Thought I'd try my hand at writing. Creative Critiscm please!
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Chapter 1: A new quest! Unexpected Trip!
"Buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"! Jason hated his alarm clock. He hated his bed, and he hated how he had the smallest bed room in the house. The boy crawled out of his bed and slumped onto his feet. He walked down the stairs silently. Although Jason was almost 14, he still didn't have his first Pokemon. Jason had been forbidden to go on an adventure, yet his 11-year old brother Phil had already won two gym badges. "God I hate Sinnoh" He thought to himself as his mother served him his Pancakes. "Good morning Honey"! Said Mrs. Night in her usual upbeat tone. "Yeah, Yeah, Good morning" Said the sullen teenager. His mother had thought him too frail to go on an adventure, little did she know that all the time he spent "Studying", he was playing football or roughhousing with his best friends. As Jason walked out the door, hating the Sand that gave Sandgem town it's name, he noticed the van streaking down the road. "Is that the kid"? said the frantic driver. "I think so, just grab him"! Jason was grabbed by the shoulders and pulled into the van. "What the hell"?! said Jason in anger and confusion. He recieved his answer in the form of a punch to the face.
Uncountable hours later......
"Ugh, what the frack was that about"? Jason was lying in the middle of the road, he had no idea where he was, with a note saying "Sorry about kidnapping you, we thought you were your brother- Team Wire. Then he saw the sign. "Pallet Town, shades of your journey begin". "Wait, no, it can't be, is this Kanto"? A white haired man in a lab coat appeared before him. "Welcome to Pallet Town Young man. I am Professor Oak". The two talked for about an hour, Jason explaining what had happened, and how he was mistakenly kidnapped. "And that's basically what happened". Said Jason. "I see, well then young man, you need to get back home to your family! Unfortunately, I cannot travel with you, I'll just have to trust you to travel on your own, now, show me your Pokemon". Said Oak. "Well, you see, I don't have any" Said an embarrased Jason. "Hmmmm, I'll just have to lend you one then"! Said Oak. "Really"?! Said Jason as his eyes lit up. "Yes, but go straight home, okay Jason"? Said Oak suspicious 0f Jason's exitement. "Yes Sir"! Said Jason. "Now, Which Pokemon will you take"? Said Oak inquisitively.
"Hmm, Phil took Chimchar as his starter, so if I'm going to catch up to him, I'll have to take a water type" Jason thought to himself. "I'll take Squirtle"!!! Said Jason, more alive than ever before. "Okay", said Oak as Jason picked up Squirtle and headed out of the door. "Wait, remember to take the vermillion ferry back to Sinnoh on Friday"! "Okay Prof."! Yelled Jason already leaving Pallet. When Oak was Out of sight, Jason jumped up and down with joy! "Hehe, sorry Proffesor, I've got my own adventure to lead"! Thought Jason as he sprinted out of view.
Next time: Journey to Viridian City, An unexpected alliance!
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Comments?
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Chapter 1: A new quest! Unexpected Trip!
"Buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"! Jason hated his alarm clock. He hated his bed, and he hated how he had the smallest bed room in the house. The boy crawled out of his bed and slumped onto his feet. He walked down the stairs silently. Although Jason was almost 14, he still didn't have his first Pokemon. Jason had been forbidden to go on an adventure, yet his 11-year old brother Phil had already won two gym badges. "God I hate Sinnoh" He thought to himself as his mother served him his Pancakes. "Good morning Honey"! Said Mrs. Night in her usual upbeat tone. "Yeah, Yeah, Good morning" Said the sullen teenager. His mother had thought him too frail to go on an adventure, little did she know that all the time he spent "Studying", he was playing football or roughhousing with his best friends. As Jason walked out the door, hating the Sand that gave Sandgem town it's name, he noticed the van streaking down the road. "Is that the kid"? said the frantic driver. "I think so, just grab him"! Jason was grabbed by the shoulders and pulled into the van. "What the hell"?! said Jason in anger and confusion. He recieved his answer in the form of a punch to the face.
Uncountable hours later......
"Ugh, what the frack was that about"? Jason was lying in the middle of the road, he had no idea where he was, with a note saying "Sorry about kidnapping you, we thought you were your brother- Team Wire. Then he saw the sign. "Pallet Town, shades of your journey begin". "Wait, no, it can't be, is this Kanto"? A white haired man in a lab coat appeared before him. "Welcome to Pallet Town Young man. I am Professor Oak". The two talked for about an hour, Jason explaining what had happened, and how he was mistakenly kidnapped. "And that's basically what happened". Said Jason. "I see, well then young man, you need to get back home to your family! Unfortunately, I cannot travel with you, I'll just have to trust you to travel on your own, now, show me your Pokemon". Said Oak. "Well, you see, I don't have any" Said an embarrased Jason. "Hmmmm, I'll just have to lend you one then"! Said Oak. "Really"?! Said Jason as his eyes lit up. "Yes, but go straight home, okay Jason"? Said Oak suspicious 0f Jason's exitement. "Yes Sir"! Said Jason. "Now, Which Pokemon will you take"? Said Oak inquisitively.
"Hmm, Phil took Chimchar as his starter, so if I'm going to catch up to him, I'll have to take a water type" Jason thought to himself. "I'll take Squirtle"!!! Said Jason, more alive than ever before. "Okay", said Oak as Jason picked up Squirtle and headed out of the door. "Wait, remember to take the vermillion ferry back to Sinnoh on Friday"! "Okay Prof."! Yelled Jason already leaving Pallet. When Oak was Out of sight, Jason jumped up and down with joy! "Hehe, sorry Proffesor, I've got my own adventure to lead"! Thought Jason as he sprinted out of view.
Next time: Journey to Viridian City, An unexpected alliance!
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Comments?