dangerous situations out in the forest, just remember what you did. You charged right into the gates of hell and busted all of the hostages out. That took some real guts, kid, and I'm sure you can handle whatever happens out there. They won't find you once you get to the old cemetery."

"Thanks," she said, accepting the misplaced praise. "Please, do what you can to clear my name... My father provided evidence last week that proved I'm not the one who burned that restaurant down, but they're still after me."

"Yeah, I heard... Something's fishy. Your father's partner has started investigating internal corruption, I'll see if I can help him. You're a good girl, young and sweet, we can't let you fall into the wrong hands." she said, offering her hand out. "I'll distract them while you slip out of town. Best of luck out there."

Andrea shook her hand, then watched as she walked away. She knew that she had already risked a lot by staying in town long enough for journalists and independent investigators to arrive, and that leaving immediately was probably for the best. But at the same time, she wanted to thank her friends for all they had done. Unfortunately, it was likely that the police would be questioning them the entire time they'd be in town. She decided that leaving without saying good bye was the smartest thing to do, even if it was rude.

She waited by the bushes, hiding and keeping an eye on the numerous police officers that were in the area. She counted fourteen of them, noticing that one was a member of the Storm Island Special Tactics Elite Division. Her heart started racing, knowing that the SISTED only operated in groups and that escaping them would be far more difficult than just the regular officers. Still, she knew that she had to try. She waited until Officer McKenna had rounded up as many as she could and dragged their attention away from the rest of the town to make her move.

She crept by each of the buildings, slowly making her way north. As she reached further and further north, her hesitation at the idea of travelling alone began to diminish. She reasoned that another person would slow her down and possibly risk her being captured. She also thought that if anyone learned that she was on the run, they'd turn her in, as she hadn't told anyone that she was wanted by the police. And if worst came to worst, she could hide in the forest much easier if her location was found. As she crossed under the northern gateway of the town, she felt at ease, even if it meant not saying good bye to those who had helped her the most when she needed it.

- - - - -​

Andrea had spent the past half an hour travelling down the muddy, mist-choked path with Furball at her side. It was boring and uneventful, something she was extremely grateful for. The forest was a lot quieter now that the rituals of the Cult of the Lost had been interrupted. The creepy shadows that had reflected off of her lantern when she had first arrived in the forest were no more, and the creeping sense of despair that she felt was gone. There was no strange movement in the trees or bushes and the wildlife avoided her, rather than approached.

She studied the map on her R-Kit, taking note of which turns and crossroads on the trails she had taken. She was a few miles away from the Blackwood Cemetery and decided to camp just north of it for the night. As she continued to study the map, she heard some noise behind her which sounded like quick, pounding footsteps, grabbing her attention. She turned around to see who was coming, but saw no one.

"No... they haven't found me already, have they?" she asked, shutting off her lantern. She watched as the source of light came closer, wandering to the side of the road to hide in the bushes. The light appeared around the corner; it was Hellhound! "How did he catch up so quickly?" she wondered. "Can I really trust him?"

Kamin was following closely behind Hellhound, looking around. As Hellhound's pace slowed just in front of Andrea's hiding spot, he asked, "What is it, boy? Find her?"

Hellhound barked, dipping his nose into the mud and circling around where she had stopped. He perked up, looking in her direction and barked once more.

"No..." she thought, unsure of his intentions.

Kamin walked over to the bushes, peering through them. "Andrea, if you're out here, let me know." he said.

She stayed silent.

"I'm here to help. I'm not going to double cross you. Officer McKenna sent me."

That was all she needed to hear. She picked herself up from the bushes, calling out, "Kamin!"

"Andrea! Good, you're alright."

"You scared me!" she exclaimed. "How did you catch up to me so fast?"

"I know this forest a little bit better than you do," he said. "Look, you don't need to go alone. I know how much you've been trying to find someone to travel with, why didn't you just ask me?"

She refused to answer.

"If you don't want me to travel with you, that's fine. Just let me get you to the edge of the forest safely. I owe you that much." he implored.

"I was scared that you might turn me in if I had asked..."

"In all this time I've spent with you, I've learned one thing. You're no arsonist. You're a wimp, no offense. Your type doesn't go and burn buildings down." he said. "Time is ticking, it won't be much longer until the police leave town and come after you. They seem far more interested in catching you than they are with investigating Wolftree Keep."

She groaned in disgust. "What did I do? All I did was move from one town to the next, is that such a bad thing?"

"Maybe they're after you for something else. Look, I don't care what you did in the past, I know what you did for us recently. That outweighs anything in my book." he said, starting down the trail. "Now, move, or I'm leaving you behind. I've risked a lot by finding you, I'm not going down with you."

She followed him quickly, quietly and without question. With all they had been through, she felt as if he was being honest and that he knew what to do.

- - - - -​

The journey was long, silent and awkward. The two tried talking about things to pass the time, but had little in common. Their past experiences were lost on each other, and reminiscing about their lives as they grew up did little to break up the tension of the situation. They both agreed on one thing, however; that Raven had been the cornerstone of their group, the one who tied it all together. With him around, everything seemed possible, even easy.

As much as they had been through together, Andrea started to feel uncomfortable around him again. He seemed distant, often ignoring her questions, instead focusing on path finding. When he did respond, he was slightly rude in his approach. Perhaps he was sick of her, too, she thought. But if that were the case, why would he risk so much for her?

She tried to figure out why they had such a hard time relating, starting with what she knew about him. It was obvious that his real parents were out of the picture, since he differed so much from the man he referred to as his father, Raven. Where were they? Was that why he had such a jagged, rude personality? Or maybe he had some ingrown prejudices against people who weren't local to the area. She grew fascinated with the topic, paying little attention to anything else. All she did was study him from behind, making sure not to lose sight of him, thinking.

"Let's try again..." he said. "Umm... So what kind of stuff have you studied so far?"

Focused on her thoughts, she missed the question. "Excuse me?"

He grumbled. "What have you done with your job so far?"

"Not much, yet... I've only just started," she said. "But a friend and I found something strange in the Silver Ridge Caverns. Professor Ansen is still going over the data I found, and she has a few people out there now to look it over."

"Can't be as strange as some of the stuff you've seen in this forest, I bet."

"You ready to lose that bet? When you think of a cave, what do you expect to see in it?" she asked.

"Rocks, bats... that's about it."

"Not in this one... This one was absolutely covered in vegetation... vines, grass, mushrooms, twisted roots, trees..."

"Trees? In a cave? What the hell are you talking about?"

"You don't believe me? Look for yourself!" she said, reaching for her phone. She scrolled through the applications until she had her photo gallery up, then skipped through her pictures until she found the ones relating to the Silver Ridge Caverns. "It was incredible."

He looked at the pictures, his expression shifting from disbelief to wonder. "And that was all in a cave?" he asked.

"Yeah!"

"Huh. That's actually pretty interesting. I don't get to experience much out here... All it is is darkness, trees, a simpler way of life... oh, and more darkness." He sighed. "This is my home, though."

"We all have to leave home at some point, find out who we are, what our purpose is... Sometimes I feel like I've waited too long to do that, but then I realize that if I hadn't, I probably wouldn't be on the road to doing what I love most. I'm not in a lab, researching something, or developing some new technology, but if I keep it up, I will be."

"And what's so interesting about being in a lab? Wouldn't you rather be out traveling like you are right now?"

"No. I've only been on the road for about two weeks now and I'm already sick of it." she said. "I've lost count of how many times I could have died by now."

"So why do it?"

"I have to if I want to work my way up..."

"Hmm. I see."

"So what about you?" she asked. "It's always about me, never about you. That's changing today. Tell me a little about yourself."

Kamin kept quiet, focusing on the road ahead of him.

"You can be such a jerk sometimes, you know that?" she shouted. As she was about to insult him for his jagged personality, a peculiar sound began to ring through the forest, sounding much like mumbled speech and radio static. "You hear that?"

"I do. Follow me." he said. "Shut off your lantern, too. Hellhound, I need minimal light."

The two left the marked trail, wandering off into the dense, thick overgrowth of the forest. It was quite a noisy journey, as they snapped branches in the bushes and stepped on fallen, dry leaves. As they wandered deeper and deeper into uncharted forest, the sound of the muffled voices was getting louder and clearer.

"SISTED Charlie, this is SISTED Alpha. What's your status?" one of the voices asked. The response was inaudible. "Copy that. No sign of her yet on our end, either." There was a small pause. "SISTED Delta, this is SISTED Alpha. What's your status?" Again, another pause for the inaudible response. "Copy that. Keep following those footsteps, they may lead somewhere.

"Just keep quiet..." Kamin whispered.

"SISTED Victor, this is SISTED Alpha. What's your status?"

"Just how many are out there?" she asked, watching the group of officers.

"Copy that, we'll circle around and cut them off," the commander said. "Listen up, men! Victor Comm just told me that they found a young woman matching Andrea Dennison's description and a young man heading eastward out of Blackwood Grove, but they're running. If we follow this road, we should find a path to the right that will circle east and lead us straight to them. Let's move!"

The two watched as the group of six heavily armed officers continued on their path with a quickened pace, disappearing into the darkness.

"A woman matching your description? Who could that be?" Kamin asked.

"I don't care, I really, really don't care. Just get me out of here." she said, standing up and pushing through the dense shrubs. "I've been told that once we reach the north end of the cemetery, I should be fine."

"Then I'll get you there," he said. "Follow me, I know a few lesser-traveled trails that will get us there quicker than the main road."

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Nearly an hour had passed. The two were still on their way north, unsure of when they would reach the cemetery. Along the way, they heard suspicious noises that sounded as if someone was following them, but they could never find evidence that this was the case. The sparks of tension between them had eased as the time passed, and they tried resuming their conversation again.

"You never did answer my question, by the way," Andrea said.

"And what was that, again?" he asked.

"I want to know at least a little bit about you before we go our separate ways."

"As I've told you several times since I've met you, there isn't much to know." he replied.

"There has to be something. Nobody gets to your age and doesn't have a story to tell!" she said, trying to think of things to ask him. "What's the deal with you and Raven, by the way? I get the impression--"

"Don't," he interrupted. "Don't ask about that."

"Alright, nothing meant by it. I was just curious." she said, now even more intrigued. She wondered, why was it such a sensitive subject? The two appeared to be inseparable, almost as if he really was Raven's son, but she knew he wasn't. That was one of the few missing pieces to the puzzle of their relationship, and nothing seemed to fit the holes she still had. She decided to move onto another topic, however. "What kind of goals do you have?"

He looked at her, judging her character. "You sure are a relentlessly chatty one."

She groaned. "You're impossible!" she said.

"It's a trust issue, I'm sorry."

"Trust issue?! How could you have a trust issue with me after all we've been through?"

He was silent.

She was enraged at his stubbornness, almost ready to dismiss him and finish the journey on her own. But she reasoned with herself, realizing that she would need him for safe travel. Yet at the same time, she was stewing like a pot of soup, bubbling, her patience boiling away. "Fine, then what do you want to talk about?" she asked.

"Have you given any thought to Pokémon training?" he asked.

"Another question about me..." she thought. She didn't want to dwell on the subject of him being nosy with nothing in return, however, so she answered his question. "I haven't. I can see the merits in it, but... I don't think it's for me."

"Why not?" he asked.

"Well, how would it help me with... my research, for example? Or... travel?"

"You'd be surprised by the things Pokémon can do for you in a bind. Let's say you find some spectacular research specimen... how are you going to capture it and bring it back to the lab?"

"I can handle that myself," she said. "I'm not great at it, but I can get by. I've captured two things on my own already."

"You have? To my knowledge, you only have three Pokémon at your command. Your Furret, your Murkrow and your Mightyena."

"Yeah!"

"I don't remember you capturing that Mightyena on your own."

She thought back to the day she captured the Mightyena, but it was a blur. "Oh... right. To be honest, I don't even remember what happened. What I do remember is this..." she said, running her finger down the scar on the side of her face.

"If you learned more than the basics, that probably could have been prevented," he replied. "I'm not sure who taught you, but he didn't do a very good job. Even I was better off than you currently are in my first week."

"Now wait just a moment! The person who--"

"FREEZE!"

A loud voice interrupted their argument as a bright, blinding light shot out of the darkness ahead of them. Six silhouetted figures stood in front of them, slowly approaching. She couldn't visually identify who the six were, but she knew that she had been found and that it was over. The light began to fade, and she could see the figures reach for their faces, turning on their night vision goggles.

"Hands behind your heads!"

The two did as they were told, dropping to their knees and raising their hands.

"Andrea Dennison, you are under arrest for the attempted murder of Charles Winston, the arson of the Crimson Crawdaunt and for illegally poaching Spheal pelts in Crystal Bay."

"Spheal pelts? Murder?" she thought to herself. "There has to be some mistake!"

Kamin looked over in disbelief. "Attempted murder?"

"I didn't do anything!" she shouted.

"Keep your mouth shut! You there, sir, what's your name?"

"Kamin Duskwillow," he said.

One of the men leaned over. "Does he check out?"

"He's not wanted for anything, sir," another said.

"Alright, on your feet, Kamin. Nice and slow..."

Kamin slowly rose to his feet, keeping his hands pressed against the back of his head. As he slowly walked towards the officers, he looked back at Andrea, who pleaded with nothing more than the expression on her face to save her. He wanted to, but he wasn't sure how, or even if it was wise. He had trouble believing the accusation of attempted murder, but at the back of his mind, he couldn't help but think there was credence to it, considering the length the police had gone to find her, and the strength they've displayed in doing so.

"Cuff her and bring her in," the squad commander said.

She struggled against the officer as he tried to put handcuffs on her, but she was no match. "Come on, help me!" she said.

"She needs a reminder about keeping quiet, Jones. Do it."

The officer who restrained her raised his hand, bringing it down across the side of her face with quickness and without hesitation.

The squad commander turned to Kamin. "You're free to go. Now get, and forget what you saw just now."

"Really? You don't even want to bring me in for questioning?" he asked.

"No. We have all we need. Good day."

"Come on, Kamin, do something!" she shouted as they began to drag her back towards Blackwood Grove.

"Hit her again!"

Kamin couldn't stand to watch it. He had only known her a few days, but it was long enough to judge her character. He was sure that they had the wrong person. How could someone so innocent, so out of her league, be responsible for the horrible things she was accused of? He thought quickly, realizing that every second he wasted brought her closer to a horrible fate at the hands of a possibly corrupt justice system.

"I have to do something..." he muttered, reaching into his pocket. He pulled out a Pokéball, tossing it to the ground. With a shower of leaves and blades of grass, Locke the Nuzleaf appeared at his feet, ready for orders. He knelt down and hugged his companion tightly. "I need your help, Locke."

Locke studied the SISTED officers who were carrying Andrea away, then looked up at his master.

"We need to free her. On my command, I want you to do whatever it takes to knock them down and incapacitate them."

Locke's expression changed to confusion.

"I know, I know. They're supposed to be the good guys, but something isn't right here. You take the lead, I'll follow from behind." As Locke turned around, he grabbed him by the shoulder. "There's more. I need you to stay behind while we make our escape, to make sure they don't follow us. That could mean that we might never see each other again. Understand?"

Locke looked down, grunting as he did so. But he quickly perked up, rushing down the trail towards the SISTED officers. As he got close to them, he hid in the bushes.

"C'mon, Hellhound. Get ready for the fight of your life." Kamin said, rushing down the path with Hellhound following. As he approached Locke's hiding spot, he made a circular motion with his hand, signaling to begin the attack.

Locke jumped out of the bushes, shouting. "Ro Ki-klaaaaah!" The roots that had littered the trail came to life, raising up and lashing out like tentacles at the SISTED officers. Before they could react, four had been knocked down and constricted by the roots, while the others avoided the sneak attack.

"Now, Hellhound!"

Hellhound obeyed the order, charging at the two remaining officers. He leapt high into the air, snarling into a roar as he came down on the squad commander, knocking him to the ground with a loud and monstrous thud.

"Shit!" the remaining officer yelled, reaching for his radio. "This is SISTED Alpha, we are under att--"

Before the officer could call for backup, Kamin tackled him and brought him to the ground. With a swift and hard punch to the side of the officer's head, Kamin jumped off of him and called out, "Locke, pin him down!"

Locke's concentration deepened as he followed the order. More gnarled roots snaked their way over the downed officer, covering his legs and arms much like the others.

Meanwhile, the squad commander had wrestled Hellhound off of him, throwing him aside as he reached for one of the Pokéballs lining his tactical vest. He pulled the Pokéball off and threw it forward, unleashing a large, deafening explosion of fire and smoke. When the smoke cleared, a large orange creature that looked like a lion, but had the features of a large wolf stood there. Its orange fur was lined with stripes and complimented by a shaggy, white mane. The squad commander picked himself up and stood by his Arcanine's side.

"Hellhound, protect Locke or we've lost!" Kamin shouted.

"Stand down and you won't get hurt! We're only here for the girl!" the squad commander ordered as he grabbed his radio. "This is SISTED Alpha, requesting backup at Holson's Bend!"

"You've got the wrong person!"

"Give it up, you're no match! Arcanine, attack!"

The Arcanine lowered itself to the ground, ready to pounce. It charged towards Hellhound with unbelievable speed, appearing like a burning blur in the darkness. Hellhound was indeed no match, as he was unable to predict the Arcanine's movements and avoid the attack. He was thrown backwards into the mud, but he got back up, ready for more. He roared and opened his mouth to launch a stream of flames at the Arcanine, but they had little effect on it, filling Kamin's mind with doubt regarding his choice to help Andrea.

Andrea watched the rescue attempt from afar, struggling fruitlessly against her handcuffs. She was determined to do what ever she could to escape, but she wasn't sure of what to do. Numerous ideas ran through her mind when an idea came to her. She squirmed and struggled, finally getting her hands in front of her. With greater control, she was able to reach into her pocket and pulled out one of her Pokéballs. She tossed it forward, then ran for the bushes.

The Pokéball bounced on the ground and popped open. With a bright flash of light, the Mightyena she had captured several days earlier had appeared, growling as he took in his surroundings. He locked in on the Arcanine, snarling like a savage animal and ran at full speed towards it. With a mighty leap, he tackled the Arcanine, bringing the large creature down with little effort. He jumped on top of it, biting and ripping away at it as if he were a ravenous, hungry beast.

The squad commander was awestruck by the giant Mightyena and grabbed his radio. "SISTED Alpha needs backup NOW!" He watched as the Mightyena made quick work of his Arcanine, then walk slowly towards him, showing off his mighty fangs. "C'mere, boy!" he taunted as he pulled his stun baton off of his belt. "Time to learn some new tricks!"

Dune snarled, patiently waiting for the squad commander to make the first attack, while the squad commander hesitated to make a move. The two stared each other down, locked in an endless game of wits, each judging who would be the superior combatant. One would think Dune would be, but the members of SISTED were among the most well trained security specialists on the planet, and just the way he stood signaled to Dune that he would be a tough fight, even for a human.

There would be no fight, however. As the two continued to stare each other down, circling each other like arms on a clock, the squad commander felt a tug at his legs. Locke had snuck up behind him and constricted him with the roots, yanking him to the ground. Dune slowly approached the squad commander, still growling, but didn't attack.

"Dune, step back!" Andrea said, almost sure that her command would be ignored. To her surprise, however, Dune listened, turned around and slowly approached her, ceasing his growling. She was amazed that he actually obeyed her, thinking over how incredibly ugly her quick decision could have turned.

Kamin was knelt down, looking at Hellhound. He recalled him, as he was too injured to lead them through the forest. "We need to go, now!" he said, motioning for Andrea to follow.

Andrea ran down the path towards Kamin, picking her lantern up off of the ground, with Dune dashing off ahead of her. She looked back to see all of the officers had been pinned down by Locke, happy that they wouldn't be following her any more. "What about your little guy back there?"

"Don't worry about him, he can take care of himself," Kamin said, looking back. "He'll know how to find me, I hope... Let's just focus on getting you out of here."

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Author's edit: retconned a single, miniscule detail to make upcoming character development slightly more interesting and diverse.
 
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Chapter 17
Storm Island
Chapter 17: The Journey Together

"Sunlight... sunlight!" Andrea thought to herself. "Did we really escape?"

"Look at that, we made it!" Kamin said.

She fell to her knees and was tempted to kiss the ground. She felt an extreme sense of pride having not only survived her journey through the dark and dangerous forest, but also for escaping the most experienced and fearsome branch of the Storm Island police. She still couldn't believe she had made it as far as she had, but she was beginning to see why her father probably placed his confidence in her. "I'm... I'm shocked, I really am. I can't believe we got out of there."

"Yeah..." he said, raising his hand to shade his eyes from the bright sunlight. "Uuuugh, I am going to have such a headache..."

"It's been over a week since I've seen sunlight!" she said, shielding herself as she stumbled down the path. "I can barely see! I've gone native!"

"A week is nothing, I haven't seen the sun in months," he said. "So now what do we do?"

"Officer McKenna said that I'd be okay if we made it past the cemetery, right?" she asked.

"She did say that, but you have to remember what we went through to get this far. They're going to come after you even harder now... and me, too."

She sighed. "What am I going to do? My father already proved my innocence, but they're still after me... Maybe I should just give up."

"No. I'm not letting that happen, not after the sacrifices I've made to get you this far." he said. "There has to be something we can do, somewhere we can go. Call your father, he might have an idea."

"Hmm..." she said, reaching for her phone. She scrolled through her archived numbers, finding her father's and called it. After three rings, she complained, "Come on, pick up!" A few more rings went by before she was given an automated response.

"Hi! You've reached Officer Dennison. I'm afraid I'm a bit busy and can't take your call at this time. Please leave your name and number and I'll get back to you when I'm back in the office."

"Damn it!" she said, hanging up. "He's not answering, and now my number is on his caller ID. They're going to know he's helping me along..."

"You just can't catch a break, can you?" he asked.

"It's been like this my entire life... Screw it, I'm going to risk it and head to Cinder Hill." she said. "It's not like there's anywhere else to go."

He stopped in his tracks, ready to question her sanity. "Are you serious?" he asked. "After what we just went through?"

"Well what else am I going to do?! Live out in the hills like some savage? I don't know the first thing about survival in the wilderness!" she shouted.

"I do. If you need-"

"No. You've already risked a lot by getting me this far, I'm not dragging you down with me. I can make it to Cinder Hill from here by myself."

Kamin looked down at the ground and kicked at a rock, then sighed. "Is that how you really feel? You're just going to send me home?"

"You've done more than you needed to," she said. "I appreciate the help, but this is my problem, not yours."

"That's where you're wrong. This is as much my problem as it is your problem. I freed you after they'd gotten you. I can't just go home, I'm a wanted man now, too." he said.

His persistence was starting to weigh her spirit down. She wandered over to the side of the road and sat on the ground, thinking. She placed her hand on her forehead, trying to figure out her next step. "Are you sure you want to this?"

"Yes."

"You are absolutely sure?"

"Andrea, I'm supposed to do this. Raven asked me to keep you out of harm's way." he said, offering his hand out. "Now, let's move before they catch up with us."

She sighed and grabbed his hand. "I am really sorry that I got you into this mess."

"Don't worry about it, worry about staying one step ahead." he said, starting down the path. "Let's change the subject, please. The stress is literally killing you, I can feel it."

She remained silent.

"Why do you need to get to Cinder Hill? Something for your job?" he asked.

She nodded. "I have to get up onto that mountain to look at some geological equipment that's been malfunctioning lately." she said, pointing at the mist-obscured obsidian mountain to the northwest. "I was supposed to be there today, but... I don't think that's going to happen."

"I'll get you there by tomorrow, then," he said. "I'm not familiar with this area, how long do you think it will take us to get there?"

She shrugged, then brought up the map on her R-Kit. She traced the route between her and Cinder Hill, which would take them across the rocky wilderness of Route 306. "About four hours, if nothing goes wrong?"

"Let's make it three."

The two continued down the dusty, sun-beaten path, distancing themselves from the thick tree cover of Blackwood Forest. She was glad to finally be leaving it, yet at the same time, it was a bittersweet experience. It was in that forest that she had met her first true friend in years, and it was in that forest that she had quite possibly the most interesting experience she figured that she would have in her lifetime. In a few quick days she was taken in as a scared, uncertain girl, and forged into a confident, purposeful young woman. She learned many lessons that would likely have a large impact on the success or failure of her job as a travelling researcher. While she wished it could have gone better, she was oddly grateful for what had happened over the past week.

At the same time, she thought of her future, both immediate and long term; Where would her travels take her, and what experiences would they have in store for her? Would they be as dangerous? As exciting? As terrifying? Or, did she even have much of a future? Being pursued by the most ruthless wing of the Storm Island police was no small matter, and it was only a question of time as to when they'd corner her again. But she tried to be hopeful, wondering what would happen next if she retained her freedom.

Where would she go? What would she do? She wanted to return to the rural tranquility of Blueleaf Village so that she could see Professor Ansen and her parents again, maybe possibly help analyze any data her co-workers had gathered from her discovery in the Silver Ridge caverns. But, being so far away, she figured that was unlikely, trying to think of what else she might do. Might she be pushed forward to Crestfall and help survey the Crestfall Trench? Maybe to the snow-covered plateaus of the northern peaks? Who knew, maybe she would even be lucky enough to study from the books in the Royal Archives at Castle Selgarde. So many possibilities had her mind racing!

She was so lost in her thoughts that she almost didn't hear her phone ringing.

"You gonna answer that?" Kamin asked.

"Hunh? Oh! Right!" she said, hastily grabbing her phone and answering. "Hello?"

"Hello, is this, uh, Andrea Dennison?" a female voice asked.

"Yes ma'am," she replied.

"Ah, good! This is Officer Meyers, I've got big news for you!"

She gasped. "Sarah Meyers? It's been so long since I've seen you!" she said with excitement. "What's... what's going on? Where's my father?"

"That's what I wanted to talk to you about. Him and his partner are currently in a meeting with Commissioner Levitt in regards to the arson you were wanted for. Evidence has come forward clearing your name!"

She was without words, elated. She nearly fell over, sitting down on the ground. Finally, the wheels of justice had begun to turn!

"Are you still there?" Officer Meyers asked.

"That's... that's incredible news!" she said. She let out a deep, contented sigh. "I don't even know what to say!"

"I thought you might like hearing that. Effective immediately, the warrant for your arrest has been dropped, and we'll start working on catching the real criminal who did it."

"Who is it?" she asked.

"I'm afraid I can't tell you that at the moment. I'm sure your father will, but that will be his mess to deal with when he does." Officer Meyers continued. "Now, based on our investigation, we're assuming you're going to Cinder Hill, right?"

"That's the plan," she said. "Why?"

"I might avoid it for awhile." Officer Meyers said. "We're still updating each station on the details of the case. Cinder Hill, Snowfall and Ambervale haven't been briefed... probably a very busy day for some of them. If you get there before the end of the day, things might get ugly for you."

"What do you suggest then?"

"A bit south and a bit east of the city is Slate Valley, the old quarry that's been used in a lot of Cinder Hill's construction projects. There's also campgrounds nearby that you can probably stay at until I can update you on the situation."

"Slate Valley? Why go there? Why can't you just get in touch with them?"

"That's bureaucracy for ya, I can't say it's safe until I've heard back from the local head." she said. "I'm sure that takes a load off of your mind."

"Thank you so, so much for letting me know, you wouldn't believe how happy I am to hear this!"

"Yeah, no problem!" she said. "Any questions?"

"What about Kamin? Are they still going to look for him?"

"Huh? Who's that?"

"This guy I'm travelling with, he helped get me out of the forest..."

"Oh... I'll talk to the commissioner about it and I'll put in a good word for him. I'm sure he figured he was doing the right thing."

"I don't think that's how things work, though..."

"Maybe on paper, but Commissioner Levitt is a human being, capable of making decisions the law can not. Trust me. We just wanted you, Andrea. That's all we ever wanted. But, now we know who the real arsonist is, we don't need you anymore."

"Do what you can, please."

"I will. And when you're done doing whatever it is that Professor Ansen has you doing, come back to the city if you can! Your mother and father miss you... Listen, I gotta go. I'll call you tonight to update you on things, okay? I'm sure your father will, too."

"Okay, thank you again," she said, hanging up.

Kamin studied her curiously. "What the hell was that? Whatever it is sounds like good news for both of us."

"We're free... We're FREE!" she shouted, laughing. "They've found evidence that clears my name!"

"Really? I knew I made the right choice in helping you, that's wonderful!" he said.

"This is incredible..." she said.

"What about me?" he asked. "Am I off the hook, too?"

"I'm not sure. She said she'd put in a good word for you. So... you don't have to protect me anymore. You don't have to feel obligated anymore. You're free to go... Unless you still want to come along with me."

"I do. I'm not leaving until I know for sure that they've dropped everything against me, too."

"That's probably a good idea..." she said.

"Now, what's this about Slate Valley?" he asked.

"Sarah is suggesting that we go there until the local police are updated on the situation, but I'd rather not, I'm just going to continue on to Cinder Hill. If we don't make a scene, I'm sure things will be fine for us. There are tens of thousands of people in that city, we can blend in."

"I don't know, Cinder Hill still feels like a bad idea," he said. "Why is it so important that you go there, instead of ignoring her advice?

"Because I have a job to keep. I'm running out of time to get this done, and with how active the surrounding area has been recently... You never know, looking in on that geological equipment could save lives." she said.

"Hmm. Well, lead the way. I just hope you don't lead me down the wrong road."

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Several hours later, Andrea and Kamin had come across the fork in the road of Route 306. The road to the north would take them up to Cinder Hill, while the road leading east led to Slate Valley. She was determined to stick to her plan to arrive in Cinder Hill before the end of the day, but it was becoming increasingly difficult for her, as Kamin tried to persuade her to listen to Officer Meyers' advice and travel east.

"We're going to Cinder Hill, that's final!" she said, gesturing northward. "You told me that I was in charge, don't complain when I make a decision you disagree with!"

"And all I'm saying is that it's better to listen to advice than to ignore it." he replied.

"You don't understand how important this job is to me! I have spent so many years working on the wrong thing, achieving the wrong goals, and now I have the ability to fix that. The sooner I get this done, the more likely Professor Ansen is to take me seriously!" she objected. "If you don't want to go with me, then you're welcome to go home."

"I'm thinking at this point I may as well. What point is there in working as a team if you won't even listen to me?"

"I am listening, but I'm disagreeing. There is a difference." she said. As she started down the northern road, she continued, "That's enough. Either you're coming with me, or I'm leaving you behind."

He shook his head, wondering where the confidence she was displaying had exploded from. She was not the same person he had met just a week earlier. However, he accepted her plans and began to follow her.

As they continued towards Cinder Hill, the two noticed some strange things about the surrounding area; The road they were following seemed to fade over time under what appeared to be drying mud. A look down the side of the hill towards the sea showed a large amount of uprooted trees and large boulders, and a look up the other side showed a barren, almost smooth hill. It wasn't long before they found orange barricades propped up on the side of the hill, complete with blinking lights and warning signs that read, 'CAUTION, UNSTABLE SOIL'.

"What happened here?" Kamin asked.

"One thing I hear about this area when I'm watching the news every summer is that it's prone to mudslides after large hurricanes. I didn't even think about it, but it looks like that's what's going on here." she said.

"Aren't those dangerous? Should we be here?"

She studied the area around her. She kicked at the mud and noticed that it was already starting to harden, then looked at the sky to see that not a cloud was in sight. "I think we should be good. It looks like this might have happened a few days ago."

"Are you sure?" he asked.

"I'm reasonably sure."

The two continued along the terrain, following the barricades as they went along in hopes that it would lead them to the other side. The destruction stretched on and on until they reached what looked like a maintenance crew who were cleaning up the area. They approached one of the workers to inquire about the situation.

"Excuse me, sir," Kamin asked.

The construction worker turned around and looked at them. "What are you doin' here? This place ain't safe for travel, get!" he said.

Kamin looked around at the barren, debris-littered landscape. "No kidding. But we're already so far, how much longer is it until we reach the other side?" he asked.

"You're not gonna to get through any time soon," the man said. "C'mere and look at this." He led the two towards a small hill. At the top, they had a clear sight of what was ahead; the road to Cinder Hill crossed over a bay lined with steep cliffs. However, the bridge that was once a stunning display of engineering was now a twisted pile of broken metal beams, buried under tons of boulders, mud and uprooted trees.

"Wow..." she said, marvelling at the sight.

"It's even worse on the other side, that's where most of the rocks came down. The people in Cinder Hill are really lucky that they have that hill blockin' the way... I'm sure that place would have been wiped out again if that weren't the case."

"How long do you think it'll take before repairs happen?" Kamin asked.

"Hard to say. Mayor Barrin is having every construction firm in Cinder Hill move out here to clean up and repair the bridge. I'd say the road will be travel worthy in three to four days."

"Three to four days?" Andrea asked, grunting with frustration. "It's always something!"

"Three to four days is impressive, lady," he said. "But if you really need to get into Cinder Hill, you're gonna have a bad time. Only way I know is through the mountains, cause this road is destroyed, the road east of Slate Valley is still being repaired, and the Pacifica Land Bridge isn't open to the public yet."

Kamin leaned over to whisper to Andrea. "So, how about we go to Slate Valley..." he said with a smirk on his face.

She groaned. "What other choice do we have?"

"If you're going through those mountains, be careful. There's no telling if there's more instability up there." the construction worker warned. "Personally, I'd suggest what your friend is saying. Slate Valley is your best bet, you can camp out there until we've got the road fixed."

"You heard him!" Kamin followed up.

She sighed, then turned around and began walking the other direction. "Fine, come on."

She couldn't help but feel disappointed. Things were starting to look up, only for them to be taken down a notch. What annoyed her the most was Kamin's apparent gloating. Things were already getting off on the wrong foot with him and he seemed interested in only making things worse. She questioned why he was so intent on following her if he wasn't interested in being friendly. Did he perhaps have some unseen motive? She didn't dare voice her concerns, however, as she felt it would be a waste of time and only serve to deepen a divide between them.

As they backtracked towards the fork in the road, they saw another traveller coming up the path. He was energetically walking through the sticky mud, without a care in the world, tossing a Pokéball into the air as he did so. As the boy came closer, Andrea couldn't help but feel like she recognized him.

Before long, his loud, out of tune singing could be heard. "No time to question my moves, stickin' to the path I choose~ We're gonna do it right, I'll never run from a fight~"

As they got closer, Kamin called out, "Hey there, kid! The road's destroyed, you might want to turn around now."

The boy's cheerful singing stopped as he looked at the two. "Hey! You're that mean lady!" he shouted, pointing at Andrea.

"Oh no... Not him..." she thought to herself.

"Hold on there, sport, she's not mean! Well, not most of the time." Kamin said. "Do you two know each other?"

"Yeah, she yelled at me back in my home town! She's a meanie!"

"Let's just go, forget him," Andrea said, grabbing Kamin by the arm and brushing past Kyle. "He's not worth our time, trust me."

"See?! SO MEAN!" he said excitedly. Without waiting for her to respond, he continued, "You're just mad cause I beat you before!"

"Don't care!" she shot back.

"Hey! Come back! I challenge you to a battle!" he shouted.

"Look, kid! I didn't have time for you before, and I certainly don't have time for you now! I will never have time for you!" she shouted. "What do you not understand about that?"

"You're just afraid I'll beat ya again, aren't ya?!"

"No, I don't have--"

"Chicken!" he said, making rude gestures as he continued to follow them.

Kamin turned around, grabbing Kyle by the shoulders. "Can you leave us alone, please? We have important things to do." he said in a stern voice. "Unfortunately, you are not part of those things."

He started to stamp his feet like a tantrum-throwing child. "I want a battle! I want one now!"

"We h--"

"Battle! Battle!" he chanted angrily while stomping around.

"Oh dear... just battle him and get it over with already." he said.

She threw her arms up in the air. "If it will get you off of our back... I'm not going easy on you this time." She grabbed Furball's Pokéball and threw it forward, unleashing him in a bright flash of light.

Kyle squealed and took several steps back, then turned his Pokémon League hat around. "I don't care! Your best is my worst! You'll never beat me!" He reached into his denim vest pocket, grabbing a battered and scratched Pokéball, then tossed it out into the field. "Ghastly! I choose you!"

"You're going to have a tough time with that, Andrea," Kamin said. "Ghosts are incredibly tough to deal with for most Pokémon."

"I'll think of something..." she said.

"Ghastly!" Kyle called out. "Hit 'em with a Curse!"

Ghastly hovered over the battlefield, its eyes beginning to glow red as it fixed a cruel glare on Furball. Purple whirls of energy began to raise from Ghastly's cloud, while a dark blue glow began to envelope Furball. The glow fizzled out fairly quickly and he seemed to be unaffected.

"What? No way!" Kyle said in surprise.

"Didn't he try that before?" Andrea thought to herself. She recalled her first battle with him, back in Blueleaf Village. She didn't understand why, but it seemed that most attacks that Ghastly used seem to have no effect, while Furball's attacks ended similarly. She reasoned that a physical attack wasn't going to work, but at the same time, struggled to think of anything that might work. Fire or possibly even electricity came to mind, but surely Furball wasn't capable of such attacks. "I'm not sure what to do, I won't be able to touch it, will I?"

"Probably not," Kamin said. "But I'll let you figure out the way forward on your own, otherwise you'll never learn."

"Furball, come back, I don't think you'll be able to do anything," she said, holding out Furball's Pokéball. As he deformed into a red blob of light and slipped back inside, she tossed out another Pokéball. The Pokéball exploded in a shower of jet black feathers, revealing Sorrow.

"Oooh, that's such a pretty bird!" Kyle said. "Ghastly, attack with a Shadow Ball!"

Sorrow lifted off into the air as Ghastly summoned up a crackling orb of dark energy. Ghastly hurled the ball of energy at Sorrow, but completely missed.

"No!" he shouted.

"Sorrow, let's try something different! Try your best to kick up some wind and let's see what happens!" she called out.

Sorrow did as she was told and closed the distance towards Ghastly, then with a mighty flap of her wings, began to direct a strong gust of air at it. Ghastly's facial expression changed from sadistic glee to fear and agony as the gaseous orb surrounding its ethereal eyes began to blow away. It tried its best to escape, but Sorrow pursued relentlessly, blowing more and more of it away. Ghastly ran to the protection of Kyle, slipping back into its Pokéball as Sorrow landed in front of them and squawked.

"Brawwwwk! Different!" she crowed.

"Yeah!" Andrea said excitedly. "Eat that, kid!"

"Aww man..." he said, reaching for another Pokéball. He tossed it forward, releasing a small and round pink creature. "Come on, Igglybuff, show me your stuff!"

The Igglybuff looked up at Kyle with dewy, puppy dog eyes, a wide frown stretching across its round face. It took a look at Sorrow, then immediately ran in fear, cowering behind Kyle's ankle.

"You can do it, I believe in you," he said. "Use a Copycat attack!"

"Copycat?" Andrea asked, watching the Igglybuff as it timidly left its master's side and stood still with a blank stare on its face. "Like... Oh, I get it. Sorrow, it's going to copy your next attack, do something that it can't! Maybe one of your curses!"

"Brawwwk!" Sorrow squawked, lifting off into the air. As she hovered in place and concentrated, an icy, white rune began to form under her talons. When the rune reached its full strength, it burst into a dozen shards and rained down on Igglybuff, each carrying with it a piercing, frigid wind. Igglybuff was barely able to defend itself from a pesky fly, let alone an actual attack. It was overwhelmed by the cold and the shards of ice striking it, plopping over.

"Wow..." Andrea and Kyle said in unison.

Kyle grabbed Igglybuff's Pokéball, recalling it. "Down to my last guy..." he said. "Come on, Taillow, make it count!" With a swift motion, he launched his final Pokéball into the air. It exploded into a shower of blue feathers, revealing a small red, white and dark blue bird. It flapped its tiny wings as it descended to the ground, ready for orders. "You're quick, buddy! Get in there and show that bird who's boss! Drill Peck!" The Taillow jumped up and flew into the air, soaring towards Sorrow.

"I bet you're quicker, Sorrow! Counter it!" Andrea called out.

Sorrow locked in on the incoming Taillow, flying off to the side in an attempt to get behind it. The Taillow was quick to react, however, maintaining a bee-line towards her. Sorrow moved again, this time getting a flanking position, which she capitalized on. She moved in quickly, following the Taillow's every move as it tried shaking her, but it couldn't.

"Brawwwwk! Counter, counter!" she squawked before latching her crooked, sharp beak onto the Taillow's long tail feathers. She yanked backwards, knocking Taillow's balance off and sending it spiraling down towards the ground. She quickly pursued, squawking mockingly as she followed it down. With a soft thud, the Taillow crashed into the mud, followed by Sorrow, who landed on top if it and started pecking at it mercilessly.

"Yes!" Andrea shouted.

"No fair! You're cheating, that bird is too much!" Kyle shouted as he called back his Taillow.

Andrea and Kamin looked at each other and let out a laugh.

"Did you like that?" she asked as she raised her hand to high-five Kamin.

"You did good," he said, high-fiving her. "Don't get too excited though, he doesn't seem to know what he's doing."

"Yeah, but it feels good beating that annoying little twat."

Kyle wandered by, heading north. "Aww man..." he moaned, hanging his head dejectedly. "Guess you won, lady." He never bothered to look up at them, miserable over his loss.

"Shouldn't we tell him the road's out?" Kamin asked.

"Let him figure that out, I don't want to get stuck walking next to him," Andrea replied. "I really hope I never see that kid again, that's the second time he's annoyed everyone just to get his way."

"Hmm. Well... I'm pretty sure both of us were just as bad when we were his age."

"I wasn't. I was the quiet type, sitting in the back of the class room studying both my school work and other people. It didn't feel right to be loud and obnoxious like he is." she said. "Whatever he decides to do is his business, I just hope to have no part of it. Come on, let's get out of here."

"Fair enough."

- - - - -​

Author's note: The character that appears in this chapter, Kyle Fletcher, is the previously introduced character Kyle O'Connor. His name has been changed to something simpler and something easier for me to remember.

It should also be noted that Andrea's choice to navigate the terrain of the mudslide area was based on her personal observations and lack of knowledge. Emergency management groups recommend never crossing through a mudslide until you receive official word that it is safe, even after the initial danger has passed. Please, listen to your local authorities if you are ever in a similar situation.
 
You have a dreadful habit of updating whenever I don't have time to read rightaway. Anyway I thought I'd at least drop a quick comment here to say that I am still reading. It's good to see the story move back into sanity for a while. Little sceptical about Kamin's joining the party, but we'll see :)
 
Okay I have been able to catch up with both chapters now and they were...an adventure in a way xD chapter 16 was sort of a way to conclude the arc and I think it matched. Andrea making her big escape and having her life thrown upside down more was interesting, and it was also interesting to see Kamin turn into her travelling partner, I wonder hwo that relationship will develop.

Chapter 17 was sort of a breather and it was nice to see some things go right for Andrea for once. Tbh there isn't much to say besides that, aside from the fact that it showed that Andrea has grown there's no much story progression.

I do like how you portray Andrea's overconfidence. She has gotten more secure of herself, but now she's too secure to the point she makes choices based solely on what she thinks without taking others' opinions into account, she also seems to be slightly less patient.

While your chapters aren't short I actually think 17 could've been just a little longer xD it really did feel like not much happened in the chapter itself.
 
Holy shit. This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. You two (it's still collaborative, right?) have real talent.
Sometimes you get a little verbose, and tell rather than show, but you've got great description, terrific action, and amazing worldbuilding. And, while it's hard to see where the plot is going, you've dropped a lot of intriguing hints here and there. Andrea is a well-rounded, three dimensional character, and a compelling protagonist, and I appreciate how, despite being reluctant and often fearful, she still ends up being very proactive. Larson was cool enough while he was traveling with Andrea, but Kamin's more interesting by far.

I gotta admit, I cackled like mad when I read that Kamin had a Nuzleaf named Locke. But the ghosthunting doctor being named Egon is even funnier. Reference jokes are awesome.
There's a couple of things I would recommend, though. Andrea's mom seems a little extreme and deeply unlikable as a character. I'm not sure how you fix that, but I want you to be aware it's an issue. Also, the moment where Andrea witnesses an evolution, and doesn't know what it is rings hollow. Shouldn't, like, everyone in the Pokemon world know what evolution looks like? At the very least they'd have seen it on TV, I would think.
last, I totally agree with you about Drapion. It's too dang goofy looking, it looks like a scorpion made sweet sweet love to an accordion and they somehow had a child together.
 
Thanks for the feedback, everyone! It really does help me keep the motivation to continue working on this story as I battle my personal problems. It feels good to know that people enjoy my work. The next chapter is currently about 3/4th done, so expect it soon!

Anyways, over time, we've gotten quite a few questions about Storm Island, either through replies in this thread, through PMs here and elsewhere, or even one guy who found my email and sent me a load of questions. I've taken the time to gather these questions up and answer them in one central place. Some have been editted for grammar, context, or just to be slightly better. They'll be posted in my blog, here.

I'm entirely open to more Q&A, so if anyone has any followup questions, let 'em loose and I'll get to them when I feel the time is right.

Holy shit. This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. You two (it's still collaborative, right?) have real talent.
Technically. The Q&A goes into a bit more detail with the first question.

Andrea's mom seems a little extreme and deeply unlikable as a character. I'm not sure how you fix that, but I want you to be aware it's an issue.
That's intended. She is supposed to be a detracting force when it comes to Andrea's goals, but is easily shut off by Andrea avoiding contact with her. Her attitude serves as motivation for Andrea to prove her wrong, to show that she can actually do something with her life. Future chapters may crop up which show more of Andrea's mother, to show that she's not a total douche, but I can understand why it seems that way right now.

last, I totally agree with you about Drapion. It's too dang goofy looking, it looks like a scorpion made sweet sweet love to an accordion and they somehow had a child together.
I like that comparison, it fits very well.

Also, the moment where Andrea witnesses an evolution, and doesn't know what it is rings hollow. Shouldn't, like, everyone in the Pokemon world know what evolution looks like? At the very least they'd have seen it on TV, I would think.
The way we have the world envisioned, pretty much all things Pokemon are entirely optional in peoples' lives if they choose to make them. The games and anime seem to make Pokemon the be-all-end-all of existence, while originally, we tried to make a world where people have jobs that aren't strictly related to Pokemon, or where their exposure is limited (though, it obviously has an enormous impact on the characters once they got into it, since this story IS pokemon fanfiction). Things such as police officers, radio personalities, news reporters, restaurant owners, construction workers, astronomers, etc. In this world, Pokemon training at its core is supposed to be a hobby for most people, while it's a job for those who take it seriously and competitively, much like professional sports.

Andrea is one of those people. Her first real exposure to Pokemon (besides her father's Growlith, which has never evolved, and Larson's Charizard melting her first bike, which she never witnessed evolving) was with Dr. Spruce's Furret; While it's impossible that she'd never interact with them every now and then, she chose to focus more on humanity than Pokemon, more on learning something useful for the benefit of mankind. It's like someone with a master's degree in engineering walking through the park and not being able to tell the difference between a duck and a goose (yes, I'm grabbing that example from someone I know).
 
Chapter 18
Storm Island
Chapter 18: Slate Valley

The hours had melted away as Andrea and Kamin slogged through the muddy and overgrown road to Slate Valley. What started as an optimistic morning of reaching their destination of Cinder Hill turned into a miserable trek through the wilderness that they weren't prepared for. They didn't have enough supplies to camp out as long as they were going to, which caused friction between the two, but they tried to remain on the same page.

"We have to stick together, or we're getting nowhere," Kamin said. "I'm sorry about how I acted earlier today, that wasn't right of me."

"Huh?" Andrea asked, barely paying attention to anything, only focusing on the monotonous task of putting one foot forward along the road.

"How I let you make the decision of where we were going, then immediately tried to second guess you. That's not how partnerships work."

"Don't worry about it," she said. "This has been a stressful couple of days, that happens in these situations."

"Regardless, I'll try to be a bit better about it," he said. "So, how much longer is it before we reach Slate Valley, do you think?"

She raised up her R-Kit, bringing up the map application. "Looks like it's just over this next hill." she said as she studied the map. "I wonder if there's a safe way up into the mountains from here."

"We could look, but somehow I doubt it. Isn't this place just one giant quarry with sheer cliffs?"

"I think so. But there might be a way through."

They reached the top of the hill, being greeted by the marvelous sight of Slate Valley. It was something that neither of them expected; A large pocket of exposed stone stretched as far as the eye could see, with marble, basalt, granite, limestone and sandstone spires reaching out of the basin, carved down into smooth squares. Giant cranes, trucks and excessively massive saw blades and drills dotted the landscape, but it appeared as if most of the usual workers weren't present. Around the sides of the quarry were large, black cliffs that looked impossible to climb, while the bottom-most levels were flooded.

"Wow, look at it!" Kamin said in excitement. "I've heard a lot about this place, but I've never been here... This place is amazing."

"Yeah, it is pretty cool, isn't it?" she replied. "I'd expect this place to be busy, though. All those machines, but no people... where is everyone?"

"Trying to clean up the road, maybe?"

"So now what?" she asked. "I'm not sure what we're supposed to be doing here while we wait."

"I'm sure we could find something to pass the time," He pointed at a large log cabin that sat at the top of the cliff. "That looks like a visitor center, let's look there."

She led him down the cobblestone path towards the lodge. The area was calm, quiet and peaceful, with large pine trees shading the area. It felt almost too quiet. Aside from the workers who usually crowded the area, it was also a popular tourist destination and campground. However, the recent weather as well as the destruction of nearly every road into the area was likely responsible for the emptiness.

Inside of the lodge was a bit different. There were about a dozen people inside, clustered into small groups, looking at information about the local area, stopping by the tea shop or speaking with the lone pair of employees. They looked energetic, eager to explore the surrounding area.

"Find something for us to do, will you? I'm going to get in touch with Professor Ansen, let her know that I might be a bit late with this assignment." Andrea said, wandering off towards the cafe. She approached the communication center in the corner and sat down in front of the large, silver screen, then grabbed her phone. She dialed Professor Ansen's number, then rested her phone on the connection plate. After three rings, Professor Ansen appeared on the screen.

"Hey! There's my brave research assistant!" the professor said. "What can I help you with?"

"Hi!" Andrea replied. "I don't know if I'm going to be able to get up to the mountains on time, professor..."

Professor Ansen's expression shifted. "I had a feeling you'd be calling about that. I heard the area outside of Cinder Hill got hit pretty hard, how bad is it?"

"The road is completely destroyed, I can't get through at all. A landslide did it."

"Oh no, that's terrible... Where are you now?"

"I'm in Slate Valley right now, I'm going to try to see if there's any way up into the mountains from here."

Professor Ansen leaned back in her chair. "That won't happen. The only safe way up into the mountains is on the eastern side, but I think that road is still destroyed, too."

"So why did you send me to Cinder Hill if I can't get up into the mountains from there?" she asked with curiosity.

"I planned on getting you up there with a helicopter ride. You don't mind flying, do you?" she asked. "I haven't heard if the road to the east has been repaired, but you can head out that way and confirm if you want. It might take a day or two if you go that way, but it's better than waiting on the road to Cinder Hill being fixed."

"I guess I can try that," Andrea said. "I'm just disappointed I'll miss your deadline."

"As am I. I've tried speaking with my client, but he won't let me get another extension. He figures I'll keep putting it off, so he wants it done as soon as possible." she said. "But think of it this way, if you had listened to my advice and stayed in Silvermist City before the hurricane came around, you'd have probably never gotten there in a reasonable time. It's better to be late than very late."

"I'd rather have been on time... that was my fault, I should have left Blackwood Grove sooner than I did."

"With all of the crap you went through in that place, I don't blame you for taking a bit of a break. You're lucky to be alive! Don't worry about rushing to complete your task, just stay safe."

"I will," she said. "By the way, while I'm here in Slate Valley, is there anything you need done around here? Maybe pick something up for you to study, take pictures of, anything like that?"

"Not that I can think of... That area is pretty boring unless you're a geologist, if I'll be honest, and I'm not into geology that much. Though if you do see anything that looks out of the ordinary, don't hesitate to get a closer look."

"Sure thing, professor."

"Anyways, I really have to get back to work. Be good!"

The screen faded to darkness as Andrea collected her things. She tried thinking of what to do, figuring that if the road to Cinder Hill would be repaired in under five days, then the road east out of Slate Valley, which had been destroyed for nearly three weeks, surely would have been repaired by now. Yet at the same time, she wanted to continue to Cinder Hill as planned. She turned around to look for Kamin, jumping in shock to see him standing behind her.

"Your boss is right. This place is boring. The only thing I could find was a tour group that takes visitors through the quarry, showing off various 'points of interest'." he said. "So what do you want to do, sit on your hands and wait for the road to be fixed, or follow this tour group?"

"It can't be as boring as sitting around, can it?" she asked. "Let's go see what this tour group is all about."

"They're leaving in about twenty minutes. Follow me."

She followed him across the foyer of the lodge, over to the reception desk. Nobody was at the desk anymore, prompting Kamin to bang his fist on the table in disappointment. After a moment of waiting, a young woman peered out from the back office, then approached them.

"Sorry about that, folks, it's a rough day here. We're understaffed due to the road conditions." she said. "My name is Lila, uhhh, how can I help you?"

"We'd like to be part of that tour group that's running in a few minutes, please," Kamin requested.

"Ah, yes. That will be five silver dragons each, please." She struggled with the cash register, then called out, "John! How do I work this damn thing?"

Another man came out of the office and walked over. He clicked a few buttons on the cash register, allowing it to pop open. "I'm glad they don't have you running administration in here very often." he said. "So, two more for the trail, is it?"

"Yes, sir," Kamin said while Andrea nodded.

"Names?" he asked, grabbing a clipboard and a pen.

"Kamin Duskwillow," he replied.

"And what's your name, ma'am?" he asked.

"Andrea Dennison," she said.

He studied her closely, almost uncomfortably. "Ah, Dennison? Are you Professor Ansen's new research assistant, by any chance?" he asked, offering out his hand.

She shook his hand and nodded. "Do you know her?"

"Uhh, yeah." he said in an oddly abrupt manner. "Me and her go waaaaay back."

"I see!"

"I'm sure as a scientist, you'll add a lot to the tour..."

She giggled and blushed. "Probably not, I don't know anything about rocks."

"Hmm, I still think you'll make this trip interesting," he smirked. "Lila, can you close the place while I round everyone up?"

"Close it? But what if we have more visitors?" Lila asked.

"I don't think we will. But, if you'd rather stay in here and deal with them... and that cash register..."

She was quick to listen to him, doing what she could to close the lodge down while they were away on the tour.

"Follow me, you two," the man said. "You're in for a treat. If learning isn't your thing, you're at least in for some nice sights. This will be an interesting day for you..."

- - - - -​

Outside, the tour group had convened together. Everyone present appeared to be eager for the next few hours, with some commenting to each other about the stunning vistas they would see, and others talking about the local geological composition. While geology didn't interest her, Andrea felt like she was in the right place with the group; To her, it seemed as if everyone around her was as interested in learning as she was, something she felt was the key to living life.

The tour guide was pacing in front of the group, waiting for them to quiet down so he could begin. "Greetings, everyone! My name is John, and I'll be your tour guide for today. This lovely lady beside me is Lila, my assistant." he said.

"Hello, everyone!" Lila sheepishly said.

The group offered a mishmash of greetings.

"I'm sure I don't need to, but company policy requires me to recap what this tour group is about. Slate Valley is a unique place on Storm Island, offering an impressive array of geological formations present nowhere else on the island. Look up at the cliff walls, for example!" he said, motioning towards one of the cliffs. "Look at the layering. I'll get into the specifics later on, but if you can see, we have a large variety of stone layers here, all having been deposited over the past few million years."

"The base layer is made mostly of limestone and salt deposits, left behind when this area was under the ocean millions of years ago," Lila added.

"Indeed, and over the millennia, more and more has added up... loose sediment compacting down under the forces of enormous pressure, later on covered over by a landslide, which was later covered by volcanic activity... This area is truly unique!" John said. "But, before I spoil the whole tour, let's return to why we're here. We are here to learn about various formations, observe them in a multitude of states of exposure, as well as learn about the methods the construction workers here use to excavate the stone for use across the island."

"If you'll line up, we can begin the tour!" Lila said.

As the group formed a single file line and began to march off like soldiers, Kamin leaned over to Andrea and commented, "Boring..."

"I know... But try to pay attention. Knowledge is good to have, even if you'll never use it." she said.

"At least we'll see some nice things, I guess?"

"You could look at it that way, if you want."

The group descended down through the levels one by one, stopping every few minutes for more information, or to point something out. The path crossed a deep pit that extended at least one-hundred feet deep, flooded with surprisingly clear water. At the bottom of the sunken pit, discarded tools, a broken slab of stone and a collapsed crane could be seen, highlighting the danger of working in this environment.

"Working in a quarry isn't the safest job in the world," John said. "This area was the first to be worked by the Stonemasons' Guild nearly two hundred years ago, when little was known about the area. Unfortunately, it wasn't long before the first accident happened, where three workers lost their lives. We've chosen to keep the destroyed crane here as a memorial to those who've lost their lives over the past century."

"Without them, we wouldn't have such impressive cities..." one of the group members said.

"Exactly," Lila responded. "Slate Valley has supplied much of the construction materials used to build cities across the island. The only place this quarry hasn't supplied is Castle Selgarde."

Andrea sheepishly sidled along the edge of the sheer drop, trying to get a better look, but snapped herself back towards the path. While genuinely curious, she reasoned that it wasn't worth the risk. "It's pretty inspiring, you have to admit." she said.

"What is?" Kamin asked.

"Have you ever been to one of the big cities?"

"Once, when I was just a little kid."

"To think... all of those tall buildings, all of those marvels of engineering, started off as just some rocks in the ground."

"I guess," he said.

"I see someone's hard to impress..."

"I don't remember my visit to the city that much, that might be why. I'm sure when I see these big buildings up close, my tune will change."

The group carried on. Their trek carried them over another path that was flanked on both sides by massive pits, one filled with deep, cold water and the other filled with gravel and dirt. They passed by the eerily silent digging machines, each impressively massive in their own right, like gods made of metal. Andrea broke away from the group for a moment to inspect one of the large trucks, studying the intricate mechanisms that made it go. She was able to identify most of the parts, recalling her knowledge from her mechanical engineering class at school, but she had never seen such a machine up close.

"'scuse me, miss!" Lila called out. "Please stay with the tour group!"

"Sorry!" she said. As she merged back into the group, she asked, "Do you know how much those trucks are capable of carrying?"

"Unfortunately, I don't," Lila said.

"I'd estimate over twenty tons per truck," one of the tour group members said. "This place supplies every city on the island, it needs large trucks for transporting all of the material."

They pressed forward, deeper into the quarry. The smoothly cut and chiseled walls began to rise over their heads much like the buildings they helped create. Before long, the sun disappeared behind the walls, yet the quarry went even deeper; Further down were what appeared to be a dozen or so camps, some submerged by rain water.

"What's with all of the tents?" Andrea asked. "Is that where the workers relax and take breaks?"

"No. Stone isn't the only thing that the workers pull out of here," John said. "The deeper layers of the quarry are made of limestone, which is mostly composed of the skeletal remains of ancient marine creatures. There's also sandstone down here, which have surprisingly dense fossil formations."

"Currently, we have an expedition led by Dr. Denton Llane, which is excavating some of the fossils here for study and for placement in museums. Anyone heard of him?" Lila asked.

Andrea raised her hand. "Isn't he that guy from Whitehaven University in the Sakala region?"

Lila nodded and smiled. "Someone's done her homework!"

"Unfortunately, Dr. Llane had to cut his expedition short with the arrival of Hurricane Adele. But he'll be back soon!" John said, then looked at his watch. "Now, if you'll follow me... Normally I wouldn't do this, but since none of the mining crews are on site today, I'll take you through a more scenic route."

"Umm..." Lila started. "Are you sure that's a good idea? Things can get kinda dangerous around here..."

"Much less so when it's quiet like it is, I assure you," he said. "Besides, it'll be an opportunity to show them the old abandoned Storm Clan iron mines."

Lila objected. "Aren't those caved in?"

"Only one of them is. Trust me, I've been in the area before, I know what's safe and what's not."

"Uhh... okay... Follow us, folks."

Andrea was hesitant to follow, her sense of comfort drifting away. "Should we follow?" she asked. "Or should we break off and keep going east?"

"Hey, we paid with what little we have left. Just be careful and stick to the path. I'm sure it won't be too bad, and if it is, we can turn around."

They followed the group down into an even deeper path, one that was shrouded in shade and even darkness despite it being the middle of the day. The terrain began to become more uneven, jagged and littered with debris and gravel, indicating that this was an area that the mining crews had only recently begun digging out. The once chatty tour group had now quieted down quite a bit, with a sense of unease washing over them.

"This is kind of scary, John..." Lila started as she watched some loose gravel spill down onto the path from the cliffs above.

"Don't worry. We'll be coming up on a tunnel shortly, and after that, we return to smooth sailing and sunshine." he replied. "Don't tell me you're scared! You'll never become a tour leader with that attitude!"

"Hey, that's unfair! I just started this job and now I have no idea where you're taking us! No shit I'm scared!" she exclaimed in protest.

Andrea observed as the two began an intense argument, gauging the reactions of her fellow tour group members. She leaned over to Kamin. "Think we should leave? This is turning ugly..."

Kamin sighed. "I dunno. Might be a good idea."

Her phone began to ring. "Hold on." she said, looking at her phone to see who was calling, seeing that it was listed as Officer Meyers. "It's Officer Meyers! Surely she has an update for us!" she said. She answered the call. "Hello?"

"Andrea! Are you okay?" Officer Meyers asked.

"Yeah, I'm fine. Why?"

"You have to get out of there, NOW!" she commanded. "There's dozens of members of Team Rocket in the area, and they're looking for you."

"What? Excuse me?"

"Go! Now! You have no idea of the upper hand they'll have if they get their hands on you!"

"Where do I go?"

"Anywhere but there!"

"Hold on..." she said, lowering her phone. "Kamin, we have to get out of here..." she whispered. "That was Officer Meyers, she just warned me that members of Team Rocket are in the area."

"Team Rocket? What? Is that some sort of space camp?" he asked.

"Shhh!"

The tour guide looked back at them with suspicion. "Problem? Is this tour a bit too boring for you, perhaps?" he asked.

"Uh, no, sir," she said. She leaned over towards Kamin and whispered further, "Come on, I mean it. We need to go, now."

The two stopped in their tracks, hoping to break away from the group without making a scene, and it appeared as if they would do so successfully. However, as they turned around to leave, the tour guide again looked back at them.

"Going somewhere?" he asked.

"My friend here is feeling a little under the weather," she replied. "I'm going to get him back to the campgrounds."

"Be my guest... that is, if you think you can. Remember the way back?"

The two turned around to make their escape, only to see four men and women in striking black clothes approaching from behind. Emblazoned on their shirts were large red letter R's. The rims of their black caps obscured the top halves of their faces in darkness. Flying above them were large bat-like creatures with gaping, drooling mouths, and behind them were even larger, rat-like creatures with the biggest, sharpest teeth that she had ever seen.

"Stop 'em before they get away!" one of them shouted, ordering his Pokémon forward.

"Ah shit!" Andrea shouted, grabbing Kamin by the arm. "Run!" She pulled him through the oblivious crowd, then turned the corner of one of the quarried stones in an attempt to lose them. She returned to her phone in desperation. "Sarah, you there?!"

"I'm here," Officer Meyers replied.

"They're here, what do we do!?" she yelled.

"Keep your head on, try to outsmart them and get out of there as fast as you can," she said. "I'm going to get some help out there as soon as I can... And Andrea, please, listen to me. If they get their hands on you, don't try to be a hero."

"There they are!" another voice called out.

As Andrea reached into her pocket for a Pokéball and looked around to see where the voice came from, she felt a forceful tackle from behind. She struggled against her attacker, but she was no match. She tried crawling to reach her phone, but every inch closer she came, she was dragged back. "Sarah! Send help!" She was dragged back to the main path by a large and imposing member of Team Rocket.

"Nobody moves, nobody gets hurt!" one of the Team Rocket grunts called out. "Grunts, fall in!"

"Everyone against the wall, now!" one of the female grunts ordered. As the tour group lined up against the squared off, quarried stone wall, she approached the tour guide and handed him a sack of coins. "Thanks for keepin' your cool. Now keep your mouth shut, or you're gonna get it." She started walking down the row of people, then stopped at Andrea and Kamin. "Ah, good, you are here... The boss has been looking for you for some time. He'll be happy to see you."

"What do you want with us?" one of the tour group members asked.

She walked up to him and slapped him across the face, then pointed at him threateningly without saying a word. She took a few steps back to address the entire group. "Everyone move in a single file line and be quiet! Follow your esteemed tour guide, he'll be showing you where you're going."

The tour guide tipped his feathered hat and nodded, motioning for the group to follow him. He led them through the maze-like paths of the cut stone, further east, descending even deeper, while nearly two dozen members of Team Rocket followed closely behind.
 
This turned out to be an ok chapter, though not one of your best. I can see why you had reservations over the geology tour. Honestly ... I think you could use the tour and apparently meaningless events beforehand to set up the atmosphere you want before Team Rocket shows up. I assume that you wanted Team Rocket's entrance to be a surprise, which I can understand, but there's nothing wrong with giving the reader a sense that something's going to go wrong beforehand
 
I tried my best to set up a peaceful environment, so that when Team Rocket did show up, it would be a jarring surprise. I had hoped that getting Andrea (and the other tour group members) involved in the learning process would set a scene of serenity and innocence, only for that to fade away as the tour guide led them off of the planned path. Perhaps I transitioned away from fun and friendly too quickly, but I had extreme difficulty with this chapter (as is obvious with the quality).

Here's hoping that the next chapter is a welcome return to quality.
 
I liked the tour a lot, it added more texture to the world, and does the whole false sense of security turning into mounting dread well.
Although, if it were me writing, everyone in the tour group would have been Rockets in disguise.
But still, another great chapter.
 
chapter 19
Storm Island
Chapter 19: The Rocky Hideout

Andrea's vision was shrouded in darkness as she slowly trudged forward. She wasn't sure where she was, but the rough, uneven ground and echoed footsteps of her fellow tour group members led her to believe she was in a cave of some sort. She struggled against the plastic wrap that bound her hands behind her back, but it was hopeless. All she could do was follow her captors' orders and hope for mercy.

"Can't believe we got her!" a masculine voice said. "What a stroke of luck."

"That's not luck, ya jackass. It was all planned. She was just a few days late, tha's'all." an oddly familiar feminine voice responded. "Judgin' by the increased police presence, she got up to some trouble in that forest. I wonder what."

"Yeah, those cops... we safe here?"

"Of course? What do ya think she's for, tea and biscuits? The police won't dare to make a move on us when they see that we have the darlin' little princess of one of their own."

"You sure?"

"Trust me. I know these people, even workin' with some of them..." she said. "Alright, stop! You, you, you and... you too. Get in there." she ordered. "As for you three, you're in the other room."

"What are you going to do to us?" Lila's panicked voice asked.

"Don't you worry about that, you'll be free to go in a few days," she said. "Now get in there, or I'll change my mind about you specifically."

Her voice whimpered and faded into the distance.

"Spike, Smitts, Mixie and Fiona, I want you guardin' that room over there."

"Yes, sir!" four voices said enthusiastically.

"Diane, 'Turnip', Yonja and Crike, you're on that room."

"Yes, sir!" another four voices said.

"Don't screw this up, or I'll make sure you're never seen again," she threatened. "You two, follow me."

Andrea felt a push from behind, prompting her to move.

"You're very important to us, Andrea. I was startin' to worry that your old man was gonna find us... No matter how many wrenches we threw in the machine, him and his partner kept getting closer... and closer... and closer... But now I'm sure he'll be lookin' the other way."

"What are you talking about?" she asked.

"For some scientist, you sure are dumb. You are mine now. I will do with ya as I please, use ya as I please. By now, I'm sure the police have figured out ya weren't really responsible for the arson in Azure Ridge, and that they have a rat on the inside, distractin' them. But now that we got you, we got the upper hand." she said.

"What are you going to do to me?"

"Nothin'. Well, for now, at least. That depends on what your old man chooses to do. Just know that you're goin' to star in a movie, talk to him, too. You'd like that, wouldn't ya?"

"What about him?" she asked, inquiring about Kamin. "He has nothing to do with this."

"I haven't decided... I'm likely going to keep him until I figure out his worth." the voice replied. "Who is he? Your boyfriend?"

She kept quiet, not wanting to risk saying anything that might bring harm to him.

"C'mon, don't be shy," the voice said. "You there, boy. How do you know her?"

"Go to hell," Kamin's voice called out. A painful grunt followed the insult.

"Play nice, now!" the voice said. "So anyways, tell me. Where's that other guy you were with?"

She remained silent.

"It's a shame he ain't here... that Steelix of his would have made a fine addition to my team... But maybe we're lucky he wasn't. Kid's got balls, I'll give him that. We might not have gotten you guys if he were here." the voice said. "The boss is looking for him, too. Only he says it's personal with him, not like you."

"What do you mean?"

"Don't you worry 'bout that. We're here."

She felt another forceful push from behind as she stepped forward. The floor was soft as if it were covered by hay or wood chips. Where was she, she wondered? She was guided towards a chair and pushed down into it. Before she could resist too much, she felt a long length of rope coil around her, binding her to the chair. Shortly after, the hood obscuring her vision was lifted off of her head. She blinked her eyes to adjust to the brightness, to see a very familiar face looking back at her. "No..."

"Happy to see me again, hon?" the familiar face said with a crooked smile. "I can't remember, how long ago was it that I got ya fired from that restaurant? Four weeks, five?"

Andrea was consumed in rage. She had been waiting for an opportunity to 'voice her opinion' about her former co-worker, and now was the best time. She tried to launch herself at Angelique, but only succeeded in knocking the chair over.

Angelique lifted the chair upright. "Ooh, a fussy one! Behave, or you'll be punished!" she said in a mocking tone. She turned to one of her fellow Team Rocket grunts. "Brent, you got that camera?"

"Right here, ma'am," he replied. "Ready to record."

She nodded, then turned back to Andrea. "I need your help with something, Andrea."

"Go kill yourself," Andrea shot back.

"I happen to like living, so I think I'll pass," she responded, then wandered over to the other side of the room. "I need your help with sending a message to some very important people."

"And what if I refuse?"

"Would ya like to find out?"

Andrea was silent.

"As I thought. Brent, start the camera."

Brent set up the camera and clicked a button on it, counting down. "Three, two... one."

She nodded. "Ladies and gentlemen of the Storm Island Police... More specifically, Commissioner Levitt, Officer Dennison and Officer Reiserben. I am Angelique Gardetta, a senior member of Team Rocket, and this is an official statement from our group to you." she recited, having obviously practiced her upcoming speech. "Several of your officers around the island have been trackin' us down, and that needs to stop. We ain't done anything, and our presence on Storm Island has not been malicious or criminal... Until today."

She motioned for the camera to follow her as she wandered across the room towards Andrea and Kamin. "Today, you've forced our hand. Your constant pokin' and pryin' cost several people their freedom, includin' these two... Do you recognize them?" She kneeled down in front of Andrea and patted her on the thigh. "Tell them who ya are, hon, in case they're as dumb as I think they are."

She refused to listen, keeping quiet. She wanted to see Angelique's limits. While she knew that Angelique wasn't the nicest girl around, she knew that she was still human. She recalled her time at the Crimson Crawdaunt, remembering her interactions with the other employees as positively friendly and, at the time, believably benign.

"Come on, don't be shy!" Angelique demanded.

"Bite me."

"How rude!" Angelique shouted, then slapped Andrea across the face. "Now, what is your name?"

"Did you just hit me? I couldn't feel it." she replied.

Angelique clenched her hand and punched her in the chest. "Feel that one? Come on, your name. Out with it."

She wheezed as she tried to catch her breath, looking back up at her. "You think you're all that, don't you? You're garbage."

Angelique silently raised her hand again, this time bringing her fist across Andrea's forehead.

Andrea shook her head and continued her defiance. "Don't think you're going to get away with this."

Angelique let loose another fist. "C'mon, girl, my hand is startin' to hurt! Now, tell the folks at home your name!"

"My dad is a police officer. Hit me one more time and--" she started, being interrupted by another punch.

Angelique shook her sore hand and turned around to address the camera. "Hear that, Brent? We've got the darlin' little princess of one of the police officers, no wonder she's such a tough girl. Or so she thinks." she said, walking to another corner of the room towards a stack of boxes. She opened the box and rummaged around inside of it, grabbing a gleaming knife, then returned to Andrea. "That's a lovely scar you have there, little lady. You want another?"

Andrea had reached the limit, but hoped her disobedience would show whoever saw the video that Angelique was not as in control as she thought she was. "My name is Andrea Dennison." she said.

Angelique laughed. "I knew you'd behave... It just took a bit of time." She walked over towards Kamin and eyed him up and down. "And this... thing... We found it alongside her. I dunno who he is, or even what he is... Is he a vampire? Look at that pale skin, that goofy hair! What's with the green highlights? Eyeliner? What kind of guy wears eyeliner?" she said, criticizing every possible feature she could observe. "What's your name, vampire boy?"

"Kamin Duskwillow," he replied, not nearly as defiant.

"Duskwillow!?" she said before bursting into laughter. "What are you, some kind of role-playin' dork? Tell us your real name."

"I did."

"Whatever... I'm sure even a lowly creature such as yourself has family who cares about you, or did ya congeal in a gutter somewhere? Whatever the case is, I'm sure the police can track down who you're related to and let 'em know their little fledgling is gone." She turned to address the camera again. "These are just two of our hostages. We have eight more, but they're not nearly as important as our darlin' princess here."

Her tone shifted from condescension to serious and aggressive in a split second. "You've been fruitlessly strugglin' to find us, to find out what we're up to. I have to say, it's been pretty funny to watch you run around like headless chickens. I really did expect better of you, but considerin' we have several people on the inside workin' against you, I really shouldn't have."

She continued her address. "But now that you've seen that we have hostages and that we mean business, here are my demands... Several officers across the island have been investigatin' both me and Team Rocket. We saw a brief reprieve in the past week, but now I'm told they're back to investigatin' us. My first demand is that they be taken off of their investigations, or poor little Andrea here will suffer at my hands... I don't know, perhaps I'll... put her in a nearby restaurant and burn it to the ground? It wouldn't be the first time I've done something like that..."

Andrea growled and struggled in her chair, but was careful not to knock herself over again.

Angelique laughed. "My second demand is the release of several members of Team Rocket who have been arrested in the past month. Or perhaps we could come to an agreement... we release a few of the hostages, you release a few of our members." She brandished the knife again and walked over to Kamin. "If not, well... We'll see if vampire boy here enjoys the taste of his own blood." She walked over to Andrea and grabbed the chair, forcefully pushing it to the ground, then pointed at her. "And she'll burn alive. You have two days."

"You're not going to get away with this!" Andrea shouted as Brent turned the camera off.

Angelique kneeled down in front of her. "Ya know, you're right... 'Justice' eventually reaches every criminal, and will no doubt catch up with us eventually. But we'll have done what we need to and much, much more by then." She stood up and turned around, then walked over to Brent. "Keep an eye on these two. I'll have Trish and 'Jerk' down here shortly to help you."

"Where are you going?" he asked.

"None of your damn business. Know your rank, or you'll know that wall over there real intimately." She forcefully ripped the camera out of his hands and gave him the meanest glare imaginable, then left the room.

She wandered the rocky halls of the hideout, taking each and every turn through the labyrinth-like maze as if she knew them by heart. As she passed by some of the other members of Team Rocket, she gave them rude gestures, while others she saluted, then slapped and laughed. Each interaction ended with her being thanked despite her cruel ways. Her travels led her through many rooms, some filled with stolen technological equipment, others containing barrels full of plush, blue fur. Another room was lined with boxes overflowing with coins.

The final room at the end of the cavern was well built, appearing almost like a dungeon built in a forgotten age. Tattered banners representing the Storm Clan lay on the floor, with photos of various Team Rocket leaders and propaganda posters hanging in their place. Despite its aged and rustic appearance, the room had numerous televisions, each tuned to various news channels from across the island.

In the center of the room, a young woman was seated at an oak table, in front of her a small, white squirrel-like creature with an electric-blue stripe running down its frizzy fur. She was flipping coins at it, watching it catch each and every one, then pile them up according to worth and color. She noticed Angelique enter the room and perked up. "Where have you been?"

"Taking care of business. We got 'em." she said, dropping the camera onto the table in front of her. "I need you to give this to whoever it is you're talkin' to at the police department. Give her my regards when you do."

The young woman grabbed the camera and removed the disc from inside, looking at it. "What is it?"

"Our demands."

"Run them by me again, just in case," she said.

"In case what, Domino?" Angelique questioned. She was met with a sharp stare, prompting her to answer. "That they stop investigatin' us, and release anyone they've picked up in relation to us."

Domino shook her head and laughed, dropping the disc on the table. "You're not very good at this negotiation thing, clearly. That'll never happen."

"It will. They don't have an option."

"Oh yeah? What makes you say that?" she asked.

"If they don't comply, then the girl we picked up dies. Every day after that, another hostage follows."

Domino looked at the table in shock, aghast at her colleague's plans. "My god, Angelique... That's not how this is going to work. We came here for an important and justifiable reason, not to become murderers. I'm not handing this over until you speak to your father about what we'll do if they don't give into our demands."

"I already have, he's approved it."

"Did he..." she said in disbelief. "Why is this the first I'm hearing of this? Giovanni put me in charge of keeping your father on a leash. Do I need to keep you on one, too?"

"That depends on whether this is gonna work. You want it to work? Cause I do, or Giovanni ain't gonna be pleased."

"Hmm," she said, then picked the disc up. "I don't like it, but I'll get this to who needs to hear it. After that, you, your father and I are going to have a talk with Giovanni about this."

Angelique shrugged. "Suit yourself."

"Speaking of your father, where is he? I haven't seen him in a few days."

"He's in Cinder Hill with several of the goons, makin' some preparations for the next big thing," she said.

Domino nodded. "Fair enough, I just hope he's being sensible about it. We'll have to talk to Giovanni without him."

- - - - -​

"Uuuughhhn... my head..." Andrea thought to herself. She tried to open her eyes, but no amount of effort budged her heavy eyelids.

"My child..."

As soon as she heard the voice, her eyes snapped open. "There it is again..."

"Come closer, my child..."

Andrea groaned in pain, then sat up. She held her right hand to her throbbing head, looking around. She found herself surrounded by exotic flowers, back on the same mountaintop she had seen many, many times before. Only this time, she felt as if she wasn't really dreaming. But if she wasn't, what was happening? Was she still trapped in the cave, or freed and taken somewhere? Or was this some new trick? She stood up, but stumbled.

"You are not alone, my child..."

"What do you mean?" she asked. She looked around, but so no one. As she waited for a response, she wandered around through the flowers, looking for anything that might explain the voice's cryptic commentary. She noticed a patch of flowers across the mountaintop jiggle as if they concealed something and approached to see Kamin laying there, seemingly unconscious. She knelt down to check on him. "Kamin? Is he okay?"

"Your future is intertwined with that of his... He stirs."

She watched as he began to awaken. "Hey, Kamin, can you hear me?"

His eyes opened, widening as he took in the hauntingly beautiful visuals of the serene sky above him. "Where are we?" he asked, sitting up to look around. "What is this place?"

"I have no idea," she replied. "This is some sort of dream... I wish I had spoken to your father about it before we left." She picked him up off of the ground and motioned for him to follow. "Come here and look at this. If it's like any of my previous dreams, something will appear over this way..."

The two walked over to the pristine spring of water that lay in the middle of the mountaintop. The glass-like surface glimmered in the starlight as the ghostly outline that appeared every time before rose out of the water.

"What is that thing?"

"I... am Guidance. Direction."

"Look, whatever you are, I don't care. We need your help! We've been taken--"

"Hush, my child..." the voice whispered. "You must listen. The events of today coincide with that which is written in the stars."

"What does that mean?" Kamin asked. "Is that like fate?"

"Precisely," the voice echoed.

"What is my fate, then? It must be important if you keep appearing to me, and I demand to know what it is!" she said.

"The mists of time do not lift quite so easily."

Andrea and Kamin looked at each other, both sharing an equal amount of confusion.

"Do not despair about your current situation, my children. All is written... and your story does not end here."

"Then what's next?" she demanded.

"That which you desire will come to you, but at a price... Only to be taken away. Know that it has a purpose."

She looked at Kamin. "Do you have any idea what that might mean?"

He shrugged.

"Not every dark corner is as it seems, my child. Rays of light come in strange forms."

"Is it even listening to our questions?" Kamin asked.

"I don't think it is..." she replied. "Is anyone coming to help us?"

"The defenders of truth and justice will arrive shortly, but they are not your salvation. But you must hurry! If you do not act, none of that which is written in the stars will come to be..."

"So what do we do?" Kamin asked. "Do we listen to what it says?"

"I've been ignoring everything it's said, but thinking about it... I always end up right where it tells me I'll be," she said. She looked up at the mysterious figure. "If you're right about this... Maybe I should start taking these dreams seriously."

"There is wisdom in that idea, my child. Now, act!"

"What do we do?" she asked. However, the figure faded into thin air before she got an answer.


Although, if it were me writing, everyone in the tour group would have been Rockets in disguise.
The reason I didn't want to go that route is because I want some degree of plausible reality towards this story, even though parts show that this is obviously not the case (walking bone dragons, blood magic, etc). I also wanted to show that nobody is safe from Team Rocket, and that there's always collateral damage even if they try to target someone with pinpoint accuracy.
 
Okay, another great chapter, and I really appreciate a number of the things you've done here that undercut what we might expect. Your villains, while being terrible jerks, seem more real now as people, because we get to see a couple of them disagree. But at the same time, we see a certain camaraderie among them.
"Each interaction ended with her being thanked despite her cruel ways."
I love this. It gives a lot of texture to the Rockets, allowing them to be real people. Angelique might be a bad person doing bad things, but that doesn't mean she doesn't do right by at least some of her colleagues, and she commands respect. Some novice (AND EVEN EXPERIENCED) authors portray their villains as so villainous even their underlings hate them. But that's stupid. Even bloodthirsty maniacs have their loyal, respectful followers.
Also her argument with Domino, and the implied rift between Angelique's father and Giovanni presents intriguing possibilities, and dodges another mistake some make, which is portraying the villains as a monolithic organization of evil zombies. These people may all want similar things, but their methods and ideology might look quite different from each other. I hope this eventually leads to some sort of intra-Rocket conflict.
I also appreciate Andrea's resilience mixed with pragmatism. She knows when to quit resisting, but before then she doesn't give an inch. It's nice to have a hero with real backbone.
It's also great how you finally bring Kamin into the Mystical Dream Area, and undercut/lampshade the whole thing with Andrea's increasing irritation with the voice's refusal to be straightforward. And then she's like, well, I guess the voice has been right, let's listen to it, and hilariously it stops saying things EXACTLY THERE.
The voice may have Andrea's best interests at heart (or not), but it is totally a condescending jerk, and it's great that you realize it and poke fun at it. The voice was always the thing I've had the most misgivings about in this story, but here it seems you might be building to something less cliche than what it initially appeared to be.
 
chapter 20
Storm Island
Chapter 20: Fate's Hand

Drip... drip... drip... That was the only sound that Andrea could hear as she came to. She wished that she could feel as much as she heard, however. Every bit of her was sore all over, from the numerous bruises and cuts on her head to her neck and back. She wiggled around in an attempt to shake the knocked over chair around, but figured it wasn't going to do her any good.

Her movement attracted the attention of Brent, her guard. He appeared to be sleeping on the job when he snapped into a panicked consciousness and looked at her. "Eh? Having trouble sleepin' eh?" he asked.

She growled at him.

"I'd be grumpy too if I had to sleep like that," he said, standing up to walk over. "Here, lemme help. I imagine the boss is going to want you wide awake the next time she needs you." He grabbed her chair and lifted it upright again. "There, that should be a little more comfortable. Get some beauty sleep."

She silently ignored him, looking around at the room. Kamin looked as if he were asleep. The room they were in was small and circular, with old, broken and rusted mining equipment carelessly piled up in the corner. The floor was covered in old hay and bits of sawdust. Brent appeared to be the only one watching over the two, despite hearing Angelique say she'd bring in some more guards. Fruitlessly fiddling with her restraints, she attempted to formulate an escape plan, but she ran into a problem; she was completely clueless as to what she would do to get out.

"Fine. No need to thank me." he said, returning to his chair. He sat down and rested his elbows on his legs, leaning close to her. "So, what's your story? Why does the boss want you so badly?"

She gave him a mean look.

"Hmmph. Only trying to pass the time. Babysitting you is boring... I should be out with the big boss, setting our plans in motion. But at least the view from here is nice." he said with a chuckle.

She noticed him staring a hole into her, then looked down to see the top buttons of her shirt undone, exposing her undergarments. "That son of a..." she thought, trying to squirm around in an attempt at covering up. She didn't want to talk at the moment, let alone to Brent, but she figured that learning as much as she could about both him and his group's plans would prove useful in some form. "What are you planning on doing?" she asked.

"It's going to be big, but I can't tell you, even if I wanted to."

A roadblock. "Who is this guy?" she thought. She stared at him quite intently for a few moments, trying to judge him like a book.

"What are you looking at?" he asked.

"I'm looking at you," she said, trying to put on a menacing tone to her voice.

He laughed. "That's was cute, nice try. There's no way someone as good lookin' as you could possibly be intimidating."

"Try me," she challenged. She nodded towards Kamin. "Or try him."

Her comments were met with snickering. "Calm yourself there, girl. I'm not gonna hurt ya. I don't hurt ladies."

She was starting to notice a pattern that she might be able to exploit. He was very fixated on her looks and attractiveness, perhaps she could put that to use somehow? "You're not going to hurt me? Then do me a favor and button me up." she said.

"Mmm... I don't think I will. I like what I see."

"I bet you do, jackass..." she thought to herself. She began to think of a way to exploit what she perceived as Brent's weakness, but the severity of the situation was beginning to take its toll on her ability to think properly. Instead, she found herself focused on what would happen after she escaped. She kept picturing herself aimlessly wandering the cavern, being caught again and ending back up at square one. She decided to wait until the guard lost focus on her, hoping that she might be able to hatch a plot with Kamin while he wasn't paying attention.

What felt like an hour had passed, time she spent staring at Brent. She noticed several more things about him; his attention drifted quite easily. He was constantly checking his phone, or he'd grab a book and read from it. When his fellow Team Rocket members passed by the hall, he'd ignore the male patrols, but try to chat with the female ones, but they never stayed for more than a few moments. At other times, he would doze off, only to snap back into reality a short while later. She was beginning to think that she may have one of the most incompetent members watching over her, which raised her hopes that an escape attempt might actually work, if she could work out a way to set it in motion.

She waited for him to doze off again, coming up with a plan. She would attempt to flirt with the guard and get on his good side, possibly even loosen up the rope that bound her to the chair. He would be an easy nut to crack, she thought, but manipulating him would be a different story, and something she was woefully inexperienced at. But with a deadline looming over her like an executioner's axe, she had to try.

She glanced over at Brent again, noticing that he appeared to be asleep, then tried to catch Kamin's attention. "Hey, Kamin! You awake?" she whispered.

Kamin glanced upward, nodding.

"I have an idea..." she said. "I need your help with this."

"I'm listening."

"I've been studying this guy, I think I've found a weakness," she whispered. "I'm going to flirt with him, see if I can get on his good side. What I need you to do is play along and act like you're my boyfriend, and try to stop me from getting into his mind. Hopefully that should push him to do something stupid, like try to take advantage of me and untie me."

"And what if he doesn't? What if he does something worse?"

"Don't say that. This is the only plan I have, I don't need you to talk me out of it."

"What about what that thing said? What was it, 'you'll get what you desire, but at a price'?"

"Shut up!" she whispered. "I'm doing this. If I don't, nothing will happen."

Their quiet bickering caught Brent's attention, waking him up. He rubbed his heavy eyelids as he looked at them. "Whassat... no secrets here... missy." he said, slurring his words.

"Nothing," she responded.

He stretched and stood up. "Come on, now. I'm curious."

She paused for a moment, wondering if he was going to fall for the trap. "I'm just letting him know how much I regret being his girlfriend."

He sat back down, leaning in closer. A crooked grin stretched across his face. "You, and him? Aww, jeeze, ya gotta be kiddin'!" he said with a chuckle.

"Hey, a girl takes what she can get..." she said.

Kamin tried playing along. "Yeah, you're one to talk. You're always right about everything, aren't you?"

Brent was enjoying the situation as it unfolded listening to the two trading fake insults with each other for several minutes. His wide smile grew with each passing moment.

"I knew I should have listened to my father when he warned me about you," she said.

"Oh yeah? Does your father know you're not a precious little angel like you want him to think?" he retorted.

"Hey! What I do in the privacy of my room is my own business. And I'm oh-so-sorry I had to find someone else to fill your place!"

"Ho ho!" Brent commented.

"I need a real man, not some childish, needy and impossible-to-impress man-child."

"A real man like me..." Brent said.

The trap has sprung! She looked at him with a smile, implementing the next phase of her plan. "Yeah... like you..." She turned back to Kamin. "Look at him. He's attractive, he's strong... he's... he's smart... Unlike you."

"You wouldn't understand good looks," Kamin shot back.

Brent let the compliments go to his head. "Heh, thanks lady."

"Too bad it wouldn't work out..." she said, hanging her head low.

"It can! Let me prove it to you..." he said.

"Huhn?" she asked.

"You probably don't have much time left... you should spend it enjoying it." He walked over brushed her ragged hair out of her face. "You'd like that, wouldn't you?"

"I would... things are hopeless, I at least want my last few days to have been worth the trouble."

"Mmmm..." he mumbled, kneeling down and rubbing her thigh. "I can make that happen."

She looked at him, trying her hardest to make the smile on her face believable.

"You got very kissable lips," he said before forcing himself on her.

She was completely taken by shock, lurching back. "Come on, Andrea, just stick with it... You're making good progress..." she thought to herself. Before she could respond further to the kiss, however, Brent began untying the rope that bound her to the chair.

"Let's say you and I find somewhere private..." he said.

"H-Hey, what are you doing?" Kamin asked.

"Takin' your girl and making her mine."

"No, you don't have to do this. C'mon, stop!" he protested, genuinely worried for Andrea's safety.

Andrea was cautiously optimistic and realized the extreme risk of what was about to happen. Still, she had to play along until the moment she could escape revealed itself to her. "You don't get a say in this." she said. "I'll do what I want, and I want him."

"Yeah, be quiet, vampire boy! She's mine, now!" Brent said, grabbing Andrea by the wrist and dragging her away.

Before she pulled out of the room, she looked back at Kamin and gave him a wink, letting him know that everything would hopefully be all right.

"Alright, let's be quick about this..." Brent said, looking both ways down the hall. "I know of a private place we can go so none of my friends find us."

"That'd certainly spoil the mood!" she said quietly, keeping a sharp eye out for any other members of Team Rocket. She wanted to be as far away from them and as secluded as possible before she made her move.

He led her through the tunnels, tickling her relentlessly and trying to touch her in places no man had the business of touching, but she deflected every attempt. "Don't wanna play until we get there, eh? Whatever..." Brent said, wrapping his arm around her. "So, tell me. I bet you get up to all kinds of fun back at home..."

"You'd be surprised at how little..."

"That's a shame. A girl like you should never be wasting her talents."

As they turned a corner, she took a quick survey of the area; The area was empty of any other members of Team Rocket, and judging by how long they had been walking, probably out of earshot of them, too. Brent was completely wrapped around her finger, absolutely oblivious to her true intentions. They took a few more steps before she started her ambush.

She pushed herself into him as hard as she could, squishing him against the jagged, rocky wall. He was taken by complete surprise and lost his grip on her, smacking his head on the hard ground. She kicked him while he was down to buy herself a few moments of time, then looked around for anything she might be able to use as a weapon. She picked up a heavy, rust-colored rock, then brought it down as hard as she could on the back of his head. She took a step back and looked at him to make sure he wasn't twitching; he was completely motionless, but looked to be still breathing.

She took a moment to catch her breath, then started rubbing the plastic wrap around her wrists on the sharp walls beside her. As she worked at a feverish pace, her hands began to sting and bleed, but she didn't care. Any price was worth it for freedom. After considerable effort, the plastic binding shredded to pieces, giving her much more control over the success of her escape.

She knelt down beside Brent, grabbing whatever she could off of him. There wasn't much she could use, Team Rocket equipped its members with only the bare necessities. All she found was a beaten up black and red Pokéball, but it was better than nothing. She returned through the hallways, taking great care to backtrack her footsteps so she wouldn't get lost. She had a surprisingly easy time returning to Kamin's location.

"You're okay!" Kamin said with excitement.

"Shh," she ordered. She untied the rope around him, then worked on untangling the plastic cord around his wrists. "That was... some good acting there."

"I wasn't acting when he started to take you away. I am so happy he didn't hurt you." he said.

"Come on, let's get out of here. Follow me and be careful." She poked her head out of the room, looking both ways to make sure no one was coming, then slinked away down the hallway with Kamin right behind her.

"Do you know where our stuff is at?" he whispered.

"Forget it. Once we get some help, we can get our stuff back."

As the two stealthily made their way through the cavern, trying to find an exit, they got a look at how technologically advanced the place was. Rows of thick cables ran along the ceiling, flanked by pipes on both sides. Every few dozen feet, a speaker system hung from the wall. Team Rocket had certainly been busy in creating this place. How did they set all of this up in the middle of a busy quarry without being noticed, they wondered?

Luckily, the cave system they were in was complex enough to allow them ample spots to hide in the shadows to avoid the patrolling members of Team Rocket. Unfortunately, that same complexity doomed them into wandering in circles. The strip mining techniques used by the Storm Clan in ages past made the tunnels appear virtually identical; without any proper landmarks, they weren't sure if they were treading old ground or not.

"Don't tell me we're lost..." Andrea mumbled. She slid along the walls, peaking around every corner until they finally found a room they hadn't been to before. There was an overwhelming amount of heat blowing out of the room, and the mechanical hum of electronics drowned out the echoing water drops in the distance. The two cautiously entered the room to investigate and see if it led to another part of the cave system.

The room was quite high-tech looking. The walls were lined with concrete, while the floor was covered in ornately tiled flooring. Lining the walls were a long row of what appeared to be sophisticated server racks, while the other side of the room had several TV screens mounted to the wall. It looked like they were in some sort of secret spy lair rather than a forgotten mine. She caught a glimpse of what was on each of the screens, recognizing one as a picture of downtown Azure Ridge. Another seemed to show the Crestfall Harbor, while the rest were unfamiliar to her. Kamin also couldn't identify them, but figured they were from other cities on the island.

They couldn't stop to gather information, however, not when their freedom was at stake. Their decision to continue moving was a wise one; The sound of a door opening at the far end of the room caused them to duck for cover under the large table at the center of the room. Two goons entered the room.

"So what he say?" one of them asked the other.

"Well, he ain't happy about my choices... but I hear it in his voice. He's grateful for what I've done for the family."

"Still can't believe you're helpin' your family after all they've done to you."

"Family is family, and I joined to help them. If it weren't for them, I wouldn't bother stickin' around."

"I guess."

"We should really get back to work, or neither of us will be here long."

Their voices drifted across the room as they walked straight from one end of the room to the other, exiting into the hallway that Andrea and Kamin had come from. With the coast clear, the two emerged from under the table and headed for the other door. They found themselves in a cavern that was much more roughly hewn from the surrounding bedrock, as if it had been dug out with explosives. The area was littered with jagged metal debris and small rocks, giving them a feeling of uneasiness as they tried to navigate the tunnel.

Upon reaching the other side, they were met with an astonishing sight. Subway tracks stretched into the darkness on either side of them. Where could they be? Had they stumbled on the Catrianna Subway System? Is this why it had been delayed another month? How could Team Rocket's presence in this area possibly go unnoticed for this long?

"Train tracks... where the hell are we?" Kamin asked.

"I remember hearing on the news that a cave-in here in Slate Valley delayed the opening of the island's subway system... That must be where we are." Andrea replied.

"Which way do we go?"

"North will take us to The Crossroads, south will take us to Silvermist City. I say we go south."

"And which way is that, exactly?"

"Oh... right..." she said, scratching her head. "I don't know, let's just pick a direction and get out of here."

She took the tunnel to the right, leading Kamin down into the darkness. They stuck close to the wall, guided only by the faint glimmer of the surprisingly still functioning lights. Apart from that, they could barely see anything. Worse yet, neither of them had any idea how long they might be travelling for, or what creatures awaited them in the dark depths. But, it would appear that creatures were probably the least of their concerns as they saw flashlights ahead of them in the tunnels.

"Shit... Get ready to run..." Andrea whispered, stopping in her tracks and crouching down. She was almost certain they were members of Team Rocket, but she wanted to know for a fact. They may have gotten lucky and stumbled on a maintenance crew.

Voices echoed through the tunnel. "Nothin' down there, still. Don't know why the big boss thinks there might be."

"Yeah, I don't get it. We paid the construction crew off, they ain't comin' down this way for awhile."

"No... we're so close..." Kamin said, backing off through the shadows from the incoming Team Rocket goons.

Just then, one of the flashlights illuminated them, catching the attention of the wandering goons. "Who is that?" one of them asked.

"Someone who shouldn't be down here..."

"RUN!" Andrea shouted. She reached into her pocket and threw the red and black Pokéball to the floor, unleashing a large, furry rodent with extremely sharp fangs in front of her. She wasted no time in ordering it to defend her. "Attack!" she shouted, pointing at the three Team Rocket grunts ahead of them. The Raticate hissed and did as it was told, leaping through the air as its fangs began to glow with white hot fire. She grabbed Kamin by the arm and pulled him back through the tunnel, hoping to find another way out.

"Don't let 'em get away!" one of them called out. "Call for backup!"

"Down, boy!" another said, trying to calm the Raticate. His screams of terror and agony indicated how unsuccessful he was.

The distraction was a success as Andrea and Kamin put considerable distance between themselves and the goons. They ran as fast as they could back along the subway tracks, losing their pursuers in the confusion and the darkness. Their luck would be short lived, however, as several more goons emerged from the darkness ahead of them, effectively cutting them off.

"We have you surrounded, at least from this side!" one of the grunts yelled. They quickly and aggressively charged at the two, grabbing ahold of them as they raised their arms in surrender.

"Don't touch 'em, get 'em back to the holding room," another grunt said. "Dark Angel will punish them if she feels the need."

- - - - -​

Back in the holding room, Andrea and Kamin were back in their chairs, tied down even tighter. They were being watched like hawks by two Team Rocket grunts, standing silently like statues, almost like emotionless palace guards. They weren't interested in anything apart from keeping the two in place, staring into the distance with looks of brutal determination on their faces. These ones would not be so easily manipulated.

The door swung open and Angelique entered the room. "What happened? Where's Brent? And where's that other waste of life I had here?"

Each of the guards shrugged.

"I knew I shoulda kept Trish here, too..." She walked up to Andrea and knelt down in front of her. "Tried escapin', huh? Now that's somethin' I didn't count on... You've changed a lot since our time together at the Crimson Crawdaunt. Had I known you grew a pair, I'd have put you under a tighter watch."

Andrea growled at her again.

"I ain't makin' the same mistake. Gubbo! Get in here!" she called out.

The door to the room swung open and a large, bald man stepped in. His skin was pale and dough-like, his face round and covered in acne and small scars. He breathed through his mouth, offering a look at his grisly, decaying teeth. "Gubbo?" he said in an unintelligent, child-like manner.

She reached into her pocket and pulled out a chocolate bar.

"Gubbo, Gubbo!" he said, his eyes widening with desire as he looked at the candy.

"Ignore everything they say. Don't touch them, and make sure neither of them leaves this room. If you do that, you can have this later. Understood?"

"Gubbo!" he said, clapping with glee.

Before she left, Angelique offered one final warning. "Ya know, I was going to make your demise quick and painless... But now that you've really pissed me off, you're going to suffer. And if you try to escape one more time, I won't wait until the deadline." She addressed the two guards, "You two, I want you outside of this door. Gubbo can handle this himself."

As the room emptied, Andrea sighed. "It was worth a try, wasn't it? At least we're okay, for now."

"That... thing said this would happen, didn't it?" Kamin asked.

"Huh?"

"'That which you desire will come to you, but at a price... Only to be taken away. Know that it has a purpose.'" he repeated. "It also said that our 'story' doesn't end here..."

"I'm not getting my hopes up until I see the sky. I'd suggest you don't, either."

Gubbo stomped his foot on the floor. "GUBBO!" he shouted, pointing at them.

The two looked at him, then at each other in confusion. "Guess we better be quiet. He looks like he could snap our necks without effort." Kamin said.

Gubbo grinned and nodded. "Gubbo..."
 
All right I finally caught up. I had actually thought there was only one chapter for me to read xD I could've been done with this sooner but my week got kind of busy from tuesday onwards.

But anyways, I enjoyed chapter 18, I mean I like when you expand more on the world and the island's geography as well as its culture, that and I thought that it was a good break chapter while also moving the plot along. I did see that twist coming, not at first but I think it was around the time they first entered the querry and Lila pointed out how she wasn't sure if they were going down the right way. Well something about the whole exchange just kind of tipped me off about what could happen.

Chapter 19 was also interesting, I like how your prose and your style in general has been in the last few chapters, they read a lot quicker and have a very concrete pace but it's also light, like even serious and more descriptive parts are filled with enough flair to make them interesting and faster to read. The chapter overall had quite a bit of plot progression to it as opposed to 18 such as officially introducing Angelique, who I quite love due to her sarcastic and rude but at the same time fearsome personality, I feel like it's a nice contrast to Andrea.

The chapter also showed a bit more on how much Andrea has grown by not backing down to Angelique, though she might be pushing things a bit herself on that end. I'm also intrigued by the involvement that Kamin might have with the dreams now that he too has been invited to them. On that note I do hope we can find out more about what they mean soon, it seems like we sitll don't have any hint to it even now.

And lastly chapter 20. I remember how you said that you had some trouble figuring out how to protray Andrea's flirty side in this. Well...it worked for the msot part, I don't think she completely pulled it off but considering Brent was an idiot to begin with I guess it was enough. I was actually surprised that she and Kamin didn't get away, usually in these situations the characters are able to make an escape but it was actually an interesting twist that they were captured once more, though now I really do wonder how they'll get out.

Also, is Gubbo a Hodor reference :p
 
Chapter 21
Storm Island
Chapter 21: Ray of Light

Creak... creak... creak... That noise had been a constant rhythm for what felt like an eternity. It was being made by the rickety chair under Gubbo, who passed the time by leaning back and forth as far as he could before he would begin to lose his balance. To him, it was a game, and the rush of falling over onto the cold, hard ground was merely a consolation prize for losing.

Andrea was determined to make another escape attempt, but knew that getting past Gubbo would be far more challenging. The fact that he didn't speak and was a simple fellow made it very difficult to figure out his weakness.

"Any ideas?" Kamin whispered.

"None that are smart..." she replied. "I don't think what worked on the last guy is going to work here."

"No. Definitely not."

Gubbo snarled and stared at the two. "Gubbo!" he shouted.

"Guess he wants us to be quiet again," Kamin said.

Gubbo's eyebrows raised as his eyes widened. "Gubbo." he said with a nod.

"Keep your chin up. We'll get out of here somehow." Kamin whispered.

- - - - -​

Inside the server room, a pair of Team Rocket goons were seated at the main table, browsing the internet. Various things flashed across the screen, from sports news to comics to scantily clad women. Views from all over the island also appeared on the screen; Downtown Azure Ridge was seen, as was the boardwalk of Silvermist City. Another view showed the ash-flecked beaches of Cinder Hill, filled with all sorts of people.

"Get a closer look," one of the guards said.

The screen zoomed in, focusing on a group of young women who were tanning in the summer sunlight.

"Oooh, look at that one..." he said, pointing towards one of the ladies onscreen. "What I wouldn't do..."

The other grinned and giggled in a sinister manner. "Just think, when we take control, she's yours."

"Ya think?" he asked. "No way... We're not lookin' to take over, I thought."

"They may not be, but I am," the other said.

"You're crazy. One guy ain't gonna cut it."

"Oh yeah?! Just watch me!" the other one said, grabbing his friend in a playful headlock. "Let the world fear meeeee!"

The door opened up and Domino walked in. She stared a hole into the two goons as they goofed off. "You, get out. I need some privacy." she ordered.

The two goons fumbled with each other for control of the keyboard so they could hide what they were doing. "Uhh, hey boss!" one of them said, trying to cover up the screen with his hands as best as he could.

"Get. OUT!" she shouted.

The grunts looked at each other with a look of fear, then back at her and saluted. They both got up and found the quickest, even if it was the most destructive, way out of the room.

"Ugh, perverts..." she mumbled to herself as she sat down at the table and stared at the screen. "Can't believe I have to do this... everything we've worked for might go out the window." She slid the keyboard over to her, navigating through the computer system until she found the communication software. She entered her personal information into it as requested, unlocking access to the program.

After a moment of loading, the computer spoke. "Please enter authorization credentials."

"Authorization code R-Zero-C-Three-Seven. Agent Domino, administration division." she said. The screen faded to black and displayed the words 'authorization successful" before fading back into the Team Rocket logo. The sound of a phone rang several times before a shadowy figure's face appeared on the screen.

"Ah, Domino. What a pleasant surprise." the figure said.

"Evening, boss," she replied with a salute.

"You're calling in earlier than scheduled... What do you have to report? Is the operation going well?"

"It is. So far we've managed to stay under the radar for the most part."

"For the most part?" the figure said.

"You know these things never go according to plan, Giovanni. There have been--"

He grinned. "I understand."

"Our finances are secured. Turns out a lot of people here on the island enjoy illegal furs... If only we were this lucky back when we tried selling Slowpoke tails, right?"

"Cut to the chase, Domino. I've known you for over ten years, and you never make an unscheduled call unless something has gone wrong." he said.

She looked down. "Umm... yes. Has Salvatore spoken to you recently?"

"No, he hasn't. Has he done something I should worry about?" he asked.

Domino pressed a button on the keyboard. "Here, look at this." Surveillance footage from the day before appeared onscreen, showing the captured Slate Valley tour group being led into the caverns in a single file line, each with potato sacks over their heads, escorted by members of Team Rocket.

Giovanni's content expression faded from his face. "How long ago was this?"

"About a day and-a-half ago, sir."

"I asked you to keep Salvatore on a leash, Domino. Allowing him to take hostages has likely jeopardized our entire operation."

"I agree, sir. We have to do something. I'm requesting--"

"Where is Salvatore right now?" he asked.

"He is in Cinder Hill, the nearby city. He should be back in the next day or so." she said. "He's not the problem, though. His daughter is."

"Angelique? What about her?"

"She has taken it upon herself to ransom the hostages... Not only that, she's threatened to start killing them, too!"

"What?!" he asked. "Does she not care about the mission?"

"I don't think she does, sir. One of our hostages is a young woman Angelique first met while scouting out the city of Azure Ridge. To say the two despise each other to the core would be putting it lightly. Ever since the two met, she's seemed to lose sight of what's important, and I am extremely worried not just about the mission, but about the girl's safety, too."

Giovanni leaned forward. "I'm going to call her back to Kanto before she does anything else. If our operation on Storm Island fails, she will regret it dearly."

"Thank you, sir. But before that, what should I do about the hostages?"

Giovanni was visibly distressed, remaining silent as he both brooded over the situation and tried to contain his rage.

"Please, sir. Think back to what happened at Silph Co. Eighteen people died that day due to a mistake, and our organization has never been seen in the same light since. We used to command respect, now people hate us. They want us destroyed."

"Not a day goes by where I wish things could have gone differently that day," he recalled. "We've been walking a tight rope ever since then."

"We have, yes. And because of that, public opinion is starting to shift again, back to the good old days. People might start listening to us." she said. "Which is exactly why we need to prevent what's about to happen. All that we've worked on for the past decade will be erased if even one of these hostages are killed, and Angelique is both stupid and crazy enough to do it."

"You make a good argument..." Giovanni said, leaning back into the shadows to think for a moment. "How long until the next phase of our operation in Storm Island begins? Remind me."

"Anywhere between five and seven days."

"Hmm," he said, pausing. "Five days is too long to guarantee their safety. I want you to release them. After that, have both Salvatore and Angelique speak to me. I will sort this problem out."

"Yes, sir," she said.

"You're doing good work, bringing these kinds of things to my attention. I'm glad I chose you as my subcommander. Is that all?"

"That is all."

"Good. Make this work, the fate of a lot of people is in our hands. We can not fail again." The screen faded back to the Team Rocket logo.

She pushed the keyboard away, thinking about what to do. Discussing things with Salvatore would likely lead nowhere, as taking Andrea hostage was initially his idea. Angelique would be even more impossible to convince, even if Giovanni himself told her what to do. She felt like she was losing control of the situation, something that has never happened before at her command. As she continued to debate what to do, she left the room.

- - - - -​

More time had passed. Endless creaking from Gubbo's chair ensued. Combined with the silence of the cave, it was enough to drive even the most patient of monks to insanity. Before long, Andrea's desire to escape turned away from Team Rocket; now she was focused entirely on getting away from that incessant, endless noise. Her plans became more and more simplistic as the noise ate away at her sanity. Yet maybe simplicity was all that was needed to defeat a simple foe. She thought that maybe she could use his apparent lust for candy against him.

"So... you like candy, right?" she asked.

Gubbo ignored her, continuing to teeter back and forth on his creaky chair.

"I asked you a question!"

He stood up and walked over to her, leaning into her face. He took a deep breath and angrily barked, "GUBBO!" before returning to his chair.

As Gubbo sat down, the door behind him opened and Domino walked in. She took a good look at Andrea and Kamin, then patted Gubbo on the shoulder. "Gubbo, can you give me and our guests a few minutes of private time?" she asked.

"Gubbo!" Gubbo said, standing up and defiantly blocking the way.

"I asked you nicely," she said. "Now, can you please move out of the way and leave the room?"

Gubbo stared down at her, not moving.

"Let me guess, did Angelique promise you a chocolate bar?"

Gubbo's eyes lit up as he nodded happily.

"You've been a good boy and done your job here. Go find Angelique, she'll give you your chocolate." she said.

"Heeheeheeeee," Gubbo hummed with glee as he pranced out of the room.

She watched him leave the room and lumber down the hall, bulldozing everyone in his path as he ran to get his candy. She closed the door and locked it from the inside, pulling down a piece of cloth to cover the viewing window. "He didn't hurt you, did he?"

The two silently ignored her.

"I demand an answer. Did he hurt you?"

Andrea shook her head.

"Maybe he's not as stupid as we thought..." she said, walking over to Andrea. She knelt down and began untying the rope around her chair.

Kamin struggled in his chair. "Hey, where are you taking her!?"

"I need to get you two out of here," she said. "In four hours, Angelique's deadline is going to be up, and she'll make good on her threats to start killing you guys. I can't let that happen."

"You're actually helping us?" Andrea asked. "Am I dreaming?"

"No. This is as real as it gets, girl." she said, yanking at the gnarled rope.

"But why? You guys are the lowest of the low."

"Not all of us are. We're doing things here that are more important than you could ever realize. To get there, we just need to get our hands dirty, first." she said, finally freeing Andrea. She moved over to Kamin and began to work on his rope next.

"Pardon me if I find that a little hard to believe," he said, flinching.

"I don't blame you, and I'm not asking you to believe me."

"By the way, what is that thing?" Andrea questioned.

"What thing?" Domino asked.

"That... Gubbo thing."

"Don't ask," she said, finishing off Kamin's restraints. She motioned for them to stay where they were, then pressed up against the wall near the doorway. She looked through the viewing window, then down at her watch. "In two minutes, we're leaving. That'll leave a few cracks in the patrols that we can hopefully slip through."

Andrea stared at Domino as she looked through the viewing window. She was having a hard time accepting this turn of events. Was this some sort of trick? How could this possibly be real? Was she being led to Angelique, maybe? Or was this truly a bizarre and lucky turn of events? Was this what the ghostly figure referred to about when saying that 'not every dark corner is as it seems'? So many questions raced through her mind that she almost missed Domino's command to follow into the hallway.

"Stay quiet and stay close. If you don't listen to every word I say, they might be the last you hear. Don't be stupid, and don't be a hero." Domino said, leading them out into the hallway.

She led them through the twisting hallways of the old mines. The path they took was wildly different from Andrea's original escape attempt, and for the entire time, they didn't run into a single patrolling guard. During the escape attempt, they only went deeper and further down into the depths of the earth, but this time the path was mostly up hill and involved quite a few ladders. Getting a feeling for just how far deep they had been, Andrea was beginning to truly worry about just what Team Rocket was up to; If they had enough people to keep an eye on a cave system this massive and complex, they must have enough for something far more sinister.

As they made their way through another section of tunnels, a voice called out from behind. "Hey! Get back here!"

Domino put her hands on Andrea's shoulder before she could even react. "I'll handle this." She approached the Team Rocket grunt who was running down the hall towards them. "Don't worry, I've got things under control. Get back to work."

"Where they goin', boss?" she asked.

"With me."

"But where?"

"I'm moving them to a more secure area."

"Does Angelique know?" the grunt questioned.

"Not yet, but she will."

"I don't like this! They made a break for it before, how can you escort them alone?" she said. She reached into her pocket and grabbed a radio, pressing the transmit button. "Hey, any--"

Domino quickly grabbed the grunt's wrist and snapped it to the side, causing the radio to fly out of her hand. With a quick jab to the chest, she knocked the grunt back, then swept her off of her feet with a spinning kick. The grunt picked herself back up and put her fists up, ready for a fight. She tried striking back at Domino, but was easily blocked. Domino grabbed her by the arm again, twisting it behind her back and yanked upward enough to flip her over. She grabbed the defeated grunt by the neck, wrapping her in a headlock until she passed out.

She grabbed the radio and pulled the battery out, tossing both into an open box. Looking back down the hallway, she expected Andrea and Kamin to have made a run for it, but was pleased to see them hiding behind a pile of crates. "You're still here? That's surprising... You follow orders better than half of my goons." she said. "We need to go, now. We might not have much time left, now."

- - - - -​

Angelique was lounging with her feet on the table, idly flipping through a stolen copy of Storm Island Seductress when she noticed Gubbo blunder into the room. "What are you..." she mumbled to herself.

"Gubbo!" Gubbo said, placing his hand forward with a crooked, toothy smile on his face.

"What do you want?" she asked. "Aren't you supposed to be watching those two?"

Gubbo shook his head. "Dom... dom... Domimo." he said, slowly trying to pronounce the word.

"Domino? Is she watching them?"

Gubbo nodded.

"Oh... I guess that's alright." she said. "I'm going to assume you feel like you earned that candy bar, right?"

He nodded again.

"I'd hate for you to be disappointed again..." she mumbled to herself as she dug through the desk and grabbed a chocolate bar. "Here you go. Go find something to do until I need you again. Stay out of trouble, okay?" she said, handing it to him.

Gubbo grabbed the chocolate and crammed into into his mouth without removing the wrapper. He ran off into the hallway, stomping with glee as he did so.

"I would make such a good parent..." she muttered to herself, grabbing her magazine again. She flipped through the pages until she found where she left off, but then noticed movement out of the corner of her eye on the security screen. She leaned in to take a closer look, clicking on the fifth screen to magnify it. The screen showed the outside area of the Storm Clan iron mines with about ten visible police officers slowly and tactically approaching the mine's entrance. "Shit... how'd they find us so fast? Did Meyers betray us?"

She threw the magazine across the room, flung herself out of the chair and bolted out of the room. She stopped in the next room which served as a dormitory for the several dozen Team Rocket members and shouted, "Let's move, we need to get the hell outta dodge! The police are closin' in, fast! Head for the back exit, towards the subway tunnels. We'll rendezvous with our partners at the maintenance station! Go, go, go!"

A sense of panic erupted through the room as the Team Rocket goons sprang to action. They fell over each other as they tried rushing for the exit.

"Buncha idiots..." Angelique murmured to herself. "Mixie, c'mere."

A young woman with wavy crimson hair broke free from the torrent of goons and approached her. "What do you need, sir?" she asked with a salute.

"I need you to head to the server room and torch it."

"Should I try to save some of our data?" she asked.

"No, that'll take too long. Preparations for our next operation are nearly complete, anyways, we can work from memory from here. We don't need the police finding any of our information."

"What about the hostages?"

"Screw 'em! We don't need 'em anymore! No more questions, MOVE!"

"I'm on it!" she said with another salute and took off. She ran through the hallways as quick as she could

- - - - -​

"Alright, that's far enough. You can make it from here on your own." Domino said, taking a small knife and cutting away the remaining restraints around Andrea and Kamin's hands. "There are no more guards up this way and the way out is just up this hill."

"What about our stuff?" Kamin asked.

"Your stuff is ours now," Domino said. "Now, stay out of our way. I can't promise you'll be as lucky if you run into us again."

The radio on Domino's belt began to ring with static. "Domino, come in!" it rasped.

She grabbed the radio. "Yeah?"

"Code black! Head for the evacuation area immediately! I repeat, this is a code black!"

Domino looked at the radio as it went silent. "Wha? Code black?"

"What's that mean?" Andrea asked.

"Go, now!" she said, turning around. Without any further words, she ran back through the tunnel, disappearing into the depths again.

Neither of them wasted any time. They both ran up the hill as fast as they could, almost as if it were a race. When they reached the top, they were truly shocked to see that it hadn't been a trick; a long tunnel awaited them, and at the end was a blinding surge of sunlight. When they were about halfway to the exit, the shadows of about a dozen people began to enter the tunnel.

"Halt! Storm Island Police!" one of the shadowy figures said.

"Help us!" Andrea called out. "They took us hostage, but we escaped!"

A familiar face, Officer McKenna, led the group into the tunnel. "At ease, men, looks like they're some of the hostages we're here for." she said. "Where are the others?"

"They're back in there, somewhere," Kamin said. "Be careful, there's gotta be at least fifty of those criminals in here."

"This area is clear! Move up!" she shouted, approaching the two. "My god, Andrea, you don't look too good. You alright? What did they do to you?"

"Not much, thankfully," she replied, tackling Officer McKenna into a grateful bear hug. "You have no clue how happy I am to see you..."

"I think I have a vague idea," she replied, trying to pry Andrea off of her. "Don't worry, we're going to find these bastards and make 'em pay."

"Excuse me, miss," Kamin interjected. "They stole everything we had with us, is there any chance we'll get it back?"

"Unless they took it with them, I'm sure we'll find it," Officer McKenna said. "Hey, how about you two get back to our base camp and take it easy. There's about a dozen officers there, so you'll be safe. We'll get in touch with you shortly, okay?"

"Yes ma'am," Kamin said, motioning for Andrea to follow him. When they reached the exit of the cave system, he asked, "Man... that was a close call, wasn't it?"

"Yeah..." she nodded, not even listening to his question as she stared up at the beautiful sky.

"Why do you think she did it? Let us go, I mean. What did she mean about 'important work'?"

"I don't know, I don't care. I'm not going to try to figure these people out, I'm done with them." she said. "I'm staying out of the way, like she warned me to."
 
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