Kyuuketsuki
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This story serves as a prequel to Journey out of Mt. Coronet. It will also be a short one, though a few chapters longer than it's released-first sequel. Even though it ties in, you don't have to read the sequel to understand this prequel, but reading it does give you more insight.
This story will follow the same pattern as the other one, which is events and memories, but they won't be as sudden, as in this one the character is remembering willingly (most of the time) rather than being attacked by them, and some chapters might take place entirely in the past.
New chapters will be posted Tuesday and Saturday, but not this Saturday. This pattern will start in the upcoming Tuesday (1st of Feb).
Enjoy. Constructive Criticism and reviews are always appreciated.
Index
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
1
“Please, just help me. That girl is all alone, and she might be in danger.”
“I don’t care! Why should I be bothered with helping kids get out of trouble? This is very typical of you! You just have to be the one that helps every single person in need! I’m sick of it, Wasaki!”
“Where did that come from?” Wasaki looked into Noah’s eyes, trying to convey his message over to him, but Noah had always been stubborn. Wasaki wanted to become his friend, but there was always some sort of wall that Noah had put up, and it blocked all of his attempts. “Look, just help me, please. You might just be the one that saves me if I get into trouble.”
“But you never do,” Noah said. “You were always the perfect kid.”
The pair was standing in front of an old building deep inside Eterna Forest. The exterior was made out of bricks, and vines were climbing them. Some parts of the windows were broken, and the front doors were half open, creaking, and moving with the slight change in wind.
“Are you too afraid?” Wasaki said, as a last attempt.
“No,” Noah replied. “I’m just busy, I want to go and get my next Badge, while you can stay here and chase imaginary girls.”
Noah turned before Wasaki could respond, and began walking away from his rival. It was frustrating for him. He didn’t view Noah as his rival, but rather someone who is on the same path. There is no reason as to why they shouldn’t help each other out. Their end goals for acquiring the Badges and defeating the Champion may be different, but the means are still the same; acquire the Badges and defeat the Champion.
But either way, he still had to see if that girl was safe. He had seen a small girl walking into the house before running into Noah, and pleaded for them to go in together, in order to form some kind of friendship, but it was in vain.
“I really wanted you to accompany me,” Wasaki shouted after the departing Noah. “We could have-“
Noah took a turn, disappearing behind the trees, and the sound of him running could be heard. Wasaki sighed, and placed his right palm on the door, pushing it gently. The creaking sent chills down his spine, and the cold air within gave him the feeling of emptiness.
“Come on, Wasaki,” He said to himself. “Don’t be afraid… That little girl might need you…”
He took several deep breaths, and walked. With each step, the floorboards lowered themselves and gave a creepy sound, and even though the carpet muffled it, the emptiness made it echo.
Then Wasaki looked down; there was no carpet. He felt dizzy, and thoughts of running out of the building ravaged his mind. The house was too empty and scary for him to venture on, and there was only one solution, to send out a Pokémon, and there none he trusted more than his starter, Chimchar.
He took off his backpack, and opened the Poké Balls pocket. There were four Poké Balls with hand drawn markings on them representing the Pokémon they were holding. They were amongst the other empty Poké Balls. Wasaki grabbed one of them, and opened it slowly to send out his starter.
A small fire monkey appeared. He stood on two small legs, his arms extended to a pair of very human looking hands, and instead of a tail there was a fire. His face had a tremendous smile extended across it, and his fur shaped into a single flame at the top.
Chimchar looked around instead of making any sounds, and felt as frightened as Wasaki did. “I’m scared as well,” Wasaki admitted. “But we can get through this together!”
Chimchar nodded and raised his right palm while making a sound of approval, and Wasaki gave Chimchar the high-five he was asking for. “Let’s go then,” He laughed nervously. “Wonder what awaits us.”
Wasaki put his backpack back on, and Chimchar climbed into the unzipped zipper, while keeping the top half of his body out, and putting his face over Wasaki’s left shoulder.
The friends walked on slowly, and two staircases on both sides met them, but they seemed to lead to the same platform. Wasaki put his foot on one, to check the stability, and as hard as he pushed, there was no sound. He climbed slowly. Taking five seconds for each step, making sure that it was safe.
Chimchar’s shivers could be felt through the bag, and he wasn’t to blame. The deadness of the mansion combined with the slowness of Wasaki’s moves made the atmosphere all that much creepier. Wasaki reconsidered fleeing, but he kept thinking of the girl that must be all alone, and probably afraid as well.
“Let’s talk Chimchar,” He said in an attempt to make the area seem livelier. “Do you remember when we first met?”
Chimchar nodded and recalled the day before Wasaki started his journey. Professor Rowan had been taking the starter Pokémon for a walk. Turtwig, the small grass Pokémon with the shell on his back munched on some flowers. Chimchar interacted with everything and everyone he saw. While Piplup, the blue penguin seemed sad about something.
“Cheer up, Piplup,” Rowan said. “We will find you another trainer.”
Chimchar was confused, but didn’t give much thought to the subject, as a trainer approached them. He was a dark skinned boy with short black hair, and his eyes were a very bright shade of green. A normal backpack rested on his shoulders. His outfit was composed of a long sleeved white shirt, blue jeans, and a band that spelled Wasaki on his right wrist.
“Wasaki,” Rowan said. “How are you?”
“Professor Rowan!” Wasaki seemed genuinely surprised. “What are you doing in Twinleaf? I’m supposed to come over tomorrow.”
“I was just taking these little guys for a walk, and I assumed that it was too dangerous for you to venture out on your own without a Pokémon, so I’ll give one of them to you right here.”
“You came all the way for me?” Wasaki laughed as Chimchar jumped onto his shoulders and played with him. “I don’t think there are any other trainers who are starting; I’ve asked everyone I know.”
“There is one other person,” Rowan said. “I believe his name was Noah.”
“Noah?” Wasaki’s face put on a surprised expression. “I would have never guessed. He rarely left his home after the incident with his father.” Before Rowan could ask any questions, Wasaki changed the subject. “Anyway, are these the starters? They all look so good, I want them all!”
Hope began to shine through Piplup’s entire body, as if he was shouting for Wasaki to pick him. “It seems that Chimchar is the one most outgoing, he would fit nicely with you.”
Piplup felt his entire world crash again, and in a fit of rage, ran away, only to crash into someone.
“If I see Noah, I may just give out the starters a day earlier,” Rowan laughed and turned to look at Piplup and Turtwig, but he noticed the missing water Pokémon and quickly traced the marks on the grass, to see him lying at the feet of someone very familiar. “What a coincidence! There he is now! Come here, Noah!”
This story will follow the same pattern as the other one, which is events and memories, but they won't be as sudden, as in this one the character is remembering willingly (most of the time) rather than being attacked by them, and some chapters might take place entirely in the past.
Enjoy. Constructive Criticism and reviews are always appreciated.
Index
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
1
“Please, just help me. That girl is all alone, and she might be in danger.”
“I don’t care! Why should I be bothered with helping kids get out of trouble? This is very typical of you! You just have to be the one that helps every single person in need! I’m sick of it, Wasaki!”
“Where did that come from?” Wasaki looked into Noah’s eyes, trying to convey his message over to him, but Noah had always been stubborn. Wasaki wanted to become his friend, but there was always some sort of wall that Noah had put up, and it blocked all of his attempts. “Look, just help me, please. You might just be the one that saves me if I get into trouble.”
“But you never do,” Noah said. “You were always the perfect kid.”
The pair was standing in front of an old building deep inside Eterna Forest. The exterior was made out of bricks, and vines were climbing them. Some parts of the windows were broken, and the front doors were half open, creaking, and moving with the slight change in wind.
“Are you too afraid?” Wasaki said, as a last attempt.
“No,” Noah replied. “I’m just busy, I want to go and get my next Badge, while you can stay here and chase imaginary girls.”
Noah turned before Wasaki could respond, and began walking away from his rival. It was frustrating for him. He didn’t view Noah as his rival, but rather someone who is on the same path. There is no reason as to why they shouldn’t help each other out. Their end goals for acquiring the Badges and defeating the Champion may be different, but the means are still the same; acquire the Badges and defeat the Champion.
But either way, he still had to see if that girl was safe. He had seen a small girl walking into the house before running into Noah, and pleaded for them to go in together, in order to form some kind of friendship, but it was in vain.
“I really wanted you to accompany me,” Wasaki shouted after the departing Noah. “We could have-“
Noah took a turn, disappearing behind the trees, and the sound of him running could be heard. Wasaki sighed, and placed his right palm on the door, pushing it gently. The creaking sent chills down his spine, and the cold air within gave him the feeling of emptiness.
“Come on, Wasaki,” He said to himself. “Don’t be afraid… That little girl might need you…”
He took several deep breaths, and walked. With each step, the floorboards lowered themselves and gave a creepy sound, and even though the carpet muffled it, the emptiness made it echo.
Then Wasaki looked down; there was no carpet. He felt dizzy, and thoughts of running out of the building ravaged his mind. The house was too empty and scary for him to venture on, and there was only one solution, to send out a Pokémon, and there none he trusted more than his starter, Chimchar.
He took off his backpack, and opened the Poké Balls pocket. There were four Poké Balls with hand drawn markings on them representing the Pokémon they were holding. They were amongst the other empty Poké Balls. Wasaki grabbed one of them, and opened it slowly to send out his starter.
A small fire monkey appeared. He stood on two small legs, his arms extended to a pair of very human looking hands, and instead of a tail there was a fire. His face had a tremendous smile extended across it, and his fur shaped into a single flame at the top.
Chimchar looked around instead of making any sounds, and felt as frightened as Wasaki did. “I’m scared as well,” Wasaki admitted. “But we can get through this together!”
Chimchar nodded and raised his right palm while making a sound of approval, and Wasaki gave Chimchar the high-five he was asking for. “Let’s go then,” He laughed nervously. “Wonder what awaits us.”
Wasaki put his backpack back on, and Chimchar climbed into the unzipped zipper, while keeping the top half of his body out, and putting his face over Wasaki’s left shoulder.
The friends walked on slowly, and two staircases on both sides met them, but they seemed to lead to the same platform. Wasaki put his foot on one, to check the stability, and as hard as he pushed, there was no sound. He climbed slowly. Taking five seconds for each step, making sure that it was safe.
Chimchar’s shivers could be felt through the bag, and he wasn’t to blame. The deadness of the mansion combined with the slowness of Wasaki’s moves made the atmosphere all that much creepier. Wasaki reconsidered fleeing, but he kept thinking of the girl that must be all alone, and probably afraid as well.
“Let’s talk Chimchar,” He said in an attempt to make the area seem livelier. “Do you remember when we first met?”
Chimchar nodded and recalled the day before Wasaki started his journey. Professor Rowan had been taking the starter Pokémon for a walk. Turtwig, the small grass Pokémon with the shell on his back munched on some flowers. Chimchar interacted with everything and everyone he saw. While Piplup, the blue penguin seemed sad about something.
“Cheer up, Piplup,” Rowan said. “We will find you another trainer.”
Chimchar was confused, but didn’t give much thought to the subject, as a trainer approached them. He was a dark skinned boy with short black hair, and his eyes were a very bright shade of green. A normal backpack rested on his shoulders. His outfit was composed of a long sleeved white shirt, blue jeans, and a band that spelled Wasaki on his right wrist.
“Wasaki,” Rowan said. “How are you?”
“Professor Rowan!” Wasaki seemed genuinely surprised. “What are you doing in Twinleaf? I’m supposed to come over tomorrow.”
“I was just taking these little guys for a walk, and I assumed that it was too dangerous for you to venture out on your own without a Pokémon, so I’ll give one of them to you right here.”
“You came all the way for me?” Wasaki laughed as Chimchar jumped onto his shoulders and played with him. “I don’t think there are any other trainers who are starting; I’ve asked everyone I know.”
“There is one other person,” Rowan said. “I believe his name was Noah.”
“Noah?” Wasaki’s face put on a surprised expression. “I would have never guessed. He rarely left his home after the incident with his father.” Before Rowan could ask any questions, Wasaki changed the subject. “Anyway, are these the starters? They all look so good, I want them all!”
Hope began to shine through Piplup’s entire body, as if he was shouting for Wasaki to pick him. “It seems that Chimchar is the one most outgoing, he would fit nicely with you.”
Piplup felt his entire world crash again, and in a fit of rage, ran away, only to crash into someone.
“If I see Noah, I may just give out the starters a day earlier,” Rowan laughed and turned to look at Piplup and Turtwig, but he noticed the missing water Pokémon and quickly traced the marks on the grass, to see him lying at the feet of someone very familiar. “What a coincidence! There he is now! Come here, Noah!”
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